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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Unresed here, Navin Di!

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asmi279

@asmi279

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

It ws a long update...still I am craving fr more...u left it at such a cliffhanger...majorsaab's punishment..his turmoil...like paro, I m dying to find out his state of mind, to find out if he's ok..waiting fr him to cm to her so she cn soothe him..

gosh, hw do u do this? Make us feel the exact emotions they r gng thru js thru ur words..u hv a real gift n v r blessed that v gt to read ur awesome creations..hats off!!

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Hi!


Thanks for commenting--and no,the series is not finished--just Chapter 11 of the series (Repentance) is more or less done. I haven't actually done anything on their marriage yet--I'll do a Tomorrow portion one of these days, tying in a romantic wedding scene, as a surprise for everyone--and I promise Birla Master the Tailor will do a cameo! Paro's stay in the Haveli will absolutely have scenes used in future updates, her stay there is actually instrumental in Rudra's change towards her.

By the way-- thanks so much for TELLING me what you'd like to see in the future tracks and writings, it really really helps me decide what you guys will find interesting, and gives me direction--all of yo, please feel free to tell me what you'd like to read about, and i'll use as many reader demands as I can. I will incorporate things you want to see, and give it my twist.

-Navin

Hi navin, I can't wait for the rest of the series to unfold... Can u plz show their journey as a couple as well, the building of trust and companionship, a rocky start in the past to a stable present which leads to a very happy and secure future... Plz show paro's reluctance to accept this new phase of her life and how they put the ghosts of their past to rest bcz what she has gone through bcz of Rudra OS not at all easy to forget and it's nearly impossible to fall head over heels in love with someone like him... Moreover it would be hard for Rudra to have a normal marriage with Parvati considering what he made her go through, to share physical intimacy with her would be extremely uncomfortable for Rudra as well bcz her body will bear all the marks of his ruthlessness, so yeah I would love to read this aspect of their life from your pen bcz I know u will do true justice to it, so plz write on this as well.

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Flash90

@flash90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

👏👏👏

How do you write so beautifully??

"A dove he had bloodied was trying to shield him with the wings he had broken."

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful words...

Somehow your words always give a glimpse to the soul of the characters.

Paro,the naive yet determined girl actually forgot all the injuries and pain inflicted on her just by seeing blood on her jallad's hand. How could paro have reacted differently? that care and concern is hardwired into her system

And rudra...he repents like how a man should..He goes down on his knees,but never asks for forgiveness because he knows he doesnt deserve it...Sometimes an apology doesnt make things alright...

Once again..👏

P.S I'm not good at writing comments, this is my longest ever,so any misatkes, plzz bear with me

P.P.S Eagerly waiting for your next one.

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

awesome... u captured their suffering so well...

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Omg it was beautifully written - u are a fantastic writer! :)

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liya96

@liya96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

your writing should be applauded.. So good! :)

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Navin!!!! As a recent and wordy commenter, I have a question -> would you prefer gushing and constructive feedback? or list of demands and the previous three? or some other strange combination? 😃

I just want to make sure my comments are serving some purpose/making you happy. Ta!

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shirinfarhaad

@shirinfarhaad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Goose bumps, I still have them, your writing takes the reader in their lives. We can see them clearly through your writing, be it consciously or sub consciously. Again a big salute to your writing and ofcourse I am very thankful for your updates!!!!! You are an amazing writer!

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

I don't have words to say how much I enjoy reading your work. Truly wonderful. Paro's character is really great. As you said she is truly a different species. Rudra was right giving death to Khan was a gift, and Rudra's punishment is much more and for lifelong. Every time he sees the marks on her body he will be reminded of his brutality.

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