FF Pyaar - part 37 page 109 ( 24/09

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

awesome update
loved the shanak conv
poor RLB the whole world is after them
i just wish he talks to his dad tomorrow it getting really tough for khanak
and then jaanvi and nidhi are teasing her endlessly
jaanvi is really happy and its cute how she is in dreamland all the time
hmm actually they went to date in pune... start to wahin hua sab
they way u've penned is super cute
loved it
update soon

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Thanks a ton for the wonderful update Heer

it was truly an awesome read for me, 😃 loved Loved Loved the Update Dear 👏 ...Beautifully Written 👏

Shaan called Khanak & Nidhi recived call thinking it was her cell phone & Shaan cut the call after listening to her voice Saying Wrong number. 😛 poor shaan desparetly wanted to talk to his jaan but yaha toh puri duniya dushman bani baithi hain uski 😆 he called for the second time & loved the way Nidhi teased him poor guy right number lagaya tha phir bhi baat nahi ho payi 😆 Khanak was sitting with both the girls so she cut the call after formal exchange of work 😛

Loved the way Khanak excused herslef to sleep in a differnt room so that she can talk to shaan there 😃 loved the teasing session between girls. it was Super cuteee 😃 Khanak called Shaan & shaan gave irritated reply as he was in Deep Sleep 😆 i was like phas gaya bacchu ab toh 😛 but time pe shaan ne baat sambhal li 😆 loved their cute convo discribed by you 👏 wonderful !!! dear ...loved it totally.

Nidhi is another chipku sach mein ...riya gayi toh yeh madam aayi 😛 lol i know she knows about shanak but timing badi galat hain bandi ki 😛 loved the way she told khanak about Jhanvi 😆 hilarious saccchiii 😆 but it made distubance in Shaan's call Shaan enjoyed Khanak's situation & khanak got irritated 😛 loved the way she teased Shaan about going on date with Raj ...bechaara Shaan 😆 the best part was when khanak said she had been to date & long drive, i can so imagine Shaan's expression 😆 excellent dear ...uff jitna likhu utna kum hain ...had a great time reading this part. 😃

Khanak ka kumble ke neeche chup ke baat karna & teasing shaan with the name of raj but yaha toh nidhi madam ki sitti pitti gum ho gayi 😆

Awesome !!! Awesomeee

Waiting for next ...Continue soon 😃

Love

Pranjal.

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Mounika

@ktym

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

lovely update heer...

khanak is trying to pull shaan's legs...😆

awesome...

waiting for the next...

update soon...

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: aasma1
Loved the updte...

Thanx Aasma 😊

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: niki_rbo
hey heer update is lovely...nice nidhi knows the truth...sweet and hot update yaar..nice..keep going man...

Thanx Nkki 😊for taking time to read and leaving ur comment

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: suchi_245
Hey

loved loved loved it
beautifully written

shaan called khanak but her mobile is with nidhi and shaan cut d call saying it as wrong number
nidhi then realised that its not her and again phone ring., this time nidhi saw d id and attended d call saying that its she and started flirting with him making khanak jealous

khanak moved out of jhanvi's room making an excuse and called shaan who was in sleep but hearing her voice all sleep went for a toss and they talked and teased each other

again this nosy nidhi came and disturbed RLB's aur burthul shaan bas sabko dekhta he rah jayega kuch karega nai :|

lol, janvi was lovy dovy with nidhi thinking her as romit and nidhi then ran away thinking that what will happen with her whole night , if she stays more, rofl
yeh dono janvi and romit saamne ladte hai aur bas sapno mein he pyaar karte hai , lol

nidhi teased khanak taking raj name and khanak too supported her to tease shaan, nidhi was taken aback thinking about whats going on , lol

waiting for shanak date and long drive without disturbance

continue soon

love u

Thanx Suchi😃 yeah shaan thought its wrong number n cut the call 😆 burthal Poor shaan phone peh bhi use chen nahi hai and Janvi dreams disturb him every time, khanak make shaan J to tease him Thanx for loving Suchi😃

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: -pranjal-
Awesomeee Heer !!!

lovd loved loved loved the updates 👏...i am still catching up with it, but the way you have written it is extremely cute & Superb, 😃

Shanak are super cute & yeh kya family ab tak tang kar rahi hain bechaaron ko 😛 ...LOL i am scared kahi is nautanki ke chakkar mein Raj ki band na baja de shaan, 😆 janvi is enjoying their situation too much sacchi 😆 but frankly i am enjoying this too 😆

Shanak really loves each other a lot lekin shaadi ki wagah se bechare RLB's juda juda hain 😆 but the moments discribed by you of their closeness & chupke chupke meets were really exciting & cute dear 😃lovd the discribtion of functions too 👏 Specially Song & khanaks Dance 😉 Shaan miya toh lattu ho gaye 😛 but yeh kya yaha janvi ki Sis shaan pe lattu ho gayi 😆

the whole stuation & khanaks expression while teasing Janvi about her raj kumar was ROFLIng yaar 😆 poor girl use kya pata yeh shaan pe marne lagi hain aur woh khud hi feelings ko hawa de rahi hain 😆 the best part was khanak's expression when nidhi took Shaan's name ...OMG it was so hilarious ki kya batau 😆 i really had a great time while reading it.

lekin Shaan ki toh band bajane nikli thi hamari jhasi ki rani but Shaan's sweet talks really melted her & i just loved the way you have written that 👏 So sooo sooo sooo cute. So now on more member knows about them Nidhi.😃 i am enjoying their situation, poor shanak hide behind curtains but janvi saw them from mirror & started teasing them using raj's name ...God loved shaan's iritation there 😆

Ohhh poor shaan bechara khanak se juda juda sa as she is staying at Janvi's place & he had to go home...loved that scene ...you have discribed it sooo cutely 👏

i am just loving this...i saw you have updated new part 😃

yet to catch up dear ...will comment soon on ...will be back 😃

thanks for awesomeee updates heer ...missed reading it 😃

love
Pranjal.

Miss u so much Pranjal. welcome back🤗 🤗 loved ur comment as usual i loved, i loved it, i loved it. u read all missing part thank u so much and ur detail for every part is awesome i loved it, was grinning read ur feed back 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃, yes now for few days khanak will leave at Janvi's place and shaan is very annoyed but he finds his ways to meet his sweetheart kabhi raat koh pipe peh charjata hai aur phir curtain keh piche chupjata hai but he was caught by Janvi n Romit and they started teasing him 😆 😆 i love writing this state of shaan 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 and his dialogues thanks a lot for reading the parts u missed, Looking forward for more feed back of this tale 😊

Laods of love n hugss 🤗 🤗