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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello😊
Thank you all for showering you're love on this taleπŸ˜ƒ
im immensely glad, by seeing ur responses, though it has decreased..i also know that people are busy, i understand as even im juggling over here..
im really sorry won't be able to update today, feeling sleepy..
Will update tomorrow,
till then take care and lots of hugs πŸ€—
once again thank you allπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi doc update was lovely...date was really lovely yaar...shaans birthday surprise was really nice...birthday gift three of them going back wow...its nice..okay waiting for the night ...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m waiting for an update aaj milega keh mein jau




Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HelloπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks a lot to sweetcharvi, kp_yasharan, poo_j, diyak, neethurose, maneesha28889, minnu345, suchi_245, monika_aa, ktym, jaisyjazz, niki_rbo, heer_85, -pranjal-, IF_rida, snigdhanagar, for liking and commenting😊
sorry for the delay, had been too engrossed to learn the language of my nephewπŸ˜†
Here it is, i don't think so i've been able to make justice or notπŸ˜•

Part 86

Aayush: mom mujhe neend aa rahi hain!! (wines)

Raj: chalo yaar, bahut dair ho gayi hain, sab so jaathe hain..(falls on to the sofa, on which he sleeps)

Aayush: mom aaj mujhe aapke paas so na hain..

Hearing this, Shaan throws a knowing look at Khanak, Raj and Nisha clears their throat simultaneously, Khanak closes her eyes in embarrassment, Nisha is overjoyed, she teases Shaan this time..

Nisha: haan toh koi baat nahi, Aayush aaj aap hamare saath so sakthe hain, I mean, me you and Khanak..(smiling widely)

Shaan swears under his breath and he's spitting fire at Nisha, through his eyes..

Khanak is left in the middle, and she has got nothing to talk, nothing to argue, actually there's nothing under her control..But Aayush is still with his papa..

Aayush: mujhe papa aur aap ke saath sona hain!! (to Khanak)

Shaan's smile return back, Nisha backs off from teasing, as she finds Shaan and Khanak cute, and Shaan had been quite friendly with her and she very well knows that Khanak loves her family a lot..Her heart makes a wish for a family like this, she goes off to somber mode, as she knows that its her last day with Khanak, she wanted to spend time with her, at the same time she didn't want to go in between love birds, well she can still claim Khanak's morning and afternoon..Nisha smiles..

Raj: chalo yaar, decide ho gaya, Khanak Shaan aur Aayush ek kamre main, abb teek hain abb jao yaar sone aur mujhe bhi sone do..(shuts his eyes with his hands)

Aayush gets hold of his mom's hand, and pulls her into the room, Shaan follows grinning..

Nisha looks at the door closed behind them, she sighs happily, and turns around to go to her room, but she's stopped by..

Raj: suno..agar tumhe apne bed pe sone main problem hain toh main waha pe so saktha hun..

Nisha gasps loudly and opens her eyes wide open in shock..Raj, clears the confusion..

Raj: I mean..tum yaha couch par aur main bed par..(gives a weird look, as even he doesn't know, why did he say that)

Nisha: excuse me!! shayad app yeh bhulrahe hain, ki yeh mera ghar hain, and I think you're fine over there..(before Raj even recover, she enters her room and closes her room's door)

Raj wonders, for himself, why did he tell that?? Why was he feeling so easy with her?? He remembered that, he never teased an unknown girl like this, he would behave normal, why did he felt in ease with her??

Raj: uff!! This so confusing!! Forget it!! Abb so jathe hain..(declares to himself and hits his sack)

In the room, where Shaan, Khanak and Aayush are staying..Aayush is sleeping in between Shaan and Khanak, but still not ready to sleep, Shaan turned towards Khanak, his head is anchored by his left hand, just staring at Khanak, Khanak is sleeping on her back, she knows exactly if she turns towards Aayush, Shaan will grab her in one or the other way, but she's happy, the way her life lead by him, she's just enjoying each and every second of her spend with him..She sighs deeply, staring at the ceiling..

Aayush: Mom!! (a bit louder)

Khanak: hmm.. (Shaan is also listening but for now his eyes are on his wife)

Aayush: mom, im feeling lonely.. (Shaan's gaze now shift to Aayush)

Shaan: Aayush?? (Khanak also looks at Aayush)

Aayush: matlab, I want someone to play with..

Khanak: ofcourse!! Main aur aapke papa hain na!! (smiles and reassures him, Shaan just smiles)

Aayush: Mom!! (turns towards her) I mean someone who is small as iam!!

Shaan: matlab??

Aayush: (turns towards his papa) I want brother or sister to play with..

Hearing that Shaan widely grins, while Khanak turns red and once again lays on her back…

Shaan: of course Aayush!!

