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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update chandu
loved the bonding between shaan n Aayush,
he is shooo sweet
she made a kheer n every one praise her bt she was looking at shaan to say something
at last he said he want more 😆
hayeee !! loved then shaan said waiting for the day, u cook something for me 😊
Poor khana!! she doesn't want to gv him any hopes n tears form in her eyes
loved dadi n shaan concern
dadi is cool n understand wat shaan feels for khanak
she talked to khanak n they came happily from the room
last group conv was awesome, Khandelwal narrate shaan fear when they went to Kashmir
wat he did when rode a horse n trekking 😆superb yaar
looking forward for wat khanak want to tell shaan n hw she will tell him
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Posted: 13 years ago
only have time to write this, ima t work...

loved it it was soo coool, hopedully khanak can love shan and not fwwl bad for him, because she dosent want to be a burden on him... x
sorry I dont live in india so I dont know any placez ..
Edited by aasma1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update. Aayush is soo adorable. Awhh khanak waiting for shaan's opinion on the kheer and him wanting her to cook for him is soo cute.😳 Poor khanak she doesn't want to give him hopes because of her past! I really want to know what happened now! Has she told dadi?!
Loved the group Convo, awwh bichaara Shaan sab uski pungi baja rahe hain!😆 But even I found it quiet funny. Shaan looks soo cute when his irritated. Is khanak gonna tell him everything now?! Please update soon. I loved this update. Really can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...😊
haha shaan's history was hilarious...
hope next tym khanak accompanies him😉
sorry i dont live in mumbai...so i have no idea dear...


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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely 😊
the kheer was very tasty hmmm awww shan so sweet he asked for second serving and loved wat he said about cooking aye haye hamara shan toh restless hota ja raha hai
oh so sad😭 khanak had tears in her eyes just bcoz she dont want to hurt him dadi is awesome but wat talk happened bet them in the room?
shan's kash trip was so hilarious😃 wow waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update chandu...loved it...😊

what might be the conversation btwn khanak and dadi??? eager to know...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
Thanks a lot to heer, aasma, tina, jaisy, maneesha, mounika for commenting, sorry didn't get time for thanking you individual😊
Thanks a lot to ONAego and diyak for liking it😊

Part 13

Khanak first searches the room, Shaan is not there, she slowly steps in, she keeps the bowl on the table, a strong swift of air hits her face, she looks in the direction. She can see his back, she walks near him, with a smile on her face'

Khanak: hmm bura laga??

Shaan turns around, nahi!! Mujhe kyun bura lagega (sarcastic)

Khanak: aap jaise dikhte ho na waisa bilkul nahi hai (she enters into room back)

Shaan is confused, follows her, matlab???

Khanak: matlab kuch nahi, aap yah kheer khalo, aah aunty ne aapko dinner keliye bulaaya hai'

Turns around to move out, Shaan holds her elbow, time stands for Khanak, but Shaan is in the mood of argument.

Shaan: kya kuch nahi, tumhe lagta hai mein darpok hon??? Khanak back into argument'

Khanak: aur nahi toh kya, sochkar bhi hassi aati hai (giggles)

Shaan: bass hogaya ha (moves closer) due to the strong swift of air, Khanak's hair starts flowing, time stands still for both of them, both of them are inches apart, their eyes are locked. Shaan's hand is drawn towards her hair, he feels it for the first time, he had a wish of feeling it under his fingers, which was fulfilled now' He tucks her errant curl behind her ear, Khanak bend her head due to her shyness, a small playing on her lips but Shaan's face has got some serious expression, he's looking intently towards her'

Due to the strong air, window door starts banging, both of them come back to the earth'

Khanak (back into argument) : aap mere haath baarr baarr pakadna chodhdije hein'

Shaan releases her hand, as though it stung to him, tum toh aise baat kar rahi ho, jaise mein jaan buchar kartha hun, yeh sab tumhari wajhase hua hain, jab bhi mein tumse baat karna chahtha hun, tab tab tum bhaag jhati ho' She's about to reply, but'

Aayush: Mom uncle aap log kitna ladthe ho, uff' Shaan and Khanak are shocked

Aayush: abb chalo dono, mujhe bhook lagi hain'

All three of them joins the family for dinner. There is lot of laughter at the dinner table, more talking, and after dinner Aayush wishes to sleep with dadi, Khanak doesn't have any problem with that, she just smiles'

Shaan is unable to sleep, he's tossing and turning on his bed. He gets up and walks out of his room, he strodes towards swimming pool. There he can see Khanak, sitting on the chair besides swimming pool'

Shaan: (to himself) Khanak!! Itni raat ko kya kar rahi hai' (smiles and moves towards her)

Khanak is laughing at some video playing on her lappy, Shaan is standing next to her.

