RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 11

loved d update...khanak felt nevous whn she saw shaan...

khanak is making shaan j bt shan samje too na...

nw wats gonna happ waitng fr nxt part...:)

Hey Chandana

Loved the update Dear

I am loving this mischievous Side of Shaan. Wow he called Dr, Lata & asked that he wanted to help Khanak in her project. LOl I loved the way they met today Khanak was completely clueless :) & Dr. lata asked her to meet Dr.shaan for guidance, Superb, LOl I was grining ear to ear while reading it.

Loved the way shaan first made her comfortable & They work without hesitance, I loved the way u wrote that Part, Shaan asked her for lunch * got angry when she said about Raj. Loved Shaan here, his possessive nature came in instinct & he got angry, LOl khanak bhi kum nahi hain who bhi suna ke chali gayi

The guilt, Selftalks described beautifully. Shaan tries to call her but didn't ger connected. WOW khanak & aayush came to khandelwals again. I loved the way Aayush get bonded with Dadi. Instantly. & Dadi asked khanak to call her Dadi. Superb

WOW I love the entry of Dadi :) Madhavi had told her everything abt khanak, wow & others have entered too. Matlab next update mein Everyone will be there, But I am upset that now Khanak will try to avoid this situation too. & she has reason to escape and she wo;; tell Madhavi that she has Khushboo & Dadi now, So she will not need khank's help :(

I am excited to know ab Madhavi kis tarah Khanak ko Rokegi.

Waiting for the next part

Love

Pranjal.

Part 10

Khanak has mingled into Shaan's family as though its her family. Now Khushboo and Akshay, even Sunil also have joined, all are happily talking; Khanak is free in calling Akshay as Bhaiya and Khushboo as bhabhi. Aayush is enjoying the attention he's receiving from this family. Now he's happily sitting on Akshay's lap and he is playing with his phone.

Khushboo: mom hum log ye parties kar kar ke bore hogaye hai (with a disgusted expression), mom iss baar hum kuch alag karthe hai na (excited)

Madhvi: lekin kya beta?? (thinking)

Khanak: bhabhi I think you should spend time with whole family, u know talking or playing something (smiling)

Khushboo: nice idea Khanak,wait kuch sochthi hun!!

Khanak: I think I should leave now (readies to leave)

Dadi: Khanak beta itni jaldi, Shaan ko tho aane do aur aah aaj toh tum dinner kaake jaogi

Khanak: no dadi, bahut late ho gaya hai, waise bhi kal Aayush ko school bi jaldi jaana hoga'

Madhvi: lekin Khanak kal bhi tumne hamare saath khaana nahi khaya'

All are forcing her to stay even Akshay and Sunil'

Khanak: ok I'll stay but not today, I promise I'll come back on Friday and stay till you say to leave me. (promises)

Khushboo: pakka you'll come on Friday then???

Khanak: haan pakka (smiles) chalo Aayush chalte hain (Aayush gets up and holds her hand to leave)

She bids bye to everyone and hugs Khushboo and Madhvi, takes ashirvad from dadi and leaves with Aayush promising that she'll be back on Friday .

Shaan enters his house, its quite late and extremely exhausted. He sits in living hall, asks Haeilal for water. Someone holds the glass of water, he receives it without seeing the person. He opens his eyes to keep the glass back, his face brokes into surprised expression and a broad smile on his face.

Shaan: dadi!!! (screams, gets up and hug her) aap kab aaye, I miseed you (still hugging)

Dadi: jhooote, agar itna yaad aa raha tha, toh call kyun nahi kiya (releases herself from hug)

Shaan: sorry dadi thoda busy tha

Dadi: kaam kein ya phir???? (with a devilish glee)

Shaan: dadi aap bhi na (shakes his head)

Dadi: waise Khanak bahut achchi hai, mujhe toh bahut achchi lagi (smiles)

Shaan is surprised, aap kab mile Khanak se???

Dadi: aaj aayi thin a, ghar par

Shaan: who aayi thi, mujhe toh laga, she won't be coming today, after what I said her (feels sorry)

Dadi: kya hua?? Tum dono ne jagda kiya??

Shaan: actually maine, waise Bhaiyya bhabhi kaha hai??

They talk like that for few more time, as he loves her the most. And dadi tells him that he should call her and tell her sorry. Shaan agrees and enters his room. He takes his phone, it rings and picks'

Shaan: Hello??

From the receiver: hello, this Aayush here, Mom, mera matlab Dr. Khanak, is busy in cooking, aapko job hi kehna hai na, aap mujhse keh sakthe hai

Shaan (smiles) : Aayush!! Kya kar rahe ho??

Aayush: Shaan uncle (excited) aapko mom se baat karni hai, ek minute (runs to her, she's in the kitchen, her hand is full with aata, Aayush silently keeps the phone in between her ear and shoulder,

Khanak: Aayush, kaun hai (he runs from there) Hello?? (into the phone)

Shaan: haaye, afternoon se wait kar raha hoon, ek call nahi kar sakthi thi

Khanak: Dr. Shaantanu Khandelwal, arr kohi aapke tarah free nahi hote hain, call kyun kiya?? (still angry)

Shaan: abhi tak ghussa ho?? Im really sorry Khanak, believe me im holding my ears

Khanak suppresses her giggle, she had actually forgotten about the whole incident.

Khanak: hogaya ab main rako???

Shaan: Khanak please, I told sorry na, mujhe pata hai kit um mujhe maaf kar chuki hon, lekin phir bhi, naatak kar rahi ho (smiles)

Khanak smiles but doesn't argue, Shaan understands'

Shaan: waise kya bana rahi ho???

Khanak: parantha (blurts out)

Shaan: achcha toh main aaja hun??

Khanak: nahi!! (yells)

Shaan: kyun?? I really want to know ki tum kaise khaana pakkati ho, I mean I wanted to taste it

Khanak: haan zaroor khilaongi, lekin aaj nahi

Shaan: then I've to wait (mock upset) I hate waiting Khanak

Khanak: aapka hogaya ho tho, main rakoon, mujhe bahut kaam hain.

Shaan: why?? Don't have you have a maid to do these work???

Khanak: no actually, I didn't wanted one, itna kaam nahi hota hai, bus do log hi toh hain, aur ghar bhi itna bada nahi hai

Shaan: mujhe kaise pata hoga?? Tumne kabhi mujhe bhulaya nahi, tumhaare ghar

Khanak: haan bulalungi, abhi time hain, waise maine aapko abhi tak maaf nahi kiya hai

Shaan: Khanak, come on, hum dono jaante hai, ki tumne uss baat ko kab ki bhool chuki hon

Both silently smile, she suddenly realizes that, she's suppose to avoids him, she becomes suddenly silent. Shaan senses that.

Shaan: kya hua?? Tum suddenly itna silent hojathi ho, uss din bhi, I seriously didn't understand ki tum kya kehna chathi thi?? (confused)

Khanak: Shaan I've to go, im sorry (she cuts off the call, she's sad)

Shaan is shocked at her sudden change, he can't think further, he's upset, but he decides to ask from dadi, what to do with it' He's worried for her, as he had heard sadness in her voice'

Coming up ' Khanak's and Aayush's night out at Khandelwal's