New FF *U are mine* three updates- feb 26* pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
nice update shriya

i juz wish that nitin doesn't form any wrong opinion abt khanak

i dont want their frndshp to be ruined

lukin fwd to khanak chirpy nature having fun wid kids

i really wish that anyhow shanak get along pretty well and pretty soon

lukin fwd to their meeting

update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@IF_rida
Thanx for ur appreciation
dont worry
Nitin wont form wrong opinion of khanak neither will khanak/nitin friendhsip get ruined ..but wait
to see How sonam turns Nitin towards her and makes him ignore khanak ...
Khanak will be chirpy always even if she gets hurt she will forget it soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update. Waiting eagerly for entry of "SHAAN" 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..so shanak r going to meet soon..am excited..
nitin i wont bother him going after sonam..but hope she is not evil as he seems to be kind hearted..
natasha..am not liking her description..
waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shriyaa nice update...
waiting for shaan and khanak first meeting in lonavala...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shantanu and Natasha
Shantanu had instructed his secretary to book the suite in some other name ..and not *
Shantanu Modi* .
Seecretary had booked it in the name of** Mr Anant desai**.
Deep inside his heart some where he hated that identity of* mr Modi* ..because of the wayward
behaviour of his father..
That is why he chose to remain abroad for most of his life so far .. ..so that he could be away from
all this ..and also he did not want to be in lime light...
But Now he had to oblige his mother...who wanted him to help his father.
Shantanu wondered how his mother was able to take such acts of his father so calmly..he had
never asked his mother on that because he felt she would feel hurt..
now he had to put an act of calm and composure for others too ..always for pleasing all around him..
He needed time to get used to it ..All this happened all of a sudden..
Above that he hated Mr Anil shah close friend of Mr Rajan Modi hinting at him and Natasha
getting married...he could see his father nodding in the affirmative ..every time Mr.Anil shah talked
on that indirectly .
he hated the fact that noneof the two bothered to take his views on that and they treated this too
as a* business deal* ..
he did not want to get married after seeing his mothers plight of getting hurt so deeply after loving
a person( his dad )sincerely ...He always wondered how was his dad able to deeply hurt such a
wonderful woman (his mom) who loved him with her heart and soul .
.Though he knew he would make the girl whom he married as much happy as possible ...yet
..he never had the urge to marry or date or love anyone..because the wound of his father cheating
his mother was so fresh in his heart..
he had a strong feeling all things like marriage/love/., are fake and are never meant to be true .
He acted as though he did not understand Mr Anil shah when he spoke of natasha and him getting married indirectly ..
But he clearly understood he was always hinting at Their marrige..
and Natasha too always talked indirectly of it..when they had drinks together..Natasha used to say
***how much she missed shantanu** when they could not meet for long...and she used to say
she was waiting for the day when she could be with him* *always **
Natasha on her part was a nice girl..but she was always adamant in getting what she wanted.
She was never bending on that account .Otherwise she was a nice girl ..
.Natasha . was impressed by shantanus gentlemanly behaviour right from younger days ..
Shantanu never used to play cheap tricks like other boys with her for dating her ..in parties or
night clubs..
.
When she heard shantanu was joining cambridge she too filed an application for the same
university and Mr Anil shah was more than happy to send her there..
Natasha stayed in an apartment close to shantanus abroad..and She made it a point to join him over
week end drinks or golf sessions or any activity which he undertook .
She had never found any of her family men treating women with so much respect..
They always treated Women mostly as objects of pleasure..
That included her father too who opted for cheap ways of bringing glamour call girls by paying
them money to dance around or to entertain rich ..clientele who were interested in such acts.
.Natasha had herself seen her dad in the arms of such women often., after getting fully drunk.
fortunately Natasha mother was also a socialite ..who did not mind such acts..for her mom
Mrs.Sanjana all that mattered was that her social status was maintained at any cost .
she least bothered about her husband otherwise ..
Infact mr Anil and Mrs sanjana hardly spent time together at home except at parties.
Natasha was their only daughter who was brought up in such an atmosphere of endless
parties .No wonder she too liked parties ,
,But
inside her heart ther was some void always
..She probably missed a lot of parental love .Natasha loved shantanus mother ..Mrs sangitha modi a lot.
Mrs Sangitha Modi(shantanus mother)
Shantanus Mother Mrs.Sangiha Modi was very patient / calm/ composed /very artistic/ creative
and who preferred to keep to herself instead of attending these parties.
Mrs sangitha modi was a very good painter..
She auctioned her paintings which she painted during her leisure time and actively helped many
of childrens social welfare organisations .
Shanatanus paternal Grandfather Mr.Ram Modi had seen her during a family function and
asked sangitha's father to get her married to his son rajan.
..Sangithas father was happy to get her married in a good family.
Sangitha soon understood Mr rajan was a pretty much of the ***spoilt brat **category.y
et she loved him deeply like any Indian women of her time ..
.she tried hard to mend his behaviour .They also had a son** shantanu **soon..
