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BondJ007

@BondJ007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

I am rendered speechless.

Paro's innate goodness and the Jallad's shades of grey-potrayed in a most perfect way.

"A dove he had bloodied was trying to shield him with the wings he had broken."

-Absolutely beautiful. Rudra's inner turmoil,his repentance is made clear as day.

Phenomenal.

Edited by BondJ007 - 11 years ago

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

unresed here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105579127

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

just read this entire mindblowing series of OS's. Rudra is such a complex character and Paro is so enduring. What does he mean about his punishment? I guess his guilt is a punishment worse than death...coz his guilt is causing him to die every day

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

i don't watch this show,just read from time to time written updates,but reading your story is far far away a better show for my mind and heart.is like a good movie ,with an excellent director , on his glowing road to Oscar stage.imagine all those people applauding you,right now!👏

thank you for pm😳

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Navin

@napstermonster

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Payali09
Navin!!!! As a recent and wordy commenter, I have a question -> would you prefer gushing and constructive feedback? or list of demands and the previous three? or some other strange combination? 😃

I just want to make sure my comments are serving some purpose/making you happy. Ta!

Your incredible, detailed and meaningful feedback makes me smile like a loon, walk around in a daze, drag my husband to my laptop to read what my friend Payal wrote about my writing, then smile some more because you GOT what I was trying to say. Then I re-read what you have said, nodding thoughtfully, wishing I could have you over for coffee 'cause you are such a sweetheart. So you write whatever the hell you want to write, and I'll read it and be happy--your feedback gives me a lot to ponder on, and you are thoroughly honest and also intuitive. Its like you took a master class in being the perfect reader. I love that you are reading my work. Sometimes I recheck to see if you've read a post yet, so I can hover anxiously wondering what you think. Bas. Bol diya.

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Your incredible, detailed and meaningful feedback makes me smile like a loon, walk around in a daze, drag my husband to my laptop to read what my friend Payal wrote about my writing, then smile some more because you GOT what I was trying to say. Then I re-read what you have said, nodding thoughtfully, wishing I could have you over for coffee 'cause you are such a sweetheart. So you write whatever the hell you want to write, and I'll read it and be happy--your feedback gives me a lot to ponder on, and you are thoroughly honest and also intuitive. Its like you took a master class in being the perfect reader. I love that you are reading my work. Sometimes I recheck to see if you've read a post yet, so I can hover anxiously wondering what you think. Bas. Bol diya.

Really?!?!?!?! ☺️ I have to gif this because words really aren't enough sometimes!

That was my literal reaction (although mainly internally cause I was in class) whilst reading your reply.

My lecturer must have thought, I either:

a) had lost my mind

b) was really into the subject, or

c) high on something

because people don't normally sit in a lecture on regression with the biggest grins on their face 😆

I was a bit worried that I was chewing up thread space going on and on about things and you would be wondering 'what the hell is this girl writing' and that I was perhaps slightly insane. Which I totally am -> slightly insane 😛

I'm so happy that my comments make you happy like your stories make me happy!

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

I only have these words - WOW just WOW! I had goosebumps reading the downfall of Major SAAB. This was just incredible. Keep going! Love this series to bits

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Phenomenal update ! I could feel Rudra's pain and Paro's pure heart as if they are tangible things.

Thanks for the wonderful update and waiting desperately for the next.

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

this whole parts all the 4 in these series have been intense.. loved how u did justice to both the characters.. loved the whole scene of how paro tends to his injury.. looking forward for more..

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ek_haseena_thi

@ek_haseena_thi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

who are u the writter of perfection m i rite? from ipkknd with arnav kushi? why u dont finish your story perfection? i was addict to that story. u shld writte on perfection only and then rr, not do rr only like now. i say u shld listen to ur fans.

pls i request to u pls dont write here but go write for perfection only u will get ur fans very happy I post this msg on ur other wittings too. stop writting on rr only, ps msg me. rr has less fans but pkknd has many fans from world over. i am again requestin you to consider pls.

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