OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Fears (completed)

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kirti98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I luv ur writing s. Keep up the good work. 😊

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Love it, can't wait for the next part! It's really exciting and I feel like I'm watching it, your stories and descriptions of PaRud are just genius! 👏

Now please hurry up with the next parts, I'm checking RR forum like an addict to see if you've updated! 😆

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Shirinfarhad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

hey!

I am fairly new to this but your writing is amazing. The way you describe all the characters, their love, their emotions and their fear of losing that love is just perfect. when you write it seems we as am audience of that particular show can read stuff in your story which we want the writers to show in the serial but for some reason instead of them showing us what we want, you write them for us to read and enjoy!!! Thank you so much, we really appreciate, keep them coming!!!!!

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Navin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Shirinfarhad
hey!
I am fairly new to this but your writing is amazing. The way you describe all the characters, their love, their emotions and their fear of losing that love is just perfect. when you write it seems we as am audience of that particular show can read stuff in your story which we want the writers to show in the serial but for some reason instead of them showing us what we want, you write them for us to read and enjoy!!! Thank you so much, we really appreciate, keep them coming!!!!!

I'm so touched--I noticed that this is your first ever post on IF according to your post list, and you chose to comment on my writing! I am really honored! Welcome to the RangRasiya forum, and I hope you'll join in one the myriad discussions and jokes as well! And stay tuned, Part 2 of this (Tomorrow) will be posted as well, on this thread.

Napstermonster

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Napster,

Stalking stalking ...walking it off, checking again nothing .. waiting waiting 😭

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dreamwinner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

So wen ru posting the 2nd part of this os

U can nap after posting the 2nd part

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Tvbug2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Absolutely lovely!! Loved that you took the previous story further to this take on the hospital scene, loved Rudra's characterisation, and the CO's too. Loved Rudra's tone, the humour and the ending. Waiting for the next YT.