But Mr rajan was already above all thiscategory of ***changing for beloeved ones **
so Mrs sangitha soon gave up .,and started concentrating on the proper upbringing of shantanu.
Though they had a lot of servants at their palatial home .,
Mrs sangitha always saw tothat she personally attended shantanu .
she never told anything bad about his father to him .
.soon shantanu grew up to be an young man .,a fine gentle man and found out of his fathers
shady activities ..through outside world .His heart was broken in to pieces .
His father was ther for their family .,
but he soon realised his love was not genuine for his mother.
.He was deeply hurt to see his dear mother putitng up for such a long time with such activities all
in silence ., Perhaps for his sake .He soon decided to move away from India .
when he decied to go abroad Mrs sangitha never put any obstacle.
But now her Husband needed an hand of his own to help him .
Mrs sangitha had great respect for her father in law who had put in great efforts in establishing *
Modi* empire in business world.
so she could not see it getting disgraced 😭
She know of Mr sukesh modis intentions too and she knew mr.Sukesh was not really
capable ..and he will soon loose everything if he under took it fully .
so she requested shantanu to come back ..and he too obliged.
natasha
natasha had seen shatanus mom and she loved the way she took care of her son personally .
she thought it would be great to have such an wonderful mother in law for her self.
natasha though loved dressing **skimipily/cracking silly jokes/blabbering after
drinking./** putting over make up*** drinking around with friends etc Inside wanted a person .
like shantanu who had deep respect for women who could be a *one man woman* unlike her
father ..
Though shantanu had no belief in love/marriage or coutrship he could see that shantanu had
respect for other girls..That was enough for her ..
She tried to hang around him more sharing drinks and expected he would change for sure
For shantanu personally natasha meant nothing.
..He never really missed her when she was not around..
He just found her as a good company for sharing drinks..Nothing more than that..
.
Now he did not want to be disturbed by all those media people from business magazines lining
up for interviews after he takes over .so he decied to take a silent break before finally he was into
the mad business race .
Shanatanu was driving his own *mercedes* .While driving .he was thinking of the party events..
HIs uncle Mr.sukesh Modi was there physically..
but shantanu saw that he was not at all happy when he talked with shantanu ..Shantanu is a very
good observer of human facial emotions and he could easily find out his uncle was unhappy
meeting him ...Shantanu wondered *why*
to be continued ..
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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got a clear insight abt most of the characters..
gr8 going..
awaiting shanak's 1st meet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@RR81 thanx dear.
Friends Please dont get bored that I am giving detailed insight of supporting characters too.
I feel all supporting characters are important for the clear understanding of the story as it
progresses.
that is why I have given detailed description of them .
.
s i am giving *shanak meet *
@ everyone ...please those of u have interest in reading FFs ..Please take some time whenever
u a re free to read and comment..
That would be a gr8 encouragement to any FF writer who is trying to keep this forum alive 😊
*********Shanak Meet *******
Khanak stranded :
Khanak got into a taxi and was super excited to meet her cousins..
she had got some goodies(/gifts/eatables etc) for them ., and wanted to reach as early as
possible..
But half way down... .she saw that there was heavy police patroling around .
..They were stopping all vehicles and those passengers travelling in vehicles without proper
documents were being asked to get down.
she soon learnt that it was due to the bomb scare in mumbai and that there was some
anonymous information that the possible terrorists after planting it ...might be on their way to
Lonavla .
The bomb scare at mumbai *airport* actually turned to a be an* hoax* .
But the police department did not know if the anonymous information reg. terrorists was also an
hoax one ., and not knowing true or false clearly ., they did not want to take chances.
So they were checking all the vehicles .
Especially private taxies and public transport buses/ lorries etc .,were thoroughly searched and If
any of the driver was found not having sufficient documents he was mercilessly retained till
proper satisfying documents were produced .
Khanak was travelling in a private taxi and the police were not satisfied with the supportive
documents produced by the driver to show the ownership of the taxi .
so they decided to retain him for questioning..
Khanak was asked to get out of it and was asked look for other own options of travel or call
some one so that she could be taken back ..
Khanak did to want to go back to mumbai.
.She knew if she called her father /or nitin they would worry a lot more than necessary and would
definitley ask her to get back to Mumbai.
,and they themsleves would be right there in a couple fo hours to pick her up .But she wanted to
go to Lonavla .,to help her Bua / uncle and also spend quality time with cousins .
At the same time she did not want to mentally trouble her uncle and bua too by giving this news
that she was stranded midway .
.So she decided to look for alternative** safe **options of travel .
She had befriended a female police by then .,and was killing time talking with the police woman
talking occasionally and at the same time looking for other** Safe** options of travel .
Shantanus Car:
khanak was standing for quite some time.
.She had asked a few family people travelling to Lonavla to allow her to *get into their vehicle * .
.The police woman too tried to find khanak a **safe vehicle ** ., .,
But she could not do much ...since she could not force any one to take **khanak in ** herself
being ***on duty**.
.Also she did not want to send khanak with some one whom she felt was not trust worthy.
. Khanak was also looking for options of travel which were*** safe and trustworthy** according to
her intellect .
none of the family vehicles were willing to take risk by taking anonymous co-passenger and get
into trouble later ., at such a dificult situation.
khanak had her identify card of the college and so police were satisfied with her identity and left
her .
But these family people were still cautious ..inspite of seeing her idenity card having all the
details.
In few cases Khanak was not comfortable with the sort of the persons that they appeared to be.,
so she did not approach them and ask for a * Lift *.
After some time khanak s saw a brand new ** Mercedes benz** driven by a fair handsome young
man waiting at the police check post .
She was first reluctant to ask** for a lift*** since he seemed to be travelling alone.
he was standing at the check post for the checking formalities and she noticed no one else was
there with him..
but he appeared like a gentle man to her ..
She asked the police woman if she could ask him*for a lift* .
Police woman too nodded positively .
khanak thought * ***why dont I make a try.,Never mind if he refuses., the guy seems to be a gentle man *****
and soon after she saw that shantanu cleared the formalties and was above to leave.
She went running to him ..taking her female police friend along .
*hello Mr.can u please offer me a lift to Lonavla... If u dont mind*
Shantanu was totally surprised at this request...he had never seen such anonymous requests
abroad .
Majority of the foreigners never try to get into vehicles of unknown people .
.He just looked at her **staring in anger** ..not knowing what to reply.
He looked at her..while looking closely she seemed to be a girl in her ** twenties*
*But she could be easily mistaken for a teenager too., because she was petite .
She was carrying a Travellers suitcase on one hand and In another hand ther were some
shoppers bags..A canon camera carefully put inside a **shoulder bag** was put across her
chest ..
and she was dressed in full hand cotton pink Kurti and blue jeans.,
her hair was tied up with a band .
she had small ear drops and her front hair was flying ..she had no accesories like watch ..and
was wearing a pair of comfort slippers .
she was dusky complexioned and was not so tall..
she was looking tired perhaps since she was standing for quite some time .
**** This was what shantanu thought of upon seeing khanak for the first time.***
he also thought ***** For any one she could pass of easily as a normal school final or college girl ..*******
he was really surprised at this sort of request for a *lift* from a stranger ..which he never ever had
heard of before since he hd stayed all along outside India .. .
he answered in a shaking voice * ji... I dont get it...*
Khanak said in a clear voice .
* sir., can u please offer me a lift to Lonavla. i am in urgency.., I know u must be doubting me.
I have my identification card.,
..if u feel satisfied... u can take me along.u seem to be a gentle man(she was putting ice
knowingly)
that is why i asked u .
please dont mistake me****
Shantanu looked at her college identity card., it clearly had all details about her..
He did not want to offer lift to anyone at this sort of circumstances.
But he saw the documents., ther was nothing to doubt .,and also the female police who was
standing close to khanak for all this time silently when khanak was talking to shantanu
came near and finally said *to him ,
**sir ., This girl needs to go to lonavla urgently . The driver fo eeh taxi in which she came has been retained..
. She has been trying hard for long ., to get a vehicle.,
but donot know why people are not willing to help her .,and some people are not trust worthy .
U seemed to be a genuinine person( female police putting ice on shantanu)
Please do help her if u can ., I too have verified her credentials .,so u need not worry * .
Shantanu understood that the female police was indireclty coaxing him to take her in his car.
.he thought *o.k it is after all an hours drive., let me do it *
.But he was irritated at his privacy getting disturbed .
and merely with a dry smile said to Khanak* get in* and turned to the female police and politely
said ***just because u have assured me that u have verified ****
.The female police smiled at shantanu and said * dont worry* and asked khanak* to get in *immediately.
khanak thanked her profusely/ bid her* bye* and with her hands full of luggage moved towards
the car .
Little did shantanu know then... that this petite /dusky/normal simple looking girl was to
become some one inseparable from his life for ever ..as time passed .
to be continued ...
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shriyaa...nice update
about the previous update shaan is so upset of his father behaviors...he don't like his father...
he love his mother so much...Sangitha modi(shaan Mother)...is very nice person...
shaan is so close to her...she want my son not behave like his father...
she want my Son will be"One man Woman"...but shaan dont believe in love ...
but she is happy at least he respect the women
...shaan so alone yaar...i think he want friend to share all thing ...
i think khanak will be his friend...

about the this part...shaan and khanak meeting...shaan and khanak will going lonavala together wow!...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update shriya

finally shanak 😊

and blv it was not boring at all ... inf fact it was quite interesting to read and have a deep insight of the characters

i juz wish they 've sum interaction during the journey plz

lukin fwd to it

update soon.

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