PaRud OS: Laal Ishq

dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

beautifully os heart breaking at the end but then they were together in life and death well done thanks for the pm.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Rudra and Paro who had first met eachother in their childhood, had spent their next fourteen years in eachother's thoughts hoping to meet them someday.
Then, they met and recognized eachother, had been there for eachother and fallen in love in the circumstances which tagged them as enemies.
But love and fate can't be changed,
and as Rudra said they couldn't be separated and weren't either.
That was so beautifully written.
Loved it..<3

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Awesome OS...thanks for the PM

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

beautiful OS ..thanks for posting :)

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Beautiful n heart touching os...
Loved it very much

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

that was so heartbreaking knowing that they found each other after 14 years and now they died

brilliant piece of work

do PM with more of PaRud stories

love Ashish and Sanaya as Rudra and Paro

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: bebo2050
Now , that was one really long long os , but i loved it , i usually skip parts when their a long 😳, but this one i read the whole one coz each part was so good .
magar ek kostin , sad ending , why ? 😭

Haha, once I began there was no stopping! Plus I always love long updates so I hoped you guys would as well :)

It means a lot to know that you enjoyed my OS in its entirety! I truly understand the want to skip parts when the update is super long and just get to the good stuff, lol.

As for your kostin... I don't even know myself... With this story I kind of just kept writing. I wanted to change it once I was done, I despise sad endings, but nothing seemed right when I did try to change it... :(

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: prabha.abha
Its nice dear heart touching story

Thank you, truly. I am touched that you took the time to read my story and comment <3

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: anisa79
Beautiful OS, cant believe the ending :(

Honestly... Neither can I... But thank you for your comment :)

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: arshi_r_da_bst.
res. :-)
Oh my God, I'm crying..😭 Loved it. 😊
P.S. Thanks 4 the pm.. 😊

If my story really brought you to tears then I'm over the moon because I believe that when you smile or laugh out loud, cry, maybe even get angry when you're reading is the only time a story truly touches you. :)

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