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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...lovely update...

Shantanu so jealous n angry too !!!!!

He shud b..d guy ws asking hz wife out in front of him... 😆

jealousy became frustration !!!!

Bt thn shanak talkd finally... 😃

raj n nisha r no less... 😆 ...

Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 first part was hilarious
watching shan like this was so fun
wow thank u for telling us about cave man i never heard about this cave and the story behind it very impressive i love it :)
atlast atlast kuch toh baat hui and it ended in a very much needed kiss 😉
loved it awesome !!!!!
cant wait for next update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is what i wanted Chand 😉 u are such a sweetheart 😊 jealousy shaan is fun to read 😆
Awesomely penned dear i loved it to the core i was grinning while reading and imagine shaan's expressions 😆 Raj came back lolzz😆 he is hilarious Chand 😆 kiss nahi kiya omgeee!!!! ☺️ 😉
khanak talked to Ajay and shaan fumed in Jealousy too good yaar dil khush kardiya 😆 😆 he wanted to flung all those clothes on Ajay 😆 Poor Ajay acha huwa keh bachgaya Raj agaya 😆
Raj and NIsha's nokh jokh is awesomely penned i loved both abhto dono kih Jodi jamado Chand 😃 the way Raj called her and make her giving looks is superb yaar 👏 so Ajay has crush on shaan 😆 Poor Ajay agar shaan koh pata chala na toh tumari kher nahi 😆 Aayush asked Raj why they are laughing and Raj told Aayush that shaan is joker omgeee!!!
and Aayush question shaan aap kabse joker bann gaye 🤣 🤣 and then shaan stamped Raj's foot and said Abhi joker Raj uncle hai while raj nursing his wound 😆
i loved this update to the core from start 😃
Ajay asked for lunch Poor shaan is Jealous and at the same time furious, he talked to khanak furiously and poor khanak didn't know what was going on 😆
again i love Nisha and Raj 😆 dono larte rehte hai yaar 😆 Shaan saw khanak texting and thought she might texting Ajay kya yaar shaan kuch bhi sochte ho
loved the pic of this Cave and the description Chand awesome 👏 they splash water on each other wow!!! lovely
khanak enjoyed and move more forward and shaan followed her, their conv was awesome with little seriousness and thora pyaar bhi 😉 last ka kya kahu mein sizzling passionate kiss ayee!! hayee!! kine dino baad 😳 😉
looking forward for more romance 😉

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww loved it chandu whata a sweet update..
hopefully she will be going home in a few parts lool
<3<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey Dear

This was tryly super sweet part ...LOved it a lot 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Beautifully Written dear ...Mazaa aa gaya 👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏

aj ne thaan li hain Neesha ko tang karne ki 😛 bechaari is really getting hard time aur raj hain ki target bana rakha hain use puri tarah se 😆 naam hi nahi leta uska ...Oye ...hey & Chorni 😛 poor girl ...she is damn sweet & slient because of khanak & Shaan 😊 she wants to see them united she is a tru friend warna koi aur hoti toh ab tak bura maan chuki hoti aise behaviour le liye 😛 loved your characters dear 😃 Superbbb 👏

Jealous shaan is always a fun to read & its so natural on his part to get frustrated. 😊 poor guys is really trying hard to pacify wife 😊 saara dn uske liye kuch na kuch kartarehta hain his heart is craving for her happiness. 😃 he changed himself for her just to show her that she don't need to be changed so its natural if he feels sad watching her naormal with other 😊 & i love the way you have written that 👏 raj enjoying his situation & calling him jocker 😛 raj na item hain but lkoved shaan;s answer to aayush in action 😆😆 ab raj uncle Jocker hain ...hahaha 😆

khanak came back with Ajay & he invited her for lunch & without her answer went away i can so understand how these two must been feeling Raj & Nisha aur unki cute nok jhok 😆 Dono ajeeb hain aur cute bhi 😃 khanak's texting irritated shaan & he tounted her & moved away which made her angry too 😛 discribption of Cave & pics is lovly dear felt like visiting their 😃

teh moment spend by both in cave & finally they talked little openly 😃 the best thing was khanak was enjoying freely their & shaan was behind her to take care of her 😃 their convo was superb, their love possiveness could be seen from it 😃 & shaan kising her was Awesomeee 😊

cant wait to read next part ...awesome !!! 😃

kal update chahiye madam 😊

Love
Pranjal,
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey doc update was lovely...raj and nisha interaction was funny and hilarious...i love this posseive and jealous shaan...keep going man...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!!!👏 Fantastic!!!! Shaan is so possessive about Khanak..😳 Finally he spelled the reason for his changed behavior to her when she asked him..👏Loved the romance in the cave..😳 The kiss is hot..☺️

Looking forward and thanks for writing an awesome update..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😃
Thanks to shubhadarane, kp_yasharan, poo_j, diyak, suchi_245, monika_aa, jaisyjazz, virika01, heer_85, -pranjal-, niki_rbo, snigdhanagar, IF_rida, aasma1, for liking and commenting😊
Sorry guys this a chotu part, aaj match dekthe dethe itna time hogaya pata hi nahi chala😆
@ sneha- busy ho kya??

Part 83

She had been lost, just having her time with her hubby, whom she loved to eternity, and she will continue to do it..

