OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content*

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

i went all awww after going through this...i LOVE rudra..period..give me any version of this man...but this rudra was something else altogether...i'm now eagerly waiting for the tomorrow part..😃

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shirinfarhaad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Excellent!!!! I loved it, the 180 degree change in Rudra after Paro's anguish was awesome. Finally he learnt to sooth her. thank you so much!!!!

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

hi...this part was sweet and light...as u had said in the note...😊..waiting for the next part...

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1sarun

@1sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awesome piece of writing, doing a great job with this series. Loving your Paro and Jhallad.

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jisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

loved it...!!!
loved this jallad...
w8ng for tomorrow...!!

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Aparna Gopal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Wow... i liked this os more than others..

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shruathi

@shruathi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

u are absolutely brilliant...how i wish you were asli writer of the asli show:)

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: BondJ007
Beautifully written.
And I love how the Rudra of Yesterday now resembles the Rudra of your previous Tomorrows,if that makes any sense.

yes yes, I was thinking of the same thing exactly !

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Loved this update N!

Major's obsession with paro seemd downright obsessive which in reality would border on madness but when it comes to this couple, and with the way this story progressed, the way he explained you almost forgive him in th end with a goofy smile on your face!!

Stockholm syndrome kicking in for Paro here?? So this is where her hatred for Jallad started to fade away?