Parud One Shot---THIRST (New--22nd March)

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

That was beautiful :) In my eyes, this is the best way the story should move forward; I actually really want Paro to go back and sort things out with her mamisa after this whole MU is over. But of course, the cv's will do what they want 🤔

Lovely writing!

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I truly hope that Dilsher acts the way he did in this- that he trusts Parvati. Because honestly, the idea that she would attempt to burn him after her relationship is absolutely ridiculous- I'm willing to wait for the track to unfold to see, but I don't have many expectations, knowing Indian TV shows.

That being said- My favorite line was this one: "She had lost her own so long ago, he was a man made of mist and echoes, when she thought of him all that came to her was a memory of a deep laugh and a caressing touch across her face. She recalled the smell of tobacco, the glowing tip held between rough fingers--the beedis he had liked to smoke"

You have an insane talent for being able to bring your words to life. The imagery in your writing is absolutely phenomenal- I'm always in awe. The emotions are supported by such brilliant settings that are wonderfully described. Amazing oneshot, Napster- absolutely amazing. You should write for RR instead 😆

Edited by likeadesigirl - 11 years ago

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

People! Forumwasis! ladies and (one!) Gentleman!

Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I was overwhelmed by how many of you felt exactly like me this weekend-- DEPRESSED. I'm glad this One Shot helped at least to give an alternative story line to the misunderstanding, and to the characters we love.

Now--this was always supposed to be a ONE shot, as in, just this piece and no other. But I have a question--I have a (really vague) idea for this, just one more part, about Rudra / Parvati, but several of you have PMed me saying you like the open-ended aspect of this-while some of you want, I quote..."MORE MORE MORE" 😆.

So--which update do you want ? The Yesterday and Tomorrow one (Forgiveness) which is all dark and twisted and full of violence and passion, or this one, which is gentle and kind of soothing? So---an update which carries the Yesterday/Tomorrow story line forward, or one more shot of this one?

Horrible weekend schedule means I'm carving out time for ONE more update this weekend---which one it will be I leave upto you guys! Please let me know,and keep commenting, so I know which one to work on!

PS--"BOTH Navin! GET TO WRITING!!!" is not an option, baisas!

Edited by napstermonster - 11 years ago

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: napstermonster
People! Forumwasis! ladies and (one!) Gentleman!

Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I was overwhelmed by how many of you felt exactly like me this weekend-- DEPRESSED. I'm glad this One Shot helped at least to give an alternative story line to the misunderstanding, and to the characters we love.

Now--this was always supposed to be a ONE shot, as in, just this piece and no other. But I have a question--I have a (really vague) idea for this, just one more part, about Rudra / Parvati, but several of you have PMed me saying you like the open-ended aspect of this-while some of you want, I quote..."MORE MORE MORE" 😆.

So--which update do you want ? The Yesterday and Tomorrow one (Forgiveness) which is all dark and twisted and full of violence and passion, or this one, which is gentle and kind of soothing? So---an update which carries the Yesterday/Tomorrow story line forward, or one more shot of this one?

Horrible weekend schedule means I'm carving out time for ONE more update this weekend---which one it will be I leave upto you guys! Please let me know,and keep commenting, so I know which one to work on!

PS--"BOTH Navin! GET TO WRITING!!!" is not an option, baisas!

Why not both! Ok ok ... First this one, then forgiveness!

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ddsoaps

@ddsoaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

@TM,,,,what a touching, emotional ride this was...my eyes are glistened with tears as I hit the keyboard.

Thank you...I am sure just writing it made you every emotional...its not easy...such an amazing piece of work...

Thank you once again!🤗🤗

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DiyaS

@DiyaS

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Thank you! This was balm for my soul after the precap on Friday. I know Rudra is under stress, I think it might even be a plan of his ... but the way the entire family turned on Paro, broke my heart.

Beautifully written ... loved the father-son bond ... and loved the way you wrote Paro's thoughts at the end. I'm glad she went away, disappeared ... she needs to be away from Rudra for some time, for him to cool down and see things clearly.

Please write the update to this one this weekend ... a gentle soothing update is exactly what I'm in the mood for.

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ReeDa14

@ReeDa14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wonderfully written👏!

(Wrist hurting scene was a lil disturbing)

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: napstermonster
People! Forumwasis! ladies and (one!) Gentleman!

Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I was overwhelmed by how many of you felt exactly like me this weekend-- DEPRESSED. I'm glad this One Shot helped at least to give an alternative story line to the misunderstanding, and to the characters we love.

Now--this was always supposed to be a ONE shot, as in, just this piece and no other. But I have a question--I have a (really vague) idea for this, just one more part, about Rudra / Parvati, but several of you have PMed me saying you like the open-ended aspect of this-while some of you want, I quote..."MORE MORE MORE" 😆.

So--which update do you want ? The Yesterday and Tomorrow one (Forgiveness) which is all dark and twisted and full of violence and passion, or this one, which is gentle and kind of soothing? So---an update which carries the Yesterday/Tomorrow story line forward, or one more shot of this one?

Horrible weekend schedule means I'm carving out time for ONE more update this weekend---which one it will be I leave upto you guys! Please let me know,and keep commenting, so I know which one to work on!

PS--"BOTH Navin! GET TO WRITING!!!" is not an option, baisas!

Listen listen! Write whichever you think has a STRONG Rudra angle. The better one. The one that redeems him. 😆

Just write yaar... please.