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Posted: 13 years ago

AwesomeChandana

Muahhh Loved the part :)

Yiiipppeee I am right, Dadi Is gonna polay cupid to mialo these two. Dadi is Rockstar, I loved it she reminded khanak to visit & Khanak agreed for the sake of aayush. Awesome, I love the way u have written first two para's. awesome !!!

Khanak's Insecurities & shaan's understanding Described amazingly Dear, A reader immediately feels connected to the, brilliantly written !!! Khanak is scared as her feelings are growing with every passing moments & same is happening with shaan too. but this mutual display of emotion called "Love" is not giving her any joy instead its scaring her. WHY??? I serio wanna know know what had happened two years back? She was in relationship before? Like arranged decided by her parents? I am completely cluesless & gying to know about it now. Kab bataogi?????

Shaan is such a sweet heart, I loved the way he respects her, He gave her a ride & they picked up aayush from school. I loved the Bond shared by Aayush & Shaan. todays best mnoment Shaan aayush & khanak entering in Khandelwal house together like a family & Dadi wishing them to be together, Superb Dear. Loved the way u wrote that.

Khanak loves Khandelwals too but she respect them the most as they treat Aayush as there own Kid, Loved the bonding between them, Specially Khushboo & khanak :) Akshay asking her to make Kheer & Aayush parising his Mom ka khana …Super cute, he is such a cutie pie.

Loved the song & way Shaan joined her. first byb giving music & later singing for her, Awesome. LOL U are so cute u gave English translation of Song too. Awesome !!

Sorry forgot but I loved khanak & shaan's Convo outside the school. Specially the way made her smile. & his sentence about doc are not god. Beautifully written,

Awesome dear …………Waiting for the next part.

Love
Pranjal.

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice part...both the singer are entertaining khandelwals...loved the song...very apt to the situation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh i loved this song very much and the film too
awesome especially the line " u can heal my pain" was killing man
waiting for their night out bcoz i think they r not going to sleep instead talk talk and talk
oh our budthal khanak she thinks that if she tell shan her concern and why she is avoiding him then he will back off but our shan is not backing off instead he will make her to accept her feelings and will not let go of her ever 😊
waiting for next plz update it tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved d lyrics of dis song...😃

sooo night out ka din aa gya...shaan is soo happy...😆😆 n dat line u cn heal my pain lolz...hope she heal his pain soon...😆😆

khanak is part of khandelwal family nw n shez gonna make kheer...n shez singing n shan playing guitar wowww hope khanak share her feeling wid shaan soon...😃

waiting wht will happ nxt..whole night is der...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update Chandu
Shaan was vry happy coz it was his first time to pick Khanak
they went to pick Aayush n dat healing wala part was lovely
Khanak will make kheer n she sang the song
loved the lyrics
raat abhi baaki hai Jaani 😆
Awaiting for night at khandelwal n Khanak to share her feelings to shaan
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
yipeee she's staying at khandelwals place
and em happy that she came with shaan
hmm its make a lovely couple and complete pic ayush shaan and khanak
the song selection was superb
loved it that he finished the song
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update chandu😊

Friday night has come...shaan so happy as well as aayush ...but khanak so tense 😊 wow kheer ..she gonna make kheer and singing part cute with beautiful song...

now hole night is remain what happen that night...waiting for your next update...


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update chandu...
Now khandelwals going to taste khanak's food...someone is very anxious to taste actually😉
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO😊

@ aasma - Thanks a lot aasma😊

@ pranjal - bataongi bataongi, thoda sa patience😃 Thanks a lot lot pranjal😊

@ maneesha - Thanks a lot maneesha😊

@ Jaisyjazz - even i love the movie😃 when i was writing the part, the song played in tv, just added it😊 i think u've got it right, night talk with shanak😉 Thanks a lot jaisy😊

@ Snigdhanagar - Thanks a lot sneha😊 yep!! still the night is waiting😉

@ heer - Thanks a lot heer😊 yep!! abhi baki hai😉

@ rida - Thanks a lot rida😊

@ Janavi - Thanks a lot janavi😊

@ ktym - Thanks a lot mounika😊 yes he is😆

Thanks for liking it - neethurose, ONAego
Thanks a lot for liking the tale😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊

Part 12

All of them are clapping happily, Khanak is clapping for Shaan and smiling and Shaan is clapping for Khanak. Shaan comes near to Khanak. All are busy.

Shaan: iss barr bhi tumne baazi mar li (in her ear with a smile)

Khanak: I don't think so, (looks at him) not bad, Im really surprised!!

Shaan: that I could play guitar??

Khanak: and you could sing, you never told me (mock upset)

Shaan: tum baat kaha karthi ho, what's wrong Khanak?? (worried)

Khanak: actually mujhe ussi ke bare mein baat karni thi (serious)

Aayush comes running to them, first he hugs Shaan, Khanak is surprised

Aayush: uncle aap bhi bahut achche gaate ho (sweetly)

Shaan: achcha, thank you (picks him up) lekin aapki mom ne bhi toh gaana gaaya hai.