Aayush: really?? (is happy too and hugs his papa)

Shaan hugs him back, while hugging he gets hold ok Khanak's hand, she looks startled at him, he's smiling, she returns a shy smile..Aayush falls asleep in his papa's arms, even Shaan and Khanak soon falls asleep as they are together now, Khanak cuddling herself more close to him and Aayush, Shaan secures Aayush is still in between them, but Shaan and Khanak both know that now they are complete, they won't be wishing more from this.

Something told them not to worry, but just be there by the side of their loved ones..

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah…..

Shaan wakes up in the morning, something told that this will be his best birthday ever, turns to her side, but..

He shots up in the bed, she's not there even Aayush is not there, Shaan fears whether the last incident was all a dream, he recalls each and every moment of last night, it didn't seem to..but where is she??

He gets up completely from bed, he can hear voices from outside which is getting louder, wait..its her shouting, Aayush's laughing sound can be heard, even Raj yelling can be heard…

He steps out of the room, only to bump into his wife, she falls right in to his arms, at first she's startled but when she sees him, she breaks into a huge smile, this enlightens him, he too smiles, he has got nothing to fear, they would have stood like that forever if it was not for Raj's voice..Raj is running towards them..

Raj: Shaan usse chodna mat!! (Shaan is startled, Khanak is horrified, she gets out of Shaan's arms and goes behind Shaan, now Shaan is in between Khanak and Raj, Aayush is laughing continuously)

Shaan: Raj!! (shielding his wife) what's wrong?? Tum log subah subah?? (Khanak is laughing at the same time hiding from Raj)

Raj: Shaan!! (stops stretching for her) tumhari biwi ko kaho hasna band kare..

Hearing that Khanak starts laughing hardly..Shaan is confused, he guesses may be his wife was playing pranck on Raj and Raj is extremely frustrated for now..

Shaan: kohi mujhe batayega ki kya ho raha hain?? (looks at Khanak and then Raj, Khanak is trying hard to control her laughter, her face is flushed, her eyes is filled with tears with the amount of laughing)

Khanak: who kya hain..(she's not able to control her laughter, she's helpless, starts laughing once again)

Raj: (irritated) Khanak!! Tumne phirse ek aur baar phir mere laptop ko haath lagaya na, toh dekh na. (warns her)

Khanak: Excuse me!! woh mera hain!! (stand in front of him)

Shaan: guys chill!! Khanak tum itna hass kyun rahi ho??

At that moment Nisha comes out of her room all ready to hospital, all eyes shift to her, for some reason, Raj is disturbed by her presence, Khanak is broadly smiling, as she can't laugh in front of Nisha..

Nisha: (she has no idea) what happened?? Aap sab log mujhe aise kyun dekhrahe ho??

Khanak: kuch nahi!! (moves towards Nisha, Khanak is just smiling)

Raj clears his throat, goes back to couch and sits next to Aayush with the laptop, Shaan is left confused, but this was not new for him so he just leaves the topic..

Nisha: Khanak!! Hospital nahi chalogi..

Khanak: ofcourse chal rahi ho na, I have to hand over the cases to Dr. Kalra and mera letter bhi toh dena hain!! Shaan tum??

Shaan: haan mujhe bhi chalna hain!! I have to make the papers for shifting of Nikhil (patient which Shaan was treating) to Delhi…

Nisha: finally Nikhil agreed to move!! Thanks to you Shaan!!

Shaan smiles as his response, Khanak excuses herself from Nisha to return back in 5 minutes so that they can move together to the hospital her last day with Nisha and yes in Dehradun.. Shaan silently follows Khanak back to the room where they had been sleeping together after 2 months..

Khanak picks her phone from the side table, she's about to turn back but she's engulfed by her husband..She smiles and her hands are placed on his,she leans back, he smiles back at her gesture..

Khanak: Good morning Shaan and yes very Happy Birthday!! (She turns towards him, her hands wound around his neck, his hands around her waiste)

Shaan: Thank you Mrs. Khandelwal!!

He leans in, she acknowledges as she holds on to him, and he gets his morning kiss from his beautiful wife!!

Khanak had rushed into the hospital with Nisha, both of them taking the roads laughing, sharing, and teasing about each and every thing. Nisha did ask about the morning thing but Khanak had blowed off the topic. Khanak exactly knew what was the situation, Khanak was happy for both Raj and Nisha..They would take time, but she knew that they are going to make a sweet and cute couple!!

In the hospital, Khanak had informed the hospital authorities and had submitted her letter, since she was on a temporary job, so it was easy to relieve her from her job…

Kalra: Dr. Khanak all set, to get back?? Aapne toh hume time bhi nahi de paayi, itni jaldi waapis bhi jaa rahi ho??

Khanak: yes sir!! (sheepish) im sorry I had to take this decision..

