PaRud OS: Laal Ishq - Page 3

Hi

Im so glad ur os is long
Iv loved it but the tragic ending
Was unexpected and soo sad :(
Nooo! They both died sob sob

I really liked how ur made positive changes
From the actual serial.

Ie dilsher encouraging rud to trust a woman.

Paro taking her cuz place in wedd is SOO in keeping
With her character.

A fabulous piece of long hard work.

Thank u

I love the way you write- The Rudra you've built up was so sweet, and I really really liked him. I like how you've made Dilsher teach him properly, instead of the way they had it in the show- the ending was so sad though. I wasn't expecting that!

That was one lovely emotional OS. Rudra's faith in Paro even after seeing in the wedding dress was touching. This was totally different Rudra and very sweet too.

Well written and several things stood out for me
1. Rudra is not such a dark character and comes across as a normal one with all warts
2. Dilsher is not as bitter as in the show and that again is probably the reason his son is also more balanced
3. Paro and Rudra are equals here and thats something I always like to read or watch
4. The brief encounter at childhood stays in their memory and becomes the catalyst for their union - well brought out
5. Sad ending but since this is a story and not going to happen on the show I reading enjoyed it
6. No Laila here - thank you - the current track is dangerously going downhill - hope the CVs pull it off well showing Paro to have some spunk - its ok to see a naive Paro at times but not a stupid one - how does a wife and an ex live under the same roof with the man and even shar the same bedroom albeit briefly? But then only in tv dramas ...sigh!

Now that was a really long os.

thank you for alerting me to this amazing piece. Its been very very much of a privilege to read such a long and well written and still ultimately tragic piece. Thanks for writing it and thank you for posting it all together so we can read it to the end and get the full effect.

love the os though sad that they died at such a young age.

wow! amazing OS! how did I miss this OS?? I come on RR forum DAILY and still missed it.

Now that what a called long OS...written beautifully...very heart wrenching story.