Aayush: mom toh har din gaathi hai, she's the best, lekin aapne pehli baar gaya hai toh (he pecks him on his cheek) yeh aap ke liye. Shaan smiles at him.

Khanak is happy to see the bonding between them. All of them join, there is loads of laughter and more talking, all are enjoying it to the core, Khanak's bonding with Khandelwal's grown more strong. As promised she's preparing kheer. Khushboo is accompanying her in the kitchen. They have become great friends. Khanak is reminded the relation she shared with her bhabhi, it was the same, but now she thinks, this relation is better but something different, both of them enjoy each other's company…

Kheer is served to everyone. She is eagerly waiting, she's nervous. She looks at Shaan, Shaan takes a spoonful, he's impressed, actually he loved it, he just eats it. All others praise her, but the person she's expecting is not telling anything. Dadi watches her starring at Shaan. Shaan easily gets up and goes near her.

Shaan: can I get a second serving?? (with a smile, all others are busy with Aayush but dadi is watching them, with a smile) Khanak smiles and nods. She moves to the dinning table, where she had kept the bowl, Shaan follows her.

Shaan: so you love cooking??

Khanak: I think so!!! (serves for him, he takes it politely)

Shaan: im waiting for the day, u cook something for me (smiles)

Khanak is upset, how is she suppose to tell him, his expectations are growing. She just moves out, without giving him a second look, as her eyes were filled with tears. Dadi notices that,but she doesn't ask any question in front of everyone. Our Shaan once again confused,looks at dadi, she assures him and goes behind Khanak.

Khanak enters into the guest room, which was given to her and Aayush. She stands near the window, wipes her tears, she wouldn't break down easily, she's not that weak… Dadi comes and keeps her hand on her shoulder, Khanak slowly turns towards her, she tries to be normal.

Khanak: Dadi!! (smiles) aap??

Dadi: kyun tumhe laga Shaan hai?? (naughty smile)

Khanak: jee?? (shocked)

Dadi: Shaan ne mujhe sab bataaya hain, aur usne yeh bhi bataaya hai ki aaj kal tum bahut sad rehthi ho?? (silently seeking for answer)

Khanak: (moves around, so that she won't be able to meet her eyes) Dadi I don't know, aap kya baat kar rahi hai, meri aur Shaan ke beech mein aisa kuch nahi hain…

Dadi: agar aisa hai, toh meri aankhon mein dekhkar kaho.

Khanak turns around to see her, she takes a long breathe in. Dadi makes her sit on the bed, she sits opposite to her…

After half an hour or so, Khanak and Dadi comes out, Shaan notices that. Khanak and dadi both are smiling. Shaan is happy to see her smiling.

Sunil: arrey maa, Khanak kaha reh gaye the, maa aapko yaad hai, hum log Kashmir gaye the. (smiling)

Dadi: (both of them take their seats) yaad kyun nahi, wahi tour hai na jisme Shaan darr gaya tha (giggling)

Shaan: dadi!! Dad bus hogaya ha (irritated)

Khanak: kyun?? Aisa kya hua tha??? (excited)

Shaan: kuch nahi hua tha, Dad please…

Khushboo: arrey aisa kaise Shaan, pata hai Khanak, hum sab log Kashmir gaye the, u know waha pe Horse riding, trekking, rafting famous hai na, Shaan aise thaise karke, Horse riding kar li who dhi usne chup chap nahi kiya, sab logon ko suna raha tha, especially uss ghode ko (all of them burst out laughing, even Khanak joins them, Shaan is embarrassed.)

Shaan: bhabhi, aap ka kya tha, Bhaiyya aapke saath the, aur mom aur dad ek ghode par, aur mujhe bita diya akele, pata hai who ghoda teek se chal bhi nahi raha tha, mujhe toh aisa lagtha tha ki mein pakka ghirne wala tha, thank god aisa kuch nahi hua…

Everyone starts laughing once again

Akshay: Khanak tumhe uss ka chehra dekna chaiyiye tha, it was so funny…(laughs)

Khushboo: baad mein humne, matlab mein dad, Akshay aur Shaan, trekking ke liye gaye the, pata hai usne kya kiya… (laughs)

Akshay: oh my god, usse yaad karke aur bhi hassi aati hai…

Aayush: Kya hua tha??

Khushboo: (cotrolling her laughter) woh, he got ready, he climbed half the way, then (laughing) we don't know what happened, he started to yell there, to make him get down…

Khanak: are you serious!! (laughing)

Shaan: stop it aah bahut ho gaya (gets up and leaves the place) All stops laughing when he gets up, and once again starts laughing after he leaves…

Shaan is irritated from his family, he's in his room's balcony, looking outside, Kya zaroorat thi, khanak ko yeh sab batani ki, abb kya sochegi woh meri bare mein… hits his hand on the balcony rail.

Khanak enters the room slowly, with kheer in her hand…


Please comment😊 guys suggest some place nearby to Mumbai for picnic😊

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