Shaan: Khanak!! Itni raat ko kya kar rahi ho?? Aur woh bhi pool ke side pe??

Khanak: Shaan!!! You didn't sleep (smiles) come sit' (makes place for him to sit next to her, Shaan sits next to her ) Shaan you haven't seen my family na, yeh video, mom dad ki 25th anniversary per li thi, pata hai Shaan, uss party ke liye meine aur bhai ne itni arrangements ki thi, aur mom dad ko itna pasand diya tha (her eyes is sparkling, Shaan smiles at her and watches the video and the photos which she's showing with a smile on her face)

Shaan: you look good in these photos' abb dekho kitni pathli hogayi ho(looking at her)

Khanak: (looking at screen) woh issliye kyun ki main apni mom dad ke saath ho, mom jab thin a, she actually used to run behind me to make me eat, pata hai Shaan (looking at him) mom mujhe din mein chaar chaar baar khilathi thi, aur dad bhi, bhai hamesha mujhpe hassthe the' (smiles remembering her memories)

Shaan: you really miss them a lot?? (looking at her thoughtfully)

Khanak: nahi!! (looks at him)

Shaan: u don't miss them??

Khanak: aisa nahi Shaan, mom dad ne mujhe itni yaadein di hein, I can survive with that, aur Aayush tho hai he, whenever I see Aayush smile and laughs, I feel contented, its like I've fulfilled their dreams, mein Aayush woh sab kuch dena chahthi hu, which he deserves' Mom Dad, mere andhar rehte hain, Mom Dad mere aaspass hai, aur Bhaiyya bhabhi toh Aayush ki hassi mein hain, jab who log meri zehem si bahar hi nahi gaye toh, there's nothing to miss them (looking faraway)

Shaan: Khanak!! You're the strongest girl I've ever met' Khanak smiles.

Khanak: Dad ne mujhe strong bana diya tha, he had taught me to live a life in a busy city like Mumbai, Mere parents iss duniya ke best parents the' one thing bad about me, is'

Shaan: bad??

Khanak: yes bad!! They've made me adamant' (shakes her head)

Shaan: its not bad!!

Khanak: you've haven't seen it (smiles)

Shaan: ok!! Aur batao??

Khanak: kya??

Shaan: tumhare bare mein.. you know your favourites, if you had boyfriend or not?? (stressing on boyfriend)

Khanak: nice try!! Ok food mein mujhe gujrati food bahut achchi lagthi hai, mom banathi thi, I used to love it' Boyfriend?? No I never had one, but yes I agree to that I had crush, actually still have a crush (naughty smile)

Shaan: aur who kaun hai??

Khanak : Ok (suppressing her laughter) it was , no actually it is ENRIQUE IGLESIAS, pata hai Shaan jab bhi who gaata hai, mann kartha hai ki suntha hi jao, oohh ijust love him singing' (dreamy)

Anger is raising in Shaan' Shaan: nice to know'

Khanak laughs openly' Khanak: Shaan!! (still laughing) u look funny!!! Aur cute bhi (laughing)

Shaan looks at her laughing, he's mesmerized by her beauty'.

Coming up: still conversation is remaining...and then Shaan at Khanak's house'

Please comment😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it chandi, ooh shaans gonna go to khanaks house cant wait to see what happenes..
I also like ur stories loool
xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely chandu
their conv was vry nice
shaan hold her arm n then they lost in their dream land
loved their pool side conv bt vry touchy when Khanak remember her family
shaan is Jealous n angry when she talk abt dat singer
Awaiting for shaan at khanak house
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updates
that was shoo shweet that she wanted to know shaan's opinion on kheer
its fun ti read abt how they all get along very well
aayush to sab ka fav hogaya hai
aww pur burthal was scared of riding a horse
their conv was superb
at least now he's getting to know her
i loved how she stated abt y she doesn't miss her parents
hayeela romeo to enrique se bi jelaous hogaya
em excited to read abt shaan's visit to khanak's place

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