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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updates...read part 79, 80 back to back...loved it...

Shantanu asking tips frm bro n dad...awww...

N d masti going on at home btwn shantanu n aayush...cute...

Shantanu khanak n aayush on d couch... Sweet...d kiss on forehead...hayeee...

N d kitchen scene ...romantic...d closeness...

Khanak still needs sm1 to talk to !!!

N d day out...wow...


Eagrly waiting...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey doc update was lovely ...kitchen scene was nice waiting to read more romance...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😃
Thanks to kp_yasharan, poo_j, jaisyjazz, virika01, monika_aa, diyak, -pranjal-, heer_85, snigdhanagar, IF_rida, aasma1, Roshni_M, niki for liking and commenting😊
Thanks for the awesome response guys😃
She'll be soon back at her home😉

Part 81

Chor chor chor!!!

Haan..kaun?? (startled, getting up from the couch, male voice) (sees the girl and he starts to shout) chor chor chor!!!

Lights is oned by Khanak, who comes running to the living hall from her room, Shaan also comes out from another room, both of them are startled by the voice, but they stand silently, as they know there was no "chor" in the house..

Nisha: excuse me!! have you lost it??(shouts)

Our poor, sweet and innocent Raj, realizes the grammatical error in his word of speech..

Raj: oh ya!! Chorni!! (shouts more louder, making Khanak and Shaan close their ears, while Nisha is left dumbstruck)

Nisha: oh hello!! Yeh mera ghar hain!!

Raj: achcha!! (sits back on the sofa where he was sleeping calmly, until Nisha yelled at him)

Raj: neend kharab kar di..(he tries to go to sleep, Shaan shakes his head, Khanak is frustrated, just a moment before she had fallen asleep, but was disturbed by the duo)

Nisha: excuse me!! I need an explanation over here.. (shouts once again, Raj shuts his ears)

Raj: kyun chilla rahi ho yaar, bachcha so raha hain, thoda dheere se..(calmly)

Khanak: (can't hold up anymore) Nisha this is Raj, and Raj this is Nisha, I leave here with her and she's my friend and Nisha Raj is my friend..

Shaan leans on the wall, just looking over…

Raj: kya?? Ek aur Misha?? (shocked)

Nisha: Misha?? Who the hell is Misha now?? (looks at Khanak)

Khanak: raj!! Its Nisha not Misha..

Raj: whatever Khanak!! (looks at Khanak) abb isse bolo ki mujhe sone de..(sleeps back on the sofa)

Khanak shakes her head, she knows Raj very well, he can be so disinterested, if the thing is not about him, nothing has ever shaken him, but she had been happy when she had found him at the doorstep after her dinner with hubby and son..She had happily hugged him, Shaan had smiled, Raj told that Shaan had called him, that was another surprise for Khanak..on the same evening….Something told her now, that she wasn't lonely anymore…

Raj wasn't that close as Dhruv was to her, but still he had held her whenever she needed someone, he would scold her, whenever she diverted from the original destination…Raj was the person, she was looking for, how could she just forget about Raj?? Shaan knowingly or unknowingly had helped her.. wait a minute, did shaan knew what she was going through??

Now to the present situation, Nisha had a grunted expression, Raj was already lost in his dreamland..

Khanak: Nisha!! Raj aisa hi hain, don't worry he'll return soon, im sorry I couldn't ask you before giving him permission to stay here..it was so late..i just..

Nisha: (calms down) arrey aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho, im fine with it!! But please inse kehna ki, tameez se baat kare..(to raj)

Khanak chuckles hearing that…Shaan, Khanak and Nisha head back to their respective room..

Swoosh!! Raj pulls out the blanket of Khanak, Shaan and Aayush are beside him…Shaan and Aayush had a huge smile on their face.. Nisha is standing opposite from the guys, not happy with the new guy but she's on Shaan's side…

Khanak opens her eyes in frustration, covers up her ears and eyes with her both the hands, in order to get back to sleep once again…

Raj: Khanak yaar utho!! (still no response)

Aayush: mom please utho na..

Khanak: Aayush please, im tired, mujhe sone do…

Shaan: chalo na yaar, sone dete hain..(Raj and Aayush) I mean she's been working hardly from the past week..(Concerned)

Khanak: (smiles, still eyes closed) now that's like a good husband..(sighs!! And sleeps back)

Aayush and Nisha are like what was that??

Raj, as usually impatient, pulls Shaan to a side..

Raj: dude!! Plan bhulgaya kya?? Think agar Khanak ko bahar jana ho, kya voh tumhe sone deti??

Reminds Shaan about the plan..

Shaan: nahi!! (loudly)

Shaan walks over and pulls Khanak up, so that now she's sitting..

Khanak: Shaan what are you doing??

