FF Pyaar - part 37 page 109 ( 24/09

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niki_rbo

@niki_rbo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

hey heer update is lovely...nice nidhi knows the truth...sweet and hot update yaar..nice..keep going man...

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Hey

loved loved loved it
beautifully written

shaan called khanak but her mobile is with nidhi and shaan cut d call saying it as wrong number
nidhi then realised that its not her and again phone ring., this time nidhi saw d id and attended d call saying that its she and started flirting with him making khanak jealous

khanak moved out of jhanvi's room making an excuse and called shaan who was in sleep but hearing her voice all sleep went for a toss and they talked and teased each other

again this nosy nidhi came and disturbed RLB's aur burthul shaan bas sabko dekhta he rah jayega kuch karega nai :|

lol, janvi was lovy dovy with nidhi thinking her as romit and nidhi then ran away thinking that what will happen with her whole night , if she stays more, rofl
yeh dono janvi and romit saamne ladte hai aur bas sapno mein he pyaar karte hai , lol

nidhi teased khanak taking raj name and khanak too supported her to tease shaan, nidhi was taken aback thinking about whats going on , lol

waiting for shanak date and long drive without disturbance

continue soon

love u

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Awesomeee Heer !!!

lovd loved loved loved the updates 👏...i am still catching up with it, but the way you have written it is extremely cute & Superb, 😃

Shanak are super cute & yeh kya family ab tak tang kar rahi hain bechaaron ko 😛 ...LOL i am scared kahi is nautanki ke chakkar mein Raj ki band na baja de shaan, 😆 janvi is enjoying their situation too much sacchi 😆 but frankly i am enjoying this too 😆

Shanak really loves each other a lot lekin shaadi ki wagah se bechare RLB's juda juda hain 😆 but the moments discribed by you of their closeness & chupke chupke meets were really exciting & cute dear 😃lovd the discribtion of functions too 👏 Specially Song & khanaks Dance 😉 Shaan miya toh lattu ho gaye 😛 but yeh kya yaha janvi ki Sis shaan pe lattu ho gayi 😆

the whole stuation & khanaks expression while teasing Janvi about her raj kumar was ROFLIng yaar 😆 poor girl use kya pata yeh shaan pe marne lagi hain aur woh khud hi feelings ko hawa de rahi hain 😆 the best part was khanak's expression when nidhi took Shaan's name ...OMG it was so hilarious ki kya batau 😆 i really had a great time while reading it.

lekin Shaan ki toh band bajane nikli thi hamari jhasi ki rani but Shaan's sweet talks really melted her & i just loved the way you have written that 👏 So sooo sooo sooo cute. So now on more member knows about them Nidhi.😃 i am enjoying their situation, poor shanak hide behind curtains but janvi saw them from mirror & started teasing them using raj's name ...God loved shaan's iritation there 😆

Ohhh poor shaan bechara khanak se juda juda sa as she is staying at Janvi's place & he had to go home...loved that scene ...you have discribed it sooo cutely 👏

i am just loving this...i saw you have updated new part 😃

yet to catch up dear ...will comment soon on ...will be back 😃

thanks for awesomeee updates heer ...missed reading it 😃

love

Pranjal.

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ONAego

@ONAego

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Lovely update😃
Trio convo was superb😆
Loved shanak convo very much😳
Update soon... heer🤗

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

awww aaj toh pura phone conv tha so sweet tha loved it :)

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

loved it heer..

awee shank ho koi akele ni chodta...

wats gonna happ nxt update sooon...

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Wow!!!👏 Awesome!!! Loved everything..😃 Awww!!! Nidhi took Khanak's phone thinking its her..Again Shaan called and she took it..😆good she is sleeping in another room..always some or other people disrupting ShaNak.. Now Shaan's turn to ask who while taking the phone in sleep..😆yep..Shaan needs to tell his dad about their love asap..😃 Loved how Khanak irritated that she went for a date and long drive..Budthal couldn't even understand its only him until Khanak showed his own photo..😆 What Nidhi came to her room disrupting ShaNak conversation!!! Poor ShaNak..😆Now even Nidhi making ShaNak irritating and teasing them taking Raj's name..Who knows Nidhi might fall for Raj!!!😳 Poor Shaan..😭 Khanak too joined in talking about Raj and teasing him that she'll go for long drive with him..😆

Looking forward and thanks for writing a long and cute update..😃

Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago