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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
finally shank met on the roads with khanak asking lift to shaan..
will they have a little talk abt where she needs to go..coz as we know he is going to her uncle's place for refreshing his mind n be away from all the unnecessary pressure..
do continue soon..
awaiting to know more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update shriya...eagerly waiting 4 da interaction part between shanak during journey!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx to all who read it and or pressed the *like button* ...also spent some time to comment 😊 .
*shantanu - khanak ..journey begins **
Khanak went towards the car .
while the female police was still looking on .
Shantanu for *courtesy sake* and primarily because female police was looking on ., opened the
back side door for khanak ***to get in**.
and the female police saw this .
.immediately she rushed to him and said * No..no... no back seat... let her
place the luggages at the back seat., and sit in the front ... Mr...Please... let her sit in the front .
.. As per current scenario ..an young girl sitting all alone at the back seat is not safe*****.
Shantanu was for a moment irked at the female police showing too much of concern for khanak..
After all ...he was already doing an act *out of his way* and above that female police was passing
commands.,ordering him to let the girl sit in the* front*. ..
.But he knew that he was In India and it is not good to speak anything against any police
personnel especially at public places .so he did not reply immediately.
Khanak who was watching all this merely smiled at the female police.
once again shantanu did not like this smile ... but he had no way out except to keep quiet .
after one or two mins ..he just said*o.k* to female police and khanak comfortably placed her
luggage at the back seat .
he opened the front door for khanak to get in .
Khanak said *thanx a lot * looking at his eyes .,and smiling ..
shantanu neither looked at her / smiled back ...nor did he say* u are welcome*.
he was thinking in his mind * what is this?... I came down for privacy and mental relaxation and
all this is being thrust upon me.. ...even before I reached the place...**.
he actually was displeased with the sudden turn up of events .,but had no other option except to
oblige .
khanak got in and silently ..put her seat belt ..
finally the female police was satisfied and smiled at khanak saying * take care and reach safely
* ,khanak nodded and smiled back.
The female police did not say anything to shantanu but merely smiled at him .,and started to
walk back .
Inside the car:
shantanu too put his seat belt..and the journey started ..
khanak was silent for five minutes... but could not keep quiet for long ...as it was not her real
nature..
she started the conversation..
*Mr...may i know ur name..?I think u might have known all about me by now since u saw my
identity card..
anyhow I shall introduce myself once again..*hi..,
Mr... I am khanak from mumbai.. so u are...***
khanak was expecting a prompt reply from shantanu..
but shantanu never replied... he was acting as though he had never heard it ...and he quickly turned on the **stereo set **.
some western music started to play .
khanak was smart enough to understand that he had swtiched on the **stereo **just to avoid
the conversation..
she thought to herself in gujrathi..
* I had thought that this guy seemed to be a young., nice gentle man...
but looks like a *sadoo* ..(one who does
not smile or is moody)
what will he lose... if he introduces his name and talk for a while .I think i might have been wrong
in thinking he is a nice guy ...he looks like a proud guy...
.Oh god how am i to keep quiet... I really wish Nitin is here instead of this guy****.
again another ten mins passed..silenlty hearing the music.
Khanak was feeling very tired ., she wanted to have a cup of o coffee or tea.
she whispered into shantanus ears.,
*mr.. ...I want to drink a cup of coffee or tea immediately ..can u ..please stop
the car ...at the highway motel that is coming up..in few mins **
shantanu gave a cold angry look to her ...
khanak immediately retorted cooly * areh Mr..chill...itna gussa kyon ho rahe hain aap ..
dont worry ...I will pay my own bill ..and I will pay ur bill too., after all u are driving me .***.
shantanu for a moment ...had a spontenous mild laughter ..which he hid carefully .,
somehow he could not refuse this request ...
he just drove inside the motel which came up in few mins and got inside with khanak after
locking the car .
Inside the coffee shop:
That was a small cofee shop inside the **high way motel** ..
It was not the* peak hour *.
there was one small A/C room ..
Shantanu went inside the and sat in one corner .
., he did not bother to ask khanak where they could sit...inside the A/C room or outside .
.
already the motel was much much much below his standard ...atleast a coffee shop A/C room
should be a better option to sit ... **..he thought .
so he did not wish to give her any choice of place .
khanak badly wanted a cup of coffee., so she just followed him .,and sat opposite him..
khanak just looked at the menu card and ordered a strong *expresso filter coffee* for herself.
she gave the card to shantanu ..shantanu without looking at her ...looked at it and ordered** hot
cappucino ***.
he suddenly wondered ***why am I sitting with some stranger girl like this ...in an
unknown sub standard motel ..a *sort of place* which i have never seen in my 26 years of
existence in this world., ... ordering some cheap cappucino coffee * *
he again comforted himself thinking * *chalo ...what if the motel is not upto my standards..
..who cares who this girl is! ..it is after all an hours connection with her..
BTW even i am feeling tired ..good if i too have a boost of coffee before a driving again **.
All along he was not looking at khanak at all ..
khanak was looking at him..hoping that he would say something to kill the waiting time ..but he
did not .
khanak could no longer be quiet .
she said to him * areh..mr..I know u are a very rich good looking guy and must have met much
pretty ...beautiful girls all along ur life till now ..
I know.very well that .. I am no where near them ...and u dont want to look at me ..
.But just say an * hi* and introduce urself .
.Itne mein kuch nahi hoga... samjhe..it na toh bantha hain ..after all u have helped me..i need to
know about u ... If not for ur sake ...atleast for mysake... please introduce ur self..** .
she was smiling as though she was cracking a joke .
shantanu was surprised to hear her say it with all giggling smiles ...the sound of laughter was
clealry audible .
.. he turned to her and for some seconds he observed
that she had the ***most prettiest smile*** he had ever seen.
***a real pearly smile straight from her heart* which he has never come across.
he was so used to fake artifical smiles ..most of the times .,
that he actually forgot **what was a real smile**... but his heart pointed out clearly that khanaks
smile was genuinine.
he involuntarily smiled back at her.
he decided to introduce himself ... but without giving his real identity .
to be continued.
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good finally shaan observed khanak is being genuine n letting his guard down..
hope he tells her his real identity after knowing her well..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
shaan and khanak journey to the lonavala...
the laddy police so funny yaar... so much caring about the khanak...
in car shaan ignore her question...he so rude...
but finally in coffee shop he observe her...
but why he hide his own identity?
looking forward for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
nice update

he's such a hard headed guy and she as always the most talkative gurl

that's so embarrassing that she talking and he;s in no mood to reply

but he hasn't noticed her yet na

but it was for sure that her glorious laughter will make him realize wht he is missing

at least he agrees to stop at a coffee shop

i really wish watching her smile he'll talk

lukin fwd... update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx for all ur kind replies and pressing likes.. 😊
Cruel destiny
( shantanu coming to know of Khanak being mother less)
Shantanu saw that khanaks laughter was genuinine and decided to finally introduce himself..
but he did not wish to reveal his real identity ., because he has always hated the * number one
businessman modi's only son * ...stamp on him ..
he remembered that his secretary had told him that he had booked at ** ss boarding* giving
the name *Mr Anant desai *.
so he thought of using that name.
he wanted to tell only 60-70 percent lie(since he was not a regular lier)
hence ..he decided to use his own companys name for his job particulars .
**Ms khanak..hello... I am Anant desai... from mumbai..
..
.i am working as one of the assistants to the person in charge of creative division in *MBC*
(Modi broad casting corporation.).on the *non fiction side*( meaning not serials etc ...but news
and other real aspects ) ...
i hope so ...that u might have heard of this ..channel **.
he shook his hands with her warmly with a smile ..she also shook .
she smiled in excitement ** wow ..cant believe ...U are an assistant to
the creative in charge of *MBC* sounds cool.. glad to meet u ***.
* and u are a gujrathi too,,, thats great .***
shantanu aka Anant smiled back and said
* yes I am gujrati. But i am hardly fluent in the language... I am better off at Hindi and English ..
he paused and said..that is because *** i lived mostly outside india till two years ago( he lied that
he came back two years ago to india wher as it was not even 2 weeks... )
Khanak replied **OH ...that means u had most of ur education outside India is it?*.*
shantanu replied* yes *with a small smile .
then slowly they were conversing like khanak asked him* which university ...
which course..which year ...he went abroad ..how was his job now etc.****
She was too happy to know that he too was a **visual communcation graduate ***that too from
prestigious **cambridge ***..
he was not speaking continuously ...except replying to her ..in short sentences .
Even with * short sentences* this was the first time he was talking so much to a stranger ..
The talkative girl that khanak is ...she was more into the conversations .
and shantanu knew already the full bio -data of her from her Identity card..
..so what could he ask more .or .about her studies .? he wondered .
Just as a courtesy conversation ...he thought of asking her about her family..
By that time the coffees arrived..waiter kept it on their table
shantanu started stirring his **cappucino** and khanak her **expresso **..
after few minutes ...he lifted his head and asked her casually...
**so what do ur parents do.?.do u have siblings ?**
he thought ...that her parents would most probably be **both working ***since she was travelling
alone .
Khanak replied with a sad smile after a silent pause.
* I have only my dad..I ost my mom when i was eight ...My dad owns a medium size
contruction company...I have no siblings**.
shantanu did not expect that she would be* mother less *.he was dumb struck for few minutes .
he was taken over by the sad fact that she lost hr mom when she was so young ...and to add to
that she had no siblings to share her grief .
That invariably brought a strong sympathy for her in his mind... because he knew living without
mother at an young age... is a cruel blow .He could never imagine his life without his loving
mom .he too was a single child but he had his mom always ..an d his dad was alive too
. He immediately said* I am so sorry...*
khanak replied with a plain smile ...
* ***its o.k... u never knew it ...Ur interntion was not to make me sad***
few minutes passed in silence with both sipping their coffees.
the waiter brought in*** The snacks and refreshments ** card too ..Shantanu ordered for some
samosas and local *chatpata chat *(he was feeling hungry) and khanak ordered for 2 pieces of
*** vegetable cutlet..***
The shop had no **continental delicacies or refreshments **as none would buy it ..
Only Indian refreshments were popular. on such high ways...
So shantanu had no choice except to order **samosas and chat .***
.waiter took their orders and went away .,saying it will take some time .
shantanu continued the conversation..j he now wanted to know more about her family.
he had by now begun to imagine stories of **wicked step mother ill treating khanak ***.
so he asked ...
** hmm what about ur Step mother..sorry to go personal ...does she treat u well..do u hve *
step brothers and or sisters?**.
he actually assumed that khanaks father would have remarried definitley soon after her moms
death ( he thought so based on his own father's illicit affairs ...) .
khanak smiled again and said ...
** I have no step mother... My father has not remarred till date . *
she paused and continued ...
*****.I think so that .***he loves my mom so much that he could never think of being married
again to anyone else**
Shantanu was extremely surprised to hear that reg** khanaks father **.
because for the first time came to know of such a person who was so devoted to his wife even
after she passed away several years ago .
he was curious to know more about **khanaks mom-dad **.
..he temporarily forgot his **western manners** of not showing curiosity of knowing any ones
personal life ..
He started to talk more .
shantanu asked
so * how did ur mom pass away?...and if u could just share their life as much as u know it with
me... it would be great ..Only if u wish... no compulsions .!
sorry if this hurts ..or looks poking my nose ...If u think so ...u need not reply or recollect...*
shantaus voice was so comforting ..yet coaxing her to share her story .
Khanak replied
* No no ..problem ...Though it hurts me recollecting my moms death ..
.yet I always feel nice to talk about my mom and dad 's love for each other..I will tell u .. **.
..Actually .till now shantanu had* no belief* at all ... that such a person like** khanak 's father **
existed in this world .
..so he became more curious to know of khanaks parents ..
khanak continued...with a slight hmmm..(.sound .of clearing the throat .).and smiled ..she was
posing as if she had a mike before her .she began to talk ..
** *
hello this is khanak Fm..This is*** Apni kahani,,,, Khanak ki zubaani***
.Anant ji ...My dad 's name is Dilip patel.
he had actually lost his parents when he was very young and was brought by his childless uncle
and aunt along with his only younger sister Alka who now lives in lonavla..
he was a bright student and did his civil engineering graduation..
My Mom was his high school mate .they both liked each other from an young age..and finally got married after nearly 10 years of courtship .
My mom and dad know of each other so well ...
and loved each other very deeply..they did have fights and diffrences of opinions like anyother
couple .
but the undercurrent of love was always there ..
..My dad always says to me that ***My mom was exactly like me in appearance and temperament
she was emotional..lively ...bubbly... full of love and always helping..****
They had some financial problems after their marriage.
.My father wanted to set up a company of his own rather than working for some one else..My
mom was very supportive..
My father always remembers that till date now that company is better placed now ..he always
says he owes it to my moms support and cheering during initial days .
the initial years were not so good for them..financially.
They had their ups and downs
but My dad says My mom had **no complaints.**.and My dad too was such a loving husband
who kept my mom happiest as best as he could...Reg my dad ...I came to know of from Mrs
shanthi ben .
They had me.soon ...and their happiness doubled .
.My dads business started developing slowly.
They bought a new house and setlled .
Haan... I forgot to tell one important point...
..My father never used his uncle or aunts money for his own business actitivites ..
he set up a* trust *in their name for helping social welfare activities ..and became an honorary
committee member .That trust is still functioning well .
..he is a totally self made man ..
Apart from business... he is also running a small **charitable trust ** In the
memory of my mom .
The trust helps Under privileged women to come up in their livesin their own small way**
and..to continue with my mom and dad 's story .
**** just when their lives were becoming more happier .
The fate was very cruel .
My mom had gone to a very close relatives wedding at..Bhuj ..( saurashtra... gujrat)
...my dad could not go due to his business commitments.
..I also did not go because i was having chicken pox.
My mom could not skip the wedding at any cost..
so she decided tol leave me under our family friend Mrs shanthi bens care for a day or two and
return back.
But destiny had different plans.
..she met with a serious road accient ...while travelling in a taxi ...when she was returning back
to Ahmedabad after attending the wedding to catch a flight back to mumbai.
My dad was totally shocked ..when he came to know of this incident .
she was admitted to the best hospital in mumbai ..
.He was fully shattered ...yet he gathered courage and did his best to bring her back to life..
he spent a lot of money too...But he could not ...win against fate .
Luckily My mom had few words to speak to him before passing away from in this world.
****she thanked him p immensely for his unconditional love .
...and requested him to give the same to me.
..she said she was the luckiest to have such an wonderful husband... but very unlucky not to lead
a long life with him .
Yet shesaid she had no regrets and was thankful to God for the short span which she spent
with him****
saying all this ...she passed away infront of his eyes holding his hands lovingly...
that sight never left my father ..for ever..
he actually became a ***yogi or a saint ***from that day.
.he was externally cheerful...and normal... but we all know internally he missed and still misses her .always.
.But he never lets me know of his sadness .
he brought me up in the best possible way .
.and he never for a moment felt that he needed any other woman except mom in his life..
and Luckily we had a best neighbour... Mrs shanthi ben his *i rakhi behen* who helped him a
lot ..to bring me up..
My aunt too was very help ful.. **
after saying the story Khanak smiled and said *
so hello fm and Mr Anant this is my **life story so far***...
shantanu could not believe that this** lively young girl **sitting in front of him had so much of sad
moments in her life at such an early age.
..Yet she was so positive /vibrant /extrovert ...so cheerful..and infact tried to make others happy too.
shantanu was speechless and after knowing about her father .,
,he realised slowly that he had blindly thought that *** all love in this world is fake ***
To be continued ...
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part shriya..
khanak's dad is really a gem..n their real life story is an eye opener for shaan to have faith in love n may be to believe there r still people around doing n thinking good to others..
looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
lovely update

nice that he like her ... generally

hmm no doubt that was indeed very sad but i loved how she actually introduced herself and told him her "apni kahani.. khanak ki zubani"

i wish he luks fwd to interact wid her and tell her hi true identity

coz em lukin fwd to their sweet interactions

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update ...
first time shaan want to know all thing about her specially her parents...
shaan like her dad so much...and he like her ...not like that way but generally...
very nice written all thing about khanak parents...
story now become very interesting...waiting for next update...

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