Shaan: I don't know anything Khanak, just get ready in 20 minutes and that's an order…

She stares back at him with an open mouth…

Shaan: chalo guys hum sab bahar wait karte hain…

Khanak looks at Shaan, he has already moved to the door, Raj and Aayush are grinning and they follow Shaan outside…She looks over at Nisha, Nisha shrugs smiles and runs out of the room..

Khanak: ho kya raha hain?? (yells at the walls of the room)

First stop- Clock Tower…

Clock Tower, located on the Rajpur road, is one of the most prominent attractions of the destination. Encircled by the commercial centre of the city, the Clock Tower is one of the most renowned landmarks of the city that was constructed before independence by the British. A beautiful tourist attraction, this tower has six faces.



Khanak is wearing, jeans and a black top, her hair is covered by her cap. Shaan is wearing a cargos and T-shirt, Aayush in his cute little 3/4ths, Raj and Nisha too in cool clothes...

Khanak, is not interested, neither to do anything nor to talk with someone..
She has hels Aayush's hand, Shaan is walking in front of them, on either side of him Nisha and Raj...Nisha chips in whenever he needed an information about the place..Raj just listens over, doesn't disturb them...slowly he moves backwards and joins Khanak...

Raj: arrey kya hua Khanak?? tumhara toh yeh favorite hain na, roaming about, knowing about the places and all...

Khanak: raj!! tab alag tha abb alag hain..(looking down at Aayush, who is kicking the stone with his shoes)

Raj: aisa kya alag hain Khanak?? yahi toh tum chahthi thi na, Shaan bhi tumhari tarah adventure freak ban jaye, he's trying na Khanak..

Khanak: but Raj, something is not proper..(looking up at him)

Raj: Khanak agar tumhe aisa lag raha hain toh, why don't you speak with him and ask the questions directly to him??

Khanak stares dumbstruck at Raj...

Khanak: tu kabse love guru ban gaya??

Raj: kya kare, meri chaar aur love stories ko hothe dekhkhar, aisa bangaya hun, pehle Misha ki love story aur phir tumhari aur Dhruv ki and once again tumhari aur Shaan ki...(shakes his head)

Khanak is silent, she looks down the road, deep in thinking..

Raj: (wounds his right arm over her shoulder) chal yaar aaj chutti hain!! kal se sochlena iss bare mein...

Khanak smiles at Raj and Raj smiles back...They are startled by Shaan's voice..

Shaan: oye!! meri biwi ke saath flirt kar raha hain?? door rahakar use..(warns)

Raj: arrey nahi yaar!! mujhe marna thodi na hain!! main toh sirf, Khanak ko uske ex ki information de rahatha...
After hearing that, Khanak smacks him on his stomach raj chuckles and moves away from her...
Nisha: ex??
Shaan had fallen for the bait, he thought they were talking about Dhruv, he doesn't like that, he looks at Khanak, Khanak is smiling and looking at Raj...
They are disturbed by Aayush...
Aayush: Mom chalo na..uss taraf chalthe hain!! (literally pulls her)
Everyone follows him..
They are at a shopping place, Khanak finally finds her mind and looks for the clothes...Shaan is standing beside her and looks at her, and gives more information about the clothes, another surprise for Khanak, Shaan never used to comment on her clothes, but today he's suggesting her...
She listens to him patiently..Nisha is tagged with them, after 5 or so minutes, Raj comes over...
Raj: oye chorni!!
Nisha: excuse me!! chorni kisko bhol rahe ho?? (hands on her waiste)
Raj: arrey yaar, naam lene main time lagtha hain..chalna ek achchi si dukhan dikana, Aayush ko bhook lag rahi hain..(Aayush is in Raj's arms)
Khanak: haan toh raj sab saath main chalthe hain na,,
Raj: arrey nahi yaar..tu shopping karna, hum aate hain, chaliye madamji (to Nisha)
Nisha stamps her foot and accompanies him..
Khanak just looks back at him, Shaan grins at Raj..
Raj: sunn..(he comes back) dono yaha pe romance shuru mat karna, yeh public place hain...
Khanak: Raj!!
Shaan chuckles and smacks him on his shoulder...
Raj runs back to Nisha and Aayush leaving our love birds alone...
While walking with Nisha, Aayush is just looking all over the shops...
Raj: how old are you?? (to Nisha)
Nisha: sorry??
Raj: i mean, aapko itni bhi nahi pata ki pati aur patni ko akela chodna zaroori hotha hain...
Nisha has a disgusted look on her face..
Raj: abb chalo bhi... (walks front)
Nisha: uggghh!! god!! (follows him half halfheartedly)
Khanak is looking at the tops...
Shaan: Khanak...tum Raj ke saath kya baath kar rahi thi?? (suspicious)
Khanak: kuch bhi toh nahi..(busy looking at the clothes)
Shaan pulls her by her elbow...
Shaan: sach main?? (they are a foot away)
Khanak simply nods, just looks into his eyes...
Shaan: you were not talking about Dhruv?? (removes her cap)
Khanak shakes her head in no...
Shaan: sure?? (tucking her hair back behind her ear)
Khanak nods...Both are lost in their own world..

Please comment😊
still more to come😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy first to commment loved it chandu ffinallly khanak will be coming home sooon..
y do i have a feeling thay nisha and raj ke bheech kuch hoga loool
<3<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute update...

Raj pops up frm d couch... 😆 ...chor...chorni...poor Nisha...

Awww Raj also part of shan's plan bt finally khanak found sm1 to talk to...thnx to shan... 😊

Day out !!!... Khanak confusd seeing diff shan...shan jealous of dhruv talk... 😆

Raj teasing Nisha n gvng RLBs sm privacy 😉

looking forwrd...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
RAJ OMG !!!! i m so happy to c raj
LOL!!! update ka first part bahut funny tha i loved it nisha and raj were funny 😆
i have a feeling ke unke beech kuch toh hoga 😉
ohhh so shan aisa behave karke khanak ko ye kehna chahta hain ki agar woh change hui toh shan ko kaisa lagega just as khanak is feeling right now by watching shan's changed behaviour WOW!! tit for tat dad has given such a great idea
i hope they sort out this very soon yaar and get back to their home together :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!!!👏Excellent!!! Loved everything..😃Raj came to Dehradun to meet Khanak!!! Awesome!!! totally surprised like Khanak..👏 And the opening "Chor Chor" part was really funny..Now Khanak can share everything to Raj..Shaan still not liking Dhruv.. Will Raj and Nisha fall for each other???😳 Usually love starts with a fight..😉

Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 Awesome as always i loved it Chand 😊 i have no words for this splendid update 👏 👏 from the start to the end it made me grin like anything i enjoyed reading to the fullest 😃
first Raj make me laugh and i hold my tummy 😆 😆 chor chor was awesome i loved it yaar, nisha was saying chor chor and Raj join him, raj didn't know nisha was shouting after seeing him 🤣shanak knew there wasn't any chor 😆
Raj's entry was at the right time sweety ,khanak needed someone and that is Raj, thanx to bring him , khanak introduce both Nisha n Raj to each other 😊 omgeee!!! Raj is so funny ekk or Misha 🤣
Poor Nisha has to tolerate Raj and now he is ready to pull her leg any time
all are waking khanak but she coveedr self self with a blanket 🤣 this was so cute, at last impatient Raj took shaan at the corner and reminds him of their plan of outing, shaan is too naughty now he pulled blanket n woke up Khanak 😆 😆
i loved the tower pic its nice, khanak and Raj talk was awesome i loved it, Raj is teasing khanak 😆 awesome shaan's voice startled then and what shaan said i loved it flirting with my wife lolzz😆
areh yeah kya shaan thought they are talking about Dhruv
shaan is totally in action he gave details of everything and make khanak stunned and shocked heheh 😆 poor her 🤣
Raj and Nisha are hilarious i loved their Jodi, kya yeah jodi jamegi chand Raj is too much he called her chorni 🤣 kyu naam leke time waste karna 🤣 what a dialogue in these update i loved all dialogues they are awesome 👏 👏
thikh kaha raj neh, Nisha give shanak some space for romance 😉 😉 😆
akhir shaan neh puch hi liya Dhruv keh bareme wah!! loved that straight forward question
eyes lock ayee!! hayeee!!! shopping area meh lage raho shanak lage raho 😉 😉
looking forward for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohhh 😊

Raj brought Masti with him ...he is super cute...Bless him. 😃

Gosh your start i was just looking at screen with wide eyes, Bechaari nisha can understand what she must have thought 😆 poor girl khud ke hi ghar mein chor ...Oops sorry wrong word. Chorni ban gayi 😆 loved the scene Raj made the whole update super cute & Hilarious. chalo i can expect a nayi prem kahani finally 😉 isko bhi koi mil jayegi lg raha tha ab lagta hain woh Nisha hi hain 😃 Nisha's disghusting look on Rajs comments & Raj's naoughtyness ...Awesome Dear loved it 😃

Khanak ko bahar jane ke liye mana liya sabne 😊 Shaan apna mission bhul gaya tha but thankfully Raj ne yaad dilva diya. 😃 raj's frandly talk with khanak 😃 & asked her to talk wow that what she needed a proper person 😃 great dear bade sahi time pe entry karvayi hain waise bhi i always liked Raj 😊 agar dhruv aaya hota toh mazaa nai aata Sory but i dont find him much intresting 😛

Shaan was little upset listening that they were talking abt Dhruv he companied khanak & raj asked nisha to come along. poor girl is again cought with raj ab yeh aur tang kheechega 😆 loving them but 😃 Shaan helping her in shopping & now asking abt their talks ...wow

waiting for the next dear ...bade hi galat waqt pe rocka hain yaar 😒

Continue soon

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG chor part was funny...yay glad to se raj!!

shaan was j ki khanak is talking abt dhruv lolzz..

wow soo day outtt...wats gonna happ...

update soonnn


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