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ktym thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updates...
Loved them...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update chandu...
Happy new year to you!!!
update the next part soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😃
Thank you to sweetcharvi, kp_yasharan, poo_j, maneesha28889, suchi_245, ktym, diyak, virika01, jaisyjazz, snigdhanagar, heer_85, IF_rida, aasma1, monika and pranju for liking and commenting😊
Here it is, im nervous, i don't know whether i've done justice or not..do tell😳
@Jaisy- ok..i had not planned for Dhruv's entry, will have to think about it..will surely try to add it😊

Part 85

A perfect climate, a perfect atmosphere, a perfect spot, and yes the important thing, our perfect couple!! On a perfect date!!

Shaan had booked a spot, which is quite outside of the city, but still nearer, but now what matters is, about the look of the spot, it seems to be some resort, a table booked next to pool, and all over the place is decorated with the glittering lights and candles on the table..A bunch of red roses were placed on the table, a sound system at a distance, moon lighting over the place..

Can you believe its Shaan, who planned this?? If anyone would have said to him, to do something like this before few months he would have easily denied..But now, since he's in deep love with his wife, and yes with some assistance, he's managed this..

When Samar had given idea of date, Shaan disapproved, but eventually Shaan had agreed, today he'll cover up his mistake, today he'll get his answers for his questions, today…..This day, will be true, may be it sounds like a fairy tale story, but nope!! They are going to experience this real!! A reality which seems like a fairy story!!

He stood at the entrance, wearing a black tuxedo, with white shirt, he was waiting for her, he's nervous, at the same time excstatic, its just him and her and all other things will be placed second to them..

Without making him wait, there she comes, wearing a shoulderless blue gown which goes upto her ankles, which he had wanted her to wear, Khanak wanted to wear saree, but it was Shaan's wish, and Khanak not fulfilling Shaan's wish, nah..that's impossible!!

She's wearing diamond studs in her ears and diamond bangles in her wrists, her engagement ring, these jewels glitter in the dark, her hair half tied up, and half left out, shining in the lights, making him realize, that she wasn't any other woman, she was his Khanak..

Her eyes lit up seeing him, her perfect man, looking ravishing, wonderful, the most handsome guy, but he had his eyes only for her..The thought makes her spirits pouring, she's nervous too, her hands sweaty too, shy at the same time, but she can't help herself from smiling at him..which he returns back to her..

She remembers the past days, from the day he had landed in Dehradun, she had wanted to hold him, she atmost being selfish wanted him to her, at times she use to just stand and look at him, unknowingly she would move to him, at the time she realized that she was too close to him, she would withdraw, fear of hurting him, you may thinking in what way?? She, when she had left him, she had thought that she was not the right person for him, she didn't want him to compel him, she didn't want to throw herself..but he was irresistible..!!

When she had got to know that, he was attending a case there in her hospital, her wishes were scattered to the floor, she had thought that he wasn't there for her…but Shaan was Shaan, he had proved her wrong in the next moment..He was there only for her..!!

She bends her head, as she approaches him. He breathes in deeply, for him she looks the most beautiful, stunning woman than anyone..She had brought happiness and liveliness in his life. He didn't want anything more than that, he just wanted her in his life..all he thought about was her!!

He extended his right hand for her, smiling widely, she accomplished by holding his hand and smiling too..When he held her hand, he felt her hands were sweaty, she would never change..He thought…

As they walked in wordless, she took in the ambiance; her eyes brimmed with salty tears, she's now flying above all the clouds, she looked at him.. On the other hand, he was waiting for her to tell something, at that moment she looked up at him, in the next moment she had leaned on his shoulders, looking around….

Khanak: Thanks a lot!! (softly)

Shaan, simply smiled, embracing her, as cool air hits them..

Shaan: abhi se thank you, I've got many more things for you.. (looking down at her)

Hearing that, she releases herself from him and looks questioningly at him, he just escorts her to the table holding her hand..

When they reached the table, he left her hand but only to kneel down in front of her and grabbing that bunch of red roses from his right hand, only to hold it up to her, she accepts with her million dollar smile.

He stands up; she embraces the flowers in her arms, shivering a bit. He knows that, but still stays calm, what he'll be doing now, he has never done that before, he had never shared his part of thoughts when he fails, even with his family..

Without any more ado, he steps in, extends his right hand once again but for..

Shaan: May I have a dance Mrs. Khandelwal??

Her eyes wide open, but he doesn't wait for affirmation, as he knows her answer, he wounds his arm around her waiste, his other hand gets the flowers from her, she lets it go, her arms go up to his arms..

A soft music plays, both of them sways smoothly to the music, they have done this several times, so its easy for both of them, both are looking into each other's eyes, her hands goes up to his nape of neck, he brings her more closer by pulling her by her waiste, his one hand holds her waiste firmly, his another hand, cups her cheek, caresses her cheek and her neck, at that moment she fists her hand on his shirt and closes her eyes..

His head now drowned in her neck, breathing had become the most difficult for both of them, but still not ready to let go of eachother..

Khanak: I missed you very badly Shaan!! (eyes closed leaning on his shoulder)

He slowly releases, and looks at her, before he could open himself up, she's opening herself.. His one hand caresses her hair, telling her to continue what she wanted to tell him..

Khanak: (she leans on his chest, now her eyes opened) Last month..(she inhales deeply) I've been worst Shaan, harr baar aisa lagtha ki, tum yahi meri paas ho, but when I used to turn around to just run into your arms, but..

Shaan: im just right here Khanak!! (wraps his arms more tighter around her)

Shaan: And yes, aaj ke liye, it becomes 2 months from that day..

Khanak:hmm..Shaan..

Shaan: nahi Khanak, aaj main baat karunga aur tum sunogi!! (decides)

Shaan: aur tum bheech main kuch nahi bhologi, alright?? (She nods while they are still swaying)

Shaan: Khanak, im so sorry for that day..(at that moment she tries to get away from him to just look into his eyes, but he holds her to his heart)

Shaan: that day, I thought, I failed you..(she rubs his back, just to tell him that she's right with him)

Shaan: you were so enthusiastic while filling the form, I just felt that…

At this moment, she forces herself away from him, his eyes are holding his tears back, she just know how he mights be feeling, but she had to clear him..

Khanak: you never failed me Shaan!! Aur nahi kabhi kar sakthe ho, your failure doesn't matter to me Shaan, what matters to me is just you, you Shaan!! (she cups his cheek, brings his head down and kisses deeply on his forehead)

He had his eyes closed, she leans her forehead on his, he opens his eyes, finds her smiling, he's relieved, relaxed, safe in her arms..

Khanak: I Love you Shaan!! (Hearing those words from his wife, he hugs her, she hugs him back too)

Shaan: Thank you Khanak!! For being in my life..(speaks into her neck)

Khanak: agar aisa baat hain, then, I should be telling Thank you for about more than 10 times a day for you..(jokes)

Shaan chuckles, and looks back into her eyes, releasing her from that bone crushing hug..

Shaan: kyun??

Khanak: aur nahi toh kya, u take care of me whole day, meri khaane ki, padayi ki, mere bte..(at that moment he closes her mouth by keeping his index finger on her lips, she stops)

Shaan: hamara beta Khanak!! (her lips curve to lovely smile under his finger)

He removes his finger only to trace them back with his thumb, her smiles fades away, she closes her eyes, shivering under his touch..He looks at her eyes closed, he knows that even she's thinking about the same thing as he is..

In no time his lips covers hers, his hand slipping into her hairs, and another hand holding her by her waiste, her one hand holding his hand which is in her hairs, and another hand at his nape..Both are elighted, to have each other with them, their life just perfect..for them..

After about few minutes, their foreheads leaning, breathing heavily, his eyes opened and her eyes closed…

After an hour, they reach the house back, 5 minute left to strike midnight..Shaan holds her back at the gate, she looks curiously at him..

