OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Protector (completed)

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Omg poor Rudra. aaw paro is his saviour

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Role reversal FTW! The protector becomes the protected and the protected becomes the protector!

Beautiful OS, Navin 😃

The silent and vigilant protector that appears out of nowhere and smashes through young jawans

I love how you made that awareness that Paro of his apparent in her feelings of unease and smothering. Threatened and anxious...did she know that the long shadow being cast by him was to protect her and not to smother her? When Rudra's obsession is wanted than it is a comforting cocoon but when unwanted than it becomes a straitjacket...

And I love how you captured Paro's tumultuous feelings and her confusion. So wrapped up in the storm of it that she almost reacted instinctively to the situation...choosing to ignore the chaos of her thoughts and emotions and choosing to run to him and save him.

The two of them huddled together waiting to be saved or killed is a stunning moment. Two people waiting for life or for death. All the confusion, all the past, everything but their need to protect each other put aside. Beautiful!