if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sangita 😊
Just read parts 5 & 6 now beautifully written loved it
Gunjan's sudden health condition feeling very emotional..
Sorry for posting late posting from mobile so can't post in detail
Love ur writing ❤️
Keep writing for us thank u very much 😊
Love u loads 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
k.krithika]Hi Sangita 😊
Just read parts 5 & 6 now beautifully written loved it
Gunjan's sudden health condition feeling very emotional..
Sorry for posting late posting from mobile so can't post in detail
Love ur writing ❤️
Keep writing for us thank u very much 😊
Love u loads 😃



Love you too Kritz!!! at times I ponder if I'm worthy of all this...

Never thought I would get so much love and adulation!!! Thank you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update ...aww it was touchy feeling sad for gunju's condition ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yashran_sarun]superb update ...aww it was touchy feeling sad for gunju's condition ...



Thanks!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitasengupta

No, repeated Hyperglycemia does not cause DKA. DKA occurs due to the lack of insulin in Type 1 diabetics.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Everyone!!! Here goes Part 7. Am absolutely starved of creative juices...so the update might sound boring. Please comment and let me know how you feel!!! And may I please request the silent readers to comment. Even a one liner is good enough.




Part 7

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Dialogues are in purple and thoughts in red



As suspected the Kidney Function Test reports confirmed Dr.Ghoshal's worst fears. Being a juvenile diabetic was taking it's toll on the girl who he has treated since she was diagnosed…. what failed his logic was how could her condition deteriorate so suddenly…..she has been monitored continuously for the past so many years…..then how could this happen?



Gunjan was kept under observation for a few more days and Dr. Ghoshal with the help of a qualified dietician drew up a diet chart for Gunjan,increased her insulin dosage and warned her not to digress at all before discharging her.


She started looking paler and frail than before. Her energy level was mostly low. There was a rapid decrease in her weight though her food intake didn't support the fact. Everything around her was suddenly blurred. The only solace was Khanak who stuck to her like her attitude. She guaranteed mirth around Gunjan always. With her around life looked vivacious,radiant and definitely worth living!!!!



Did you get to speak with your Shaan ?(she asked with glint in her eyes)


He isn't mine yet ( she answered with poignant ones)


Okay let me put it the other way…did he call you?


Before Gunjan could answer,her laptop beeped….


Hi!!! how are you?


I'm fit as a fiddle (Gunjan couldn't help but notice Khanak's discomfort)


Gunju,call me when you get over….


Was that Khanak?(hoping an answer in the aftirmative)


Yes,she just left!!!


What happened to you suddenly? did you cheat on your diet or forgot to take your regular dosage……


I cheated a little on life coz at times it sucks…. sorry!!! shouldn't have said that…


Relax Gunjan!!! It's alright to feel and say whatever you want when you are with me.


But you need to take very good care of yourself and follow instructions like a rule book….


That's what I've done for the last 20 years Shaan… followed rules laid down by everyone and pretended everything was alright and life was beautiful….but suddenly everything seems hollow!!!


Did you lose something in the hospital? (aware that he was trying too hard)


What!!!


Your spunk that makes you so irresistible!!!!


Cut it out Shaan!!! Don't flatter me!!! I'm not used to it and don't want to either!!!


What do you mean by that? First of all this isn't flattery and even if it is you need to get used to it coz I'll do that very often…..


Shaan can we speak later please? I don't feel like talking right now… I want to rest….


Bye Gunjan!!! I will call back!!! Take care!!!



She switched off her laptop and drowned herself under the soft sheets….sleep has been acting "hard to get" for the past few days and today seems to be no exception…..



Khanak!!! why did this happen to me?


Try and get some sleep Gunju…it's very late….


You are right…I guess it's too late,don't you think?


Stop doing this to yourself!!! Everything's gonna be fine…..I promise….



The night metamorphosed into a beautiful morning but sleep didn't care to mellow on the two sets of eyes that lay still throughout…..wanting to share so much but refusing to part with anything……



Gunju I need to go to the university today for my orientation but will be back by afternoon and we'll catch up then……



Gunjan's parched lips wanted so much to tell her not to go but couldn't mutter a sound…..



It suddenly was getting extremely tedious for Khanak to control the happenings around her. Mr. Kejriwal and Supriya Aunty were mute spectators and Dadi was in a mode of constant denial. She suddenly felt like a loner. For the first time she dreaded to face a challenge thrown at her by none other than Life. She didn't know the answers to anything anymore…..




Goenka household



Madhavi,let's go and visit Gunjan today…. I didn't want to go to the hospital because too many people there would've been a bother for them then….



Sunil,do you think we should still go ahead with the marriage… I feel we are being very unfair to Shaan!!!



Can we talk about this later,please!!!



No,Sunil!!! We need to talk about it right now!!! We've already delayed it enough….



Well if you insist… all I want to say is that let Shaan and Gunjan take this decision….period!!!




A quote by Terri Guillemets kept haunting Khanak throughout the day. It goes like this'Life is not always fair. Sometimes you get a splinter even sliding down a rainbow.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Grt updt.. I cud feel Gunjan's pain..Haaye Shan calling her irresistible at the same tym thinking abt Khanak..poor guy he is so confused!!
Aww Madhavi wants to brk the engagement..:(
Why do I feel like crying???
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sangita 😃
Glad to c ur update😊
Ok I dunno but I felt Shaan-Gunjan is just cordial and that they are trying to get attracted to each other but whereas Shaan is naturally attracted to Khanak...
I feel sorry for Gunjan that her life was like some military training camp till now, everyone would love to enjoy life with ample freedom but in her case she is not that lucky...life is really unfair...
Madhavi is justified, I don't blame her any parent would wan't the best for their child...
Ummm Khanak is being the most beautiful friend here loved it😊...
But this update made me feel really bad for Gunjan...
Plz update soon, i jus cant wait for the next😊
Love You🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor gunjan..her condition is too hard to bear..y like this sangi..
but the way she spoke to shaan makes me wonder was she not happy abt the engagement..i dont know somewhere i felt she was not much happy..
khanak feeling bad for her friend n is totally helpless..for the 1st time in her life she is feeling this bad i think..after all gunjan is the only one she have..
awaiting the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gunjan's condition really hurting me, I hope Sunil Madhvi doesn't break the engagement. But I don't want Gunjan to do any sacrifice, I mean telling Shaan, "I will not marry you as I am ill".
Loved the update😊

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