Kalra: ofcourse!! I understand Dr. Khanak..(smiles, Khanak returns the smile)

At that moment, Shaan knocks and enters Kalra's cabin, Khanak is surprised to see him, Kalra smiles and tells Shaan to take a seat..

Kalra: aap bahut achche acting kar lete hain Dr. Shaan.. (smirks)

Shaan: aapke assistant se thoda kam sir!! (smiles, while throwing a glance at Khanak)

Khanak opens her mouth, but remains silent in front of her senior..

Kalra: achcha?? Bhai, hamre liye tho bahut sweet hi hain (smiles fondly at Khanak)

Khanak smiles widely, Shaan smiles too..

Kalra: toh aapne aapka case hand over kar diya??

Shaan: yes sir!! Dr. Nandini is going to continue with him, I hope everything goes fine with that kid..(serious)

Kalra: we hope so to!! Lekin kohi guarantee nahi hain..(matter of fact)

Shaan is suddenly somber, Khanak notices that, but still she keeps quiet, after few minutes..

Shaan: ok sir!! (getting up) it was nice meeting you..(extends his hand)

Kalra: (shakes his hand) Same here!! Dr. Khanak don't forget that you're always welcome over here..

Khanak: That's sweet sir! Thanks a lot..

Kalra: oh no problem!!

After exchanging all the pleasantries, Shaan and Khanak left the cabin..

Khanak: bahut sweet hai na?? (walking along the corridors)

Shaan: hmm..lekin mujhse zyaada nahi!! (moves more closer to her)

Khanak: Shaan!! (shakes her head)

At that moment Nisha runs up to them and pulls Khanak from there, Shaan lets her go, as he knew that his wife is going to miss this friend very badly after they return back to Mumbai..

Shaan returns back to his son, Aayush had been eating Raj's head to take him out. Raj was saved by Shaan, all three of them leaves the house to have lunch outside..

At a restaurant, Shaan has bought Aayush's fav food, Raj and him are sitting opposite to each other, Aayush is busy with his ice-cream which has been bought by his papa..

Shaan: tu Mumbai nahi chal raha hain hamare saath??

Raj: hmm..i guess next week.

Shaan: ek week tak tum aur Nisha ek ghar main..not bad yaar..(chuckles)

Raj: Shaan!! Tum bhi..

Shaan: tum bhi matlab??

Raj: who sab chod..waise im going to Delhi, mom se milne, its been ages seeing her..

Shaan: oh!! When are you leaving??

Raj: kal ki flight hain!

Shaan: Thanks for coming Raj.

Raj: Shaan, main yaha pa issliye nahi hun, kyunki Khanak meri friend main yaha per issliye bhi hun kyun ki tum bhi mera friend ho!! Aur main apne friends ke saath partiality nahi kartha..(winks)

Shaan chuckles.. After their lunch, they return back to house, to find it filled by laughter, Khanak was sharing something very funny with Nisha, Aayush was elighted when he saw his mom, he hugs his mom..

Khanak hugs him back, Nisha ruffles his hair..All of them set for packing, and packing is done, time to leave..

Nisha and Khanak hug each other, then its Raj turn, Raj whispers something in her ear, Khanak giggles..

Shaan too hugs Nisha, she had been great help for them, only Khanak knew that Nisha and her won't be missing each other..

Flight had been at time and it had landed on time also..Khanak, Shaan and Aayush back in Mumbai..

It was strange fo Shaan has no one had been there to pick them, but for some reason Khanak had been smiling all the way, well it was not that surprising, as that's her usual self..

Haayyyee!! Hum apne ghar kab pahunchege!!

