RAABTA-Part 96 on page 148 on 9/3 - Page 10

Hey Chandana 😊

Awesome update dear, Loved it to the core. 👏

The way u have described Shanak's emotions. Khanak's Expressions & Shaan;s confusion wow It took the update to other Level. I Simply Loved it. & Can I tell you one thing very Frankly. U have a beautiful Style of writing, Completely Fida after last part. Mainly because of the straight forward interaction. & secondly you Didn't described any hanky panky moments between the two. As I feel it's too early. they are just having a cute feeling of love now, abhi toh bahot kuch hain.,

Khanak was so engrossed in talking that she almost forgot that someone is standing their & she entered a wrong room :) I loved the way shaan made her stop with mischivious grin. Loved the way u have described his antics, Beautiful. But Khanak's reaction made him confused, he was happy that Now they will talk as she was avoiding him since morning but his antics made her speal her feelings & She asked him for time. Loved the way u showed Khanaks frustration, Confused shaan wanted to ask but Aayush came :( Wroing timing aayush :P

Khanak did talk to every one but didn't looked at him :( Not even while saying Bye :( waise I loved the way u described shaan's Confused & Desparate expressions :) amazing. Now our smarty has Idea, & he is making a Call. Kisko? Khanak Ko?? Ya koi plan hain jisse khanak will start talking? Is he calling to hospital?? whats cooking? hmm? Too curious to know

Oops Sorry forgot to say I loved the way U have described the Rooms Dcor Fab buddy :)

Waiting for the next part & Sorry for the rushed reply.

Love

Pranjal.

superlike yaar...she entered in his washroom..unaware abt his presence...

sooo he kws she is trying to avoid him...n is reading her facial expression...

nw wats cooking in shaan's mind...cant wait...😉

Part 9

A beautiful morning, but not for Khanak, she had not slept whole night, she had spent whole night in thinking whether she had done good with Shaan or not, her head is aching like hell, she is already frustrated, she get summons to meet Dr. Lata. Khanak had asked Lata for some senior guidance in her studies and also in presentation. Khanak wished that Dr. Lata would help her, as she was the seniormost. She enters her cabin by knocking.

Khanak: Good morning mam (she enters in, she can see a peson sitting, his back is seen)

Lata: come in Khanak (khanak comes in but still can't recognize the person)

Khanak: sorry mam for disturbing, but I just wanted to ask about our yesterday's call..

Lata: yes khanak, uske bare mein baat karne ke liye toh tumhe bulaaya hai, come sit down.

Now is the time, she sits down and sees the person, who is grinning at her. She is shocked to see the person, its Shaan, but she manages as she's sitting in front of senior doctor. Shaan is enjoying her uncomfotableness, as they both are sitting close but not that close enough.

Shaan: Hello Dr. Khanak (with a smile)

Khanak can't help she just tries to be normal, Hello…. Dr. Shaan.

Lata: So Khanak, is it ok if Dr. Shaan guides you??

Khanak's eyes flee in shock to Dr. Lata. Here she's tryig to move away from him, but….

Khanak: but mam isn't Dr. Shaan is busy with his own schedule (trying her chance once again)

Shaan: no Dr. Khanak, im ready to spend my afternoons with you (looking at her) I mean by guiding you (looking at Lata)

Lata: so khanak its done, I've to rush now, Dr. Shaan is there now, what say Dr. Shaan?? (she gets up, even Khanak and Shaan gets up)

Shaan: yes Dr. Lata, forever (looking at khanak)

Lata leaves her cabin, Khanak is dumbstruck, she is starring at the closed door. Shaan comes near her…

Shaan: toh chalein, Dr. Khanak (bending down)

Khanak raises her head, WHERE????