She reveled and flyed high, when she came to know that he was solely doing this forever, what fortune she had done to get him?? The most important and amazing person in her life!! God had taken many things away from her but she was gifted with Shantanu. She was treated special with him, she had cherished every moment with him, and she would, what was the best thing?? she could do tell him that she loved him too, and may be this time it had increased multifolds…

They walk back the way, they came, but the difference now is, both of them held each other's hand, she blushed when he held her hands more tightier, bringing her more closer while walking back…

Shaan is more ecstatic, he thinks this would be the greatest day in his life, he had got her back in his life, his wife, whom he loved the most, for whom he had developed feelings which he didn't feel for anyother girl….She had some way captured him, and he had been safe since when she promised to keep him in her heart….Her childish things didn't matter him, that was the best thing about her, that was the thing which had attracted him towards her..His love..

When they had reached, where three of them were present, Aayush and Raj had been running around, Raj and Nisha did notice happiness in them, they both were happy for that. Raj had been a person in her life, whom she knew from many years, good friend, sweet friend, who cared for her like her brother. Nisha, a best friend, though Khanak knew her for a short time, these both were the best examples for good friends, who cared, protected, yelled whenever she was wrong, led her into the correct destination. Khanak knew that she wasn't wrong in finding people, in either cases, she had found good friends and as well as loving hubby!! Oh! 1 minute, a good son too…

Aayush came and hugged Khanak, Shaan released her hand, Khanak hugged Aayush back….

Aayush: mom! Kaha thi aap aur papa..mujhe bhook lag rahi hain….

Khanak: aww..toh phir aapke papa ko bholo, ghar waapis chalein..(teases him as he was the one who had planned for day out)

Shaan exactly knows what she means, he smiles his Khanak is back..

Aayush: mom ghar kyun?? Aaj bahar kaethe hai na..

Khanak: no Aayush…

Aayush: mom please….

Raj: Khanak please…

Nisha: haan Khanak..

Khanak: ok ok fine!!

Everyone leaves from there…

They had a blast at the dinner place, laughing pulling each other's leg, Raj had irritated Nisha to the highest, talking about the cave, at one point, Nisha, acted like as though she was taking water but knowingly pours it on his pant, Raj was horrified, and decided that he'll hate her to the most than anyone, may be worse than Misha…Raj had been very much furious.

Shaan had stealed heated gaze with Khanak, hinting her the obvious, at first Khanak had blushed away and then being her usual self, she smiled broadly at him, Shaan had chuckled at her braveness…..

Haayee!! Haayyee!! Ghar paunchne do madam, tab dekhenge aap ki bahaduri!! Thinking to himself, smiled broadly….

They had reached home, Aayush had slept off, Shaan carried him into their room, and had layed him on bed, covered him with the sheet, kissed a good night kiss on his forehead…

All of them got freshed, changed and Raj was busy with his laptop, Nisha landed directly to the bed, as she said that it was a great day..

Khanak filled the jug with water and walked into Shaan's room, kept the jug on the side table, Aayush alone was sleeping, she wondered where Shaan is?? But in no time she had was answered, ofcourse by him…

He had hugged her from back, at first she had been startled, but then smiled her hands held his hands in order to move out of the hug, but she knows that her attempt would anyway fail, but still keeping her side of protest…

Khanak: Shaan what are you doing?? Aayush so raha hain..(hisses)

Since she is shorter than him, he leans down craning his neck around hers, so that he can get a side look of her and also get an access to kiss her cheeks. He kisses her cheeks, a long one, like we do for a baby or kid, irritating them to the most…

Shaan: hey Mrs. Khandelwal….(squeezes her to the most)

Khanak: Shaan!! (struggling)

Shaan: Khanak!! Maine tumhe itna miss kiya ki…

Khanak: Shaan maine bhi..lekin…

Shaan: lekin wekin kuch nahi..im going to fill my pores with you..(now he turns her around, she's facing him, his hands on her wiaste, she slowly wounds her arms around his neck)

Khanak: achcha!!

Shaan just nods, he leans forward, but before he could get his way..

Khanak: naa!! (shakes her head) sorry Mr. Khandelwal, lekin nahi!! (she holds his face, turns it to side, kisses him on his cheek)

She moves backwards, after allowing herself loose from his grip….

Shaan: kya?? (shocked)

Khanak: Shaan you forgot the real issue about us, jab tak tum apne uss din ke feelings mujhse share nahi karogi tab tak hum ek doosre se alag rahenge…(puts about 3-feet distance)

Shaan: kya bakwaas hain Khanak!! (shouts)

Khanak: bakwaas nahi hain! Yeh mere liye jaanna zarrrori hain!! And mind you, poora ka poora Khandelwal parivaar meri side pe hain!! (declares proudly)

Shaan: what??

Khanak: yes MR. Khandelwal!! Jab aap mere date ke bare soch rahe the, tab main humari family ke saath baat kar rahi thi!! (Shaan is shocked)

Khanak: ok then!! Good night Shaan!! Have a good sleep!! (beams and leaves)

Shaan: (stares at the closed door) good sleep!! My foot!! (kicks the door)

Please comment😊
Sorry!! since i had promised, i decided to post this short one, next update will be long, i promise..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... Sweet update...

Shanak came back togethr...had good time at dinner...

N d room scene...hayeee romantc...

Bt khanak wann clear d lil error still !!..

Hope thy sort out soon..

Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update

yup it was small but chalega 😊

they finally talked to each other and came back holding hand in hand

raj and nisha were happy to see them together back

lolz, nisha poured water on raj's pant 😆 ... and sweared to hate her for whole of his life 😉 ...but jaldi hi yeh nafrat pyaar mein badal jayegi kyunki pyaar ki shuruat toh wahin se hoti hai na 😳

khanak went to his room and he hugged her and tried to seduce her but she hold her side and moved away asking him to tell her his thoughts of that day 😲

i think she is right to ask him to tell her , why he did like that with her on that day 👏

next part soon , pls 😳

with little romance 😳 or frustrated shaan because frustated shaan is too gud to read and imagine 😆

love

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