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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
i loved the sentence "haye afternoon se wait kar raha hun. ek call nai kar sakti thi"
shanak conv was shweet and cute.. i juz love their comfort level
hmm so finally dadi and shaan ki team kuch sahi idea nikaley and aayush to pehle hi shaan k team main hai
he's so clear that he's pursuing her
em juz excited to know that when he is goin barge into her home
lukin fwd to the night at khandelwals will lots of masti and love
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
khanak is trying hard to control her feelings...guess she will soon blurts out to shaan that she is attracted towards him...
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update...soo khanak mixed up wid his family...

gud after all its her would be family...😆😆 n s way shaan swaid haye...m flattered...😳

khanak is trying hard to hide her feelings...hope shaan find out d reason fr her behavoiur...😊

update nxt part soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome chandu
khandelwal family like Khanak wow!! now only Khanak needs to show her feeling to shaan n stop avoiding him
Shaan n sunil little gupshup was lovely
loved the way Aayush spoke when he received the phone
Dr Khanak, he said so proudly 😊
Shaan n Khanak phn conv was very sweet she blunt making paratha
n shaan didn miss to say me ajau 😆
Awaiting for night at Khandelwal with khanak n Aayush
can't wait to c wat will shaan do
Edited by heer_85 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOvely Update Chandana :)

Mind blowing :) Loved it

Khanak & her bonding with Khandelwals Explained beautifully. Specially Khanak & Khushboo gelled so well together, When khshboo said she is bored doing parties & khanak suggested abt spending time with family, LOL u know i thought they will plan a picnic & will force khanak to join them too lekin asia kuch nahi hua ..Popat :P Loved Aayush he is super cute, the way he set with Akshay & played WOW i ca campletely imagine it discribed beautifully.

Shaan & Dadi's equation is superb. I loved their relation more like friends. Shaan Told Dadi every thing about Khanak & Dadi asked him to Call & ask for forgiveness :D Super cute, Yiippeee I think Dadi is going to play cupid to make them realise their love for each other, LOl Dadi is Rocking yaar.

Aayush is such a Cutie pie, Loved the way he received the call & took the msg but handed Phone to mom immiadiately when he heard his Fav Shaan uncle, Superb. Shanak Convo discribed beautifully. Specially the way shaan getting mischivious asking her that he wants to taste food & she never invited him at home ...WOW loving this Doc. Khanak forgive him but pretended to be angry, Loved the way shaan melted her anger ,,,,,,,,,,,Amazing

Khanak's realisation & avoiding shaan she cut the call :( made me sad too :( But Precap is super exciting :) Waiting

waiting 4 the next part :)))

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
loved khanak's bonding wid khandelwals...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update chanadu 😊

Khanak & her bonding with Khandelwals Amazing.shaan and khanak phone convo Lovely.Khanak forgive him but pretended to be angry so cute:)
Awaiting for night at Khandelwal with khanak n Aayush ...Precap super Amazing...
What is this
Mahalakshmi vratha i really dont know but waiting for your update...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
Hope all of them are enjoying😊

@ aasma - thanks a lot aasma😊 waiting for it😊

@Jaisyjazz - Thanks a lot jaisy😊

@ Yasharanrox - thanks a lot maneesha😊

@IF_rida - Thanks a lot rida😊 the line just came spontaneously😉

@ ktym - Thanks a lot mounika😊

@ snigdhanagar - Thanks a lot Sneha😊 even i just love shaan says 'HAAYE' 😳

@heer - Thanks a lot heer😊 i think you've mistaken, it was Shaan and Dadi's convo😊

@ Pranjal - Thanks a lot lot Pranju😊 i think i can add this picnic idea😉 how about picnic to goa??

@ maneesha - thanks a lot😊

@ janavi - thanks a lot janavi😊 its Vara Mahalakshmi Vratha, its famous in Karnataka, its a day, on which your wishes will be fulfilled by Mahalakshmi, and its related to the girls, as we are considered has the Lakshmi of our house, we will be pampered to the most, with lots of sweets😊

Thanks a lot to Pooja and ONAego for liking the story😊
Thanks a lot for encouraging😊
Hope you like it further😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊

Part 11

In last two days, nothing much had happened, Khanak had approached him for the help, she was behaving normal, as she used to behave with others. Shaan had talken with dadi about her behavior; dadi had promised him that everything would be fine and also promised that she would talk to her slowly. Shaan had left it to dadi for solve, as he trusted her than himself.

A beautiful Friday morning, dadi had called Khanak on Thursday night, to remind her visit to Khandelwal's, Khanak had promised that she'll be there with Aayush. Dadi had also made her agree to stay the night. Khanak had accepted that solely for Aayush's sake, his eyes would lit up whenever he would meet them, seeing him happy, she would have felt contented for his happiness.

