OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content*

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

You left me crying again. The last part was so... heartbreaking! Wish you were a writer for the show itself

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Here is another epithet for the Jallad! The big lug!

Typical male! Wanted to throw him a sucker punch! But then... He is the

Jallad after all! Even poor Paro cannot stay angry!

I really like the way that Paro's inherent goodness and nobility of spirit is brought out. And yes, just because some cry easily, doesn't mean that they are not strong inside! This girl is pure hearted, and has never lied to herself.

You do realise that this series is taking Paro and Rudra several notches above the actual show?

I wait eveyday for updates😭

Thanks for a bang up start to the weekend!

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

😛😛😛😛 Enjoyed it so much! I get chills reading your Yesterday and Tomorrows.

This was a nice change of pace and nice insight on the Jallad and his need for acceptance by his prisoner.

Again another great piece of writing.

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awww. That was just beautiful. Loved how he was trying to sooth her with his reasons. Roll on tomorrow...

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MaroRudra

@MaroRudra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

I love that you update so regularly, thank you! Loved the update too as usual.

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I like how you show Rudra's inner thoughts, and how he regrets his treatment of Paro. I also like that you depict the awkward way he comforts, showing his lack of social skill, but that he cares enough to do it.

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

That was very insightful into "Jallad" character - he's alreabdy falling for her; behaving like a child; wanted her to choose him to spend the time at Mela!

The combing of hair was a very private moment b/w them - beautifully written.

-Sona

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Sooo good. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The way he comforted her and made her agree to go with him was so sweet.

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Beautifully written ...
Love the way he soothed Parvati afterwards !!
The hair combing scene was subtly sensuous !!
This series of yours is like an addiction ..
I love this little sofented yet obsessively possessive Rudra who handles his Parvati like a frigalie porcelain doll she is over the uber dark utterly ruthless Rudra of your prisoner series ...