OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Protector (completed)

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

What an intense OS, just absolutely loved it .
Eagerly waiting for next part

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow...awesomely written...eagerly waiting for the next update...😊

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing story

Now waiting for tomorrow

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Superb! but then you are such a good writer...

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maryam

@Audrey.h.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Oh soo protective 😳 great one shot as always :)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Napster ji this is very well written. No awaiting tomorrow version of the events.

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Your stories are so good...waiting for 'Tomorrow'

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Exprimere
Was waiting for your update. It's been long since your last.
Eagerly waiting for "Tomorrow".

The highlight of this (and all other Y&T OS's) is the nuanced fleshing out of Parvati"s character. You accounted for both Rudra and Paro's perspectives without a dialogue, only the common thread of the General linking them. Very skilfully done.

I have always been a fan of your stories right since the days of the-show-that-must-not-be-named.

Hope you update soon!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the story so far, and as i LOVE your own posts and never miss a chance to read them, I'm doubly glad you took the time to comment! Stay tuned for Tomorrow..