Shaan: andar jaana zaroori hain?? (her petite waiste in his arms)

Khanak: (smiles, her arms around his neck) ofcourse jaana zaroori hain Mr. Khandelwal!! Remember Aayush wants to have dinner with us, aur hum already late hain..(at the end, she pouts)

Shaan: Khanak!! (wines)

Khanak: (she gets hold of his hand which is around her waiste) chalo Shaan..

The door is opened, but its dark, Khanak pulls him..Shaan is surprised..

Shaan: Khanak itna andera kyun hain?? Lagtha hain Aayush so gaya hain, chalo hum waapis resort chalthe hain..(he gets her hand and turns back to the door)

At that time, lights come back, and there's loud cheering yelling SURPRISE!!

Shaan turns around startled, though it was Raj, Nisha and Aayush only, it was enough for the roof to come down..Shaan looks at Khanak surprised, actually shocked..

Khanak: (comes closer) Happy Birthday Shaan!! (smiles gloriously)

Shaan: (smiles broadly) you remembered??

Khanak: ofcourse I do!! Tumhara birthday aur mujhe yaad na ho, aisa nahi ho saktha..(shakes her head vehemently)

Shaan chuckles, she's still smiling..while our group is impatient..

Raj: arrey waha pe khade hokar romance karne ka iradha hain kya?? (his eyebrows dancing, teases)

Shaan and Khanak looks at him, smiles..

Aayush: papa aao na, jaldi se cake khaato, aur yeh cake mom ne banaya hain..(smelling ino yummy chocolate cake)

Shaan: really?? (turns to Khanak)

Khanak: hum bhi surprise de sakthe hain!! (her eyes glittering)

Raj and Aayush are impatient, pulls him, there's loud cheering from everyone and finally cake is cut, by Shaan, first piece goes to Aayush, Aayush takes fully but doesn't share with Shaan..

Everyone laughs at his gesture, the next piece is ofcourse for Khanak, she eats a bit and feeds the same piece to him, he's all smiles, and yes others too….

Lots os eating takes place, while Shaan and steal glances at each other, asusually she's the same, teasing around, Raj to join also, Shaan and Nisha team up against Khanak and Raj, while our Aayush is the refree to calm them down..

While Nisha gets closer to Khanak,

Nisha: lagtha hain aaj bed main teen log so sakthe hain, ya phir Ayush ko lejao kya?? (her eyebrows dancing)

Khanak looks at her with open mouth, and Khanak whacks her on her arm..

They get back into the party mood, Aayush is jumping on the couch,

Khanak: ek minute..Aayush bait jao..Shaan surprise abhi katam nahi hui hain..Raj!! (calls out for Raj, winks at him, while Shaan looks on)

In the next moment, webcam is on and all members of Khandelwal family, shouts Happy Birthday for Shaan, Shaan is too overjoyed, wishes are exchanged….

After the end of the call, all are seated on couch..

Shaan: Thank you so much guys, for making this day memorable. (smiles broadly)

Raj: arrey abhi katam kaha hua hain..(winks)

Shaan: aur surprises hain??

Khanak: yep!!

She hands him an envelope, he opens it curiously, finds his flight ticket to Mumbai..

Shaan is shocked at the same time upset..

Shaan: Khanak yeh..(thinking that only he's going home)

Raj:arrey bhai poora kholo na..

Shaan: ok..(unsure) opens to find his, Aayush and Khanak's ticket too, and that to for tomorrow's evening..

Shaan is highly surprised this time, they are returning back and that too tomorrow, he just wants to lift Khanak up and twirl around with her in joy, but he just controls his amusement..