Please comment😊
More and more shanak moments to comeπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy finally their back
abb cant wait for shanak scenes..
and hopefully ayushs wish comes true loool
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy they r back to mumbai
awww ayush wants brother or sister thats so sweet
hey why was khanak laughing so much whats the matter?
ahh even i am having doubts that raj and nisha will hook up with each other
LOL!!! OMG raj ye kya pucha tumne nisha se if u have problem then i can sleep on ur bed thats an awesome way to ask :)
oh poor nikhil hope he gets well soon
will miss khanak and nisha's dosti :)
again khanak is smiling but ofcourse woh khush hain toh smile toh karegi but there is something else some surprise for shan hain na?
loved it update soon i m waiting for more shanak moments :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update
em glad they are back in mumbai
hmm so raj and nisha... no doubt they will be a cute couple
i liked the mor part though i dunno wht exactly happened but i found it fun to read
hmm shaan got the best b'day present ... khanak is back with him and he is treated with a kiss in the mor
lukin fwd to the k family moments
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Chand πŸ‘
Aayush wanted to sleep with khanak n Nisha πŸ˜† she is great in teasing shaan πŸ˜† poor shaan was burning keh aaj bhi meri biwi mere saath nahi hogi kya πŸ˜† at last khanak, Aayush n shaan slept in one room, shaan kept looking at khanak 😊
wow!!!! Aayush's demand is saar ankhoh par heheheh πŸ˜‰ he wanted someone to play with him he feels lonely or sidha kaha he want little sis or bro 😳 omgee!!!! shaan grin widely n khanak smile shyly ☺️ ayee!!! hayee!!!!! ☺️ good demand Aayush πŸ˜‰
shaan thought its a dream when he didn see Khanak n Aayush kyu darteh ho shaan kaal tumari date toh huithi nah khanak keh saath now be tension free 🀣 khanak is with u forever now 😊
khanak and Raj, their moments n teasing always are awesome, Raj behind khanak and she collide with her hubby πŸ˜ƒ
hayee!!! shaan koh aur kya chahiye khanak in his arm but thy part when Raj called khanak heheh!!! both friends are like kids khanak laughs and happy tears form in her eyes poor shaan is confused like me keh chakar kya hai humeh bhi toh batao toh hum bhi hasne lage πŸ˜‰ is der a pic of Nisha in that lappy Raj chupa rustam toh nahi nikla πŸ˜† fighting with Nisha bt maan neh lado puth rahehai πŸ˜†
kiss toh banti hai shanak ki its was very nice ☺️ morning kuch khass hoti hai shanak ki πŸ˜‰
hospital scene was nice 3 little conv in the cabin shaan's acting was praised by doctor Karla heheh n his reply was nice 😊
nisha n Khanak bonding has grown in few month hope thy stay in touch n be close to khanak n this will happen when Raj do something n gv a thought of his n Nisha's relation so Nisha can shift to Mumbai too πŸ˜† Chand in dono kih jodi keh bareme bhi sochna πŸ˜†
Shaan, Aayush n Raj lunch part was nice now shaan teasing Raj πŸ˜†
awww!!!!! they pack to leave Nisha n Khanak's hug make me emotional 😭 Chand Nisha koh Mumbai zarur bulana 😊
no one came to pick them may be thy all are planing surprise for shanak
awaiting for more n many many more shanak scenes πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super Awesome Update Dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Loved the whole part & bit serious too as Nisha will be missing for sometime πŸ˜’ but i am sure yeh jo love sparks chede hain tumne yeh apna rang jald dikhayenge between Raj & Nisha.πŸ˜‰ BTW i didnt get one thing. Raj is here for Next week pahle aisa bola & then he said he is going to Delhi tomorrow to meet him MOM πŸ˜•...So does this mean ki kal Nisha & Raj bhi ek dusare ko bye bolenge ?? πŸ˜• Ya Raj bus 2 din apni Mom ke pass rehke wapis Doon aayega to finish his work ? πŸ˜•

Start was awesome...Aayush wanted to sleep with mom & trust me i was laughing too when i read that line πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Nisha is cute the way she teased shaan & immidiately gave Space also was really awesome πŸ˜ƒ Raj & his one liners πŸ˜› paglet hain bilkul πŸ˜† he asked her to sleep on couth but pahle mast bola tha i can sleep on bad 😲 can so imagine Nisha's expressions πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Waah ji waah Aayush demanded baby Bro or sis to Play with & Mom dad happily agreed, 😊 LOl shaan ke toh maan ki baat chin li bete neπŸ˜‰

Morning was cute. suebh subhe uthke agar apno ke haste chahre dikhe toh us se behtar kuch nahi hota sach mein πŸ˜ƒ Khanak was teasing Raj & raj was aanoyed for that reason πŸ˜† she had seen something in his lappy πŸ˜‰ I know woh something Nisha se related tha πŸ˜› So is raj is writing daily diary or Something jis mein he wrote this strenge comfert with Nisha & how he loves teasing her ?? πŸ˜ƒ will wait for you too reveal as its confirm now that Raj-Nisha hain aage πŸ˜ƒ

Bye Bolna is so difficult sach mein 😊 khanak & Shaan bid bye to Hospital now. Loved their interaction with Kalra πŸ˜ƒ Specially being a good actor wala portion πŸ˜› cutely written πŸ‘ wow Shaan left Nisha & Khanak alone so they can talk πŸ˜ƒ as he knew how they'll miss each other. 😊 Finally shanak left doon with lods of memories πŸ˜ƒ

Shaan is confused to find no one on airpot. but i am sure khanak ne khandelwals ki madam se happening party plan kari hogi hubby ke liye ...Birthday boy jo hain aakhir πŸ˜ƒ its Rocking dear

Waiting for next πŸ˜ƒ Continue soon

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet update... πŸ˜ƒ

finally going home...

Cute shanak scens...

Waiting for more happy moments of shanak...

Update soon...

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