Shaan (smiles broadly) my cabin…

They both leaves and they enters his cabin. He makes her sit first and then sits next to her. At first to ease her, he talks about what she needs, now she appears comfortable and is talking to him freely but she is keen on his words makes some notes in her laptop, at that Shaan gets time to steal glances on her. He's watching her, her hair is flying in the hair, he's once again mesmerized by her simplicity and her innocence… He has a smile on his face, when she notices that he's not talking, she turns towards him, she sees that he's looking at her, she's shy, she tucks her errant curl behind her ear, she clears her throat and stares back at the screen. Shaan comes to the world, rubs his hair with his hands, ruffling it.

Shaan: so everything done??

Khanak: yeah, thanks (smiles at him and starts packing her stuff)

Shaan: Khanak, are you free in afternoon???

Khanak: not sure, but why???

Shaan: maine socha ki, can we have lunch together???

Khanak: I don't think so, sorry but I had promised Raj, that I'll be accompanying him.

Shaan(frustrated) : Raj!! (gets up) how can I forget him(shakes his head)

Khanak: im sorry, lekin…

Shaan: no Khanak, tum mere liye tumhari date thodi na thodogi (anger raising)

Now its Khanak's turn to get even more frustrated, her morning headache is back.She is furious.

Khanak: thanks for understanding Dr. Shaan (sarcastic) I think I should leave now (furiously leaves the room)

Shaan can't believe her, I can't believe this, mujhe uspe ghussa hona hai, lekin nahi, balki madam mujhse gussa hoke gayi hai, ggirlsss… He had actually called Dr.Lata and had indirectly asked her whether he can help Khanak, as he had heard her conversation. She was at first surprised, then she had agreed.He cools himself down after sometime, talks to himself. Lekin yaar, I shouldn't have spoke to her like that, she has cleared it to me, that she and Raj are friends, but what's the need to go lunch with him? Chal beta Shaan lagtha hai sorry bholna padega. But before he could her, he's summoned to OT.

Khanak is furious, while walking in the corridors, I wanted to tell him, that mein aur raj are going to attend a conference in college, which they had to attend, lekin nahi, uuggghhh!!! This is so bad… She just leaves from there.

When Shaan is done, its already half past 2, he asks about Khanak in the reception, he gets to know that all post graduates have gone to their college to attend the conference. He feels sorry for her. He dials her number, but the phone is switched off. He leaves the hospital.

After her conference, she picks up Aayush from his friend's house, she thanks them. She's late to Shaan's house. Aayush had got freshen up and changed to his homely clothes, Khanak is still in her chudidhar.vShe had driven her car, Aayush's talk had made her calm, and laugh heartily for the first time in the whole day.

They reach Khandelwal's house, she rings the bell, Harilal opens it(servant, she had met him yesterday) she smiles at him.

Khanak: Madhvi aunty nahi hai??

Harilal: jee who… Suddenly they can hear an old lady's voice….

She turns around to see, she can see an old lady, Khanak wonders, Madhvi comes at that moment

Madhvi: Khanak, Aayush andar aao (turns to old lady) mom yeh Khanak hai, maine aapko bataayatha na.

Old lady: ooh haan, Khanak, idhar aao beta kitnaa pyaara naam hai aapka.

Khanak is wondering, she looks at Madhvi.

Madhvi: Khanak, yeh shaan ki dadi hai. (smiles sweetly)

Khanak does a Namaste, Aayush runs near dadi, aap Shaan uncle ke dadi ho, kya main aapko dadi bhula saktha hun?? (asks sweetly)

Dadi: zaroor beta (makes him sit next to her) aap Aayush ho na, kitna pyaara bachcha hai, haina Madhvi?

Madhvi smiles and nods. Khanak seats herself next to Aayush.

Khanak: lekin aap toh kal aanewale the na??

Dadi: haan beta, humne socha inko surprise karthe hai, yaha aakar pata chala ki Madhvi was planning a surprise party (smiles sweetly) aur Khanak beta tum bhi mujhe dadi keh sakthi ho!!

Khanak: jee dadi (smiles sweetly) aunty (to Madhvi) aapka bada beta bi aagaya??

Madhvi: haan Khanak, they have also come, they are resting in their room

They are talking freely….