Parud One Shot---THIRST (New--22nd March)

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it has definitely given me some peace, napster...i am frustrated..period..i have come across tonnes of posts stating how rudra's behavior, as a son, is justified..i'm not questioning that..but what has left me irritated is that he has not tried to carefully see the facts and then draw a conclusion..at least this is what i felt after watching the precap...and yes if you ask me mythili is a bitch...i have been pissed off with her since the slapgate fiasco, where she refused to even acknowledge paro the next morning even after the latter stood up for her (even her husband kept mum) the previous night...

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

The precap scene was as disturbing to me as it was to you, and this OS brings me immense mental peace. Firat of all, thanks for that!! 🤗
What an amazing story that was, napster baisa! This is the first time that I'm reading one of your writings, and it's just too beautiful for words 👏 And I even loved It more coz I really love the parts where Rudra hurts Paro (call me a sadist if u want but I just love hurt-redemption tracks 😆 ) And Paro leaving Rudra, I wish to see that part in the show too, juat to see how his emotions play out, his longing for her, his eagerness to see the girl again. Why can't you be the CV??? *sigh*

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

You cannot possibly leave tjis as a one shot! My sunday looms ahead of me, terrifying in its sense of loss and longing! Ok, so ILike hyperbole. What will the Jallad do now that Paro has gone?

This bewakoof ladki...

Who defended her sister in law twice..

Who ran to help the old man with the inhaler, blowing her cover

Who came back to seemingly save her village

Who cried when she saw the incoherently pleading letters of a young lad for his missing mother

Who tried to apply haldi on the scratched face of a man who took a slap for her

Who went through somuch torture, still had compassion,

Is she bewakoof enough to disappear now?

Napster, you cannot, simply cannot leave this in this way! Rudra got some closure with his father, but not eith Paro. And your readers sure as hell havent ... Please continue...or another os...

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1sarun

@1sarun

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing! You've just made my weekend with magical weaving of words. I wish something like this happens on screen.
Now with the spoiler that Paro would be in hospital with Dilsher in disguise, this story could as well fit it when Paro is revealed to Rudra later on.

Edited by Malini1 - 11 years ago

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shirinfarhaad

@shirinfarhaad

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It was just brilliant!!! Didn't I tell you before, what you write in your short version of Paro and Rudra's tale, we want the story to go that way, at least I do. I think all of us who watches the drama wants all the good stuff(Paro and Rudra together without any misunderstanding while the rest can have all the MUs in the world) and the MUs between these two lovebirds makes us go crazy. So thank you for an amazing piece, I will try to picture this OS in my mind for the rest of the weekend instead of the real precap

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Lovely... Awesome works... 👏

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pkaps

@pkaps

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

very emotional...loved it!!

is there a part 2

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shilpa

@mrsp

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Another piece of absolutely brilliant writing.The pain felt by Rudra waved over me and I felt his despair and rage.But you have got Paros strenght and giving nature perfectly.She knows that Rudra needs to snap out of his despair by lashing out and she is willing to be a catalyst even if she is humiliated.My heart ached and then rejoiced at the father son reunion.You describe their relationship to a tee.Please wtite another piece so that we can see that Rudra comes to the realisation that Paro is his redmption.I hope you publish your work some day as others should have the pleasure of this wonderful emotive writing.You are immensely talented.

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This was heart wrenching. Beautifully written. She stayed behind to support him regardless of who or what they were saying. Paro's infinite goodness lays in the fact that she would never hurt someone intentionally and bringing both father and son together shows just how much both mean to her. This would be her way of mending the thread she thought she'd snapped when she left with Thakur sa. As for Rudra's..he's still the hurt young boy looking for love...not realising it's always been there in the form of his sarcastic, gruff speaking Ranawat.

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Thank you for this Napster...this definitely gave me peace.
I was so relieved when Rudra finally accepted the third glass of water from Paro. Dilsher and Rudra, Dilsher and Paro...they have a beautiful connection which you showed so well here. Loved it.

Maithili...hmm...I actually don't care much about what she thinks. She is a normal human being very much influenced by the happenings in her surroundings. She may believe that Paro has set fire to Dilsher's room...but she won't harm Paro in any way. Paro might miss the sisterly bond but what she now needs is trust and acceptance from Rudra and nothing else.

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