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smitar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Wah. That was beautifully intense

Beautiful, darl! The pain, the anxiety, the relief, the torture, all of them so vividly portrayed.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That was sooo perfect! :D

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Jasmin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

That was sooo good! So intense!

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

oooh god ! kya mast writing hai...the words played in front of my eyes like a movie !! wonderful, just wonderful !!👏

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Angels11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Finally Paro found out bt Takur's betrayal!

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jisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

this was amazing...!!!
parvati's turmoil...
rudra's word
i was reading n imagining the last scene where they both were sitting...
i would love to see that on show...
that will be truly amazing..!!!

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

superb..👏..looking forward to read more on the yesterday-tomorrow series...

Edited by shagun-rocks - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

amazing...the way the roles of protector/prisoner were reversed is a masterstroke...👏

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Tvbug2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Lovely, Tomorrow!! More than fulfilling the promise of Yesterday. Loved the twist, the crisp sentences, the words, the ending...👏👏

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hi what is ur name?😊...well I have read till chapter 2 of Yesterday n Tomorrow..n it was fabulous..The narration style is simply unique without any confusions..Visualizations are very wel done..Tomorrows do a magical work on the dark n sadistic Yesterdays...Great work👏👏

Hi!

I'm Navin, thanks for asking. I actually think you are the first reader who's ever asked me my real name! If anyone knows it on IF, its from PMs from my IPKKND days, and not too many people asked even then!

Anyway, I'm glad you are reading the Yesterday/Tomorrow series. I really hope you'll like them, as you go through them. Yes, as you noticed the Yesterdays are dark, but I'm hoping that the Tomorrows work as enough of a light, happy parallel to those images to work for everyone.

Honestly, this RR serial so far has been pretty dark, so even for my own enjoyment's sake, I like the lighter Tomorrows, but to be fair, I think the higher the contrast, the more the fun! Comment and let me know what you think of this one (Protector) , in it the Yesterday isn't exactly dark as much as intense, and the Tomorrow, again, isnt sweet as the other ones.

Enjoy!

Napstermonster

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