She knew he was missing the attention he would get when her family was alive, now he was getting attention from Khandelwal's, he loved it, and she didn't have any problem. Problem was her feelings, which was getting stronger day by day, whenever she used to see Shaan, she had felt some joy in her, like we would say butterflies in stomach. She was now clear that even Shaan had similar feelings, he had shown her the signs. But she feared, what had happened 2 years back, she didn't wanted that to happen in her life once again. May be if she could tell that to Shaan, he would back up from her. She decides to tell him that, which even her closest friends would have not known…

Shaan knew that today, that's Friday, Khanak and Aayush will be staying the night in his house for first time. He had felt like as though his spirits were pouring… He was excited from the core. He knew that today he's gona ride her for the first time, she had agreed to that reluctantly. He was glad atleast she had accepted that. He was waiting near the car. There she comes with a small bag, which carried hers and Aayush night clothes, but Aayush is not there, she comes to him, he has a broad smile on his face. They both smile at each other, he opens the door for her, she has kept her bag at the back. She smiles a thank you and takes her seat.

Khanak: if you don't mind can we pick Aayush from school (politely)

Shaan: ofcourse Khanak (smiles)

Ride to the school was cool, as his school was nearby to hospital, both of them are waiting for Aayush, standing about 3feet away and leaning on the car.

Shaan: so how was your day?? (casually)

Khanak: as usual stressing, seeing so much pain who'll feel good, if I would have healed their pain then I would have told it was a great day (actually a small kid had passed away due to an accident, she's feeling bad because she couldn't save that kid)

Shaan: well you can heal my pain (softly but confident) (easing her)

Khanak: sorry??? (no idea)

Shaan: nothing!! (calm) if would've healed everyone's pain, then people would have called us god but not next to god… (thoughtful)

Khanak (turns toward him, he's looking at her) smiles a glorious smile : right!!!

Aayush comes, he's happy to see his Shaan uncle, gives his bag to Khanak, coolly goes and sits in front. Aayush talks to Shaan and Khanak whole way. He is very excited.

All three of them enter Khandelwal house, Aayush is in Shaan's arms and Khanak next to Shaan holding the bag. Dadi sees them enters, she's happy to see them like that, they would make a great couple, the thought brings smile to her face, Madhvi, Sunil, Khushboo and Akshay also joins. Greetings and hugs all are done. Khushboo and Khanak are behaving like as though two old friends have met after a long time. Khanak is all smiling, seeing her happy, Shaan is very much happy. Aayush has already changed in Shaan's room. Khandelwal house is filled with joy.

Khushboo: Khanak humne suna hai ki tum achche khaana banaati ho?? (Khanak is sitting next to Khushboo, Shaan is opposite to her, as she hears that, she glares at Shaan, Shaan easily shrugs that)

Khushboo: Khanak, aur humne yeh bhi suna hai ki tum kheer bahut achchi banati ho??

Aayush: haan aur parantha bhi, aur rajma bhi, actually mom sab kuch achchi banati hai aur haan mom bahut achcha gaati bhi hai. (proud)

Dadi: achcha yeh toh hame pata hi nahi tha, chalo bhai, aaj kHnak hamari gaana gayegi..

Akshay: dadi not to forget Kheer, my mouth is watering already (smiles)

There's laughter around, Khanak promises that she'll make one at the time of dinner. Khushboo gushes on singing, Khanak agrees to it reluctantly.

Akshay: ek minute Khanak, Shaan jaa na, guitar leke aana…

Khushboo: yes Shaan, come on… (Shaan smiles and goes to bring his guitar)

Khanak is surprised hearing that, she had never thought. Khushboo requests her to sing tu bin bataye from Rang de Basanti.Shaan brings the guitar, he's ready to play it.

Aayush: aap yeh gaana kiske liye gaa rahe ho?? (smiles)

Khanak: kiske liye?? (no idea) ok, I dedicate this song to all of you(including Shaan), because jab se aap log meri zindagi mein aaye ho, meri life baahut meeti ho gayi hai (glorious smile)

She sings and Shaan plays the guitar according to the tune.

tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kahin
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

meethi lagi, chakh ke dekhi abhi
mishri ki dali, zindagi ho chali
jahan hain teri baahein mera sahil wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin.

Khanak stops here, its once again her turn to get surprised, as Shaan starts to sing the next part.

mann ki gali tu phuharoon si aa
bheeg jaye mere khwabon ka kafila
jise tu gungunaye meri dhun hai wahin
tu bin bataye mujhe le chal kaheen
jahan tu muskuraye meri manzil wahin

Shaan ends the song thinking that: this was just for you Khanak (in his mind)

Coming up: still more to come, we'll know Khanak and Shaan more better.

English translation of the song-

Khanak's part-

you, without telling, take me somewhere,
where you smile, that only is my destination..

I felt sweet, I just tasted it now,
life has become a lump of sugar
where your arms are there, my shore is there only..
you, without telling, take me somewhere,
where you smile, that only is my destination..

Shaan's part-
to the street of my heart, come like showers
let the caravan of my dreams be drenched,
what you hum, only, is my tune..
you, without telling, take me somewhere,
where you smile, that only is my destination..


Please comment😊 im not sure about the song, i just loved the lyrics of song😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww loved the lyrics it was really nice..nd suited shanak really well an their situation... loved the update aswell was intrestin to read, cant wait for her to tell shan what tho? loool have to wait and seee... egerley waiting chandu xxx
Edited by aasma1 - 13 years ago

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