Please comment😊

abhi raat baki hain😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the date was just PERFECT loved it
and finally they let it out their feelings and everything is hunky dory between them again thank god 😃
what shan's birthday what a big surprise
awww loved the celebration so sweet
yayyy yes yes yes what a birthday gift they r going back to their family yayyy
oh hooo raat abhi baki hain maarne ka irada hain kya chandu update soon 😊
hey thanks for considering my thoughts :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper update Chand 😊
i loved it so much 😊
wow!! shaan became Romeo heheh date flowers and all how romantic 😃
its like i m watching them live on screen 😃
ayee!! hayee!!! khanak wore shaan's choice dress i love it
the description of khanak's and shaan outfit was awesome yaar
both were looking hot as mein neh undono go imagine kiya
shaan is very romantic jaanab keh aabh rang samne arahahe 😆but both were nervous heheh areh!!! pehli baar mil raheho kya SR toh hogaya tum donokah kitni baar 😉 ☺️ aur ageh bhi bohut honge kyu Chand 😉
shaan extend his hand to her he kneel down and gave her roses, shaan felt her hands sweating yes khanak won't shaan 😃this was awesome shaan
khanak is fully surprise heheh and then he hold her for slow dance ayee!! hayee!!! ☺️ ☺️
loved how they swing with music and the whole description of the way they hold each other and followed by their talk
n yes shaan said humara beta i loved that so much
kiss was very hot 😉 i was waiting for that keh abh kiss karega aur kiya yuppiiee!!!! 🥳with out kiss date is incomplete 😉
they came back after sometime and there was a surprise for shaan as well for us i love this shaan birthday surprise 🥳 🥳
khanak has planned every thing it reminds me of RBO kya surprise sirf aap deh sakte ho ayee!!! hayeee!!!!
they cut a cake n shaan fed Aayush first and he ate the whole piece naughty boy
shaan and khanak too fed each other with the same piece of khanak
asehi pyaar bartahai shaan keep going heheh 😃
web came par pura khandelwal family this was awesome
another surprise shanak n Aayush are going back to Mumbai yuppiiee!!!!!! but first shaan saw his ticket only n felt bad kya yaar shaan thinkse dekho aur tickets hai usme
loved Nisha teasing khanak about a bed naughty Nisha 🤣
ulala!!!! raat abhi baki hai kya baat hai Chand 😉 me blushing in advance ☺️ ☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely ...Beautiful part Dear 👏

Loved the part ...Complete Dreamy sheamy Mode mein lejane wala update likha hain aap ne 😃

Shanak date after a long time ...Loved the ambiance & all arrangements by Shaan it was beautiful & Romantic. he had planned so much for khanak 😃 loved how he did all the things form start till the dance & finally they talked freely with each other 😊 loved that little part their actions spoke more than their words. Loved that.

Khanak dragged shaan to home back & now its time for her to give surprises to him 😊 lovely it shaan's birthday today & all these made it super special for him 😃...BTw i loved the discription of khanak's attire 👏 Khanak made cake for him & hios gift was mumbai tickets 😃 superb msg from Khandelwals overall it was wonderful

so in mext part they will be in Mumbai ...waht abt nisha? uska role khatam ?? i am gonna miss her 😊

Waiting for next

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...lovely update...

D date ws beautiful... D attires, hug,emotions... Evrythng ws so touching 😊
n also romntc 😳

n its shaan's b'day... 😲 😃

lovely surprs party...

Waiting for d ni8 part... 😉

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wat a romantic and perfect date...
Loved it...
lol raat abhi baaki hai...😆
cant wait for the raat wali update...😉
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved this romantic Shaan!!!😃 The date was perfect..👏 Good finally Shaan shared about his feelings on that day..Khanak too understood it..Wow!!! Its Shaan's birthday!!!🥳 Awesome!!! Khanak's and everyone's surprise was so nice!!!👏

Looking forward and thanks for writing a fabulous update..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chandu...finallly u updated!!!
Loved d date...ohhh its shaan b day...khanak planned surprise fr hin...n k family wished him..dat was surprise..yayyy dey r going baq to mumbaiii...
N raat bki hai ...can't wait. Aj update dooo!!!

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