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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

He may be battered and bruised but this was a perfect ending. Loved the fact that Paro was the one to rescue him. Fabulously written. Look forward to reading many many more *hint hint* 😉

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Roshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Absolutely amazing tomorrow.

So loving this.

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

wow - that was emotionally drenching update with both of them taking such high risks.

Paro acknowledging in her mind what he means to her. can't wait for Rudra to have similar revelation...

-Sona

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Exprimere
Was waiting for your update. It's been long since your last.

Eagerly waiting for "Tomorrow".

The highlight of this (and all other Y&T OS's) is the nuanced fleshing out of Parvati"s character. You accounted for both Rudra and Paro's perspectives without a dialogue, only the common thread of the General linking them. Very skilfully done.

I have always been a fan of your stories right since the days of the-show-that-must-not-be-named.

Hope you update soon!

Thanks for your insightful comments! I'm intrigued that you might be an old reader/friend-- Any chance that this is Expelliarmus?

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Sidda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow, this is a fabulous OS!

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

You are a monster indeed ..with your writng. At the cost of sounding redundant - very well written in touch with the emotional turmoil of the Rudra & Paro. I think your best Yday &Trow chapter so far.

P.S: the talented writers here make me feel quite inadequate. 😭

Edited by DDC1 - 11 years ago

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Thanks for the update.

No wonder that Parvati was feeling his presence. Because he was always was there for her.

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

And it was that precise moment when Paro fell into the chasm that was Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat, BSD, Indian Army, Serial Number 543876.

Masha Allah!👏

I have stalked your OSes for the past 1.5 hours.

Please accept my best compliments!

You write your stories in the fast paced, descriptive style that makes novels unputdownable! 😆

Loved the hell out of every single one!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Ah I was right! You did weave a story through the Yesterdays and the Tomorrows to bridge the gap between the two and it was done so beautifully! They have become each other's protector and even each other's prisoner in a sense...beautiful.

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Terrific! I can't stop reading!!!

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