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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy di...
nice update👍🏼
Khanak is lil worried for her best friend, Gunjan...
i always love the way u describe Kolkata..the traffic..the buildings ... with the historical details👏... for me, its like knowing & discovering Kolkata .. all over again.. 😍
loved Khanak's room description...very nice
even, i was a bit confused😕 , regarding Shaan's words 'don't you think it's too late for me to know all this'..
but, now i got it...thanks, for clearing the confusions 😃..
loads of love🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here comes the next part. he story will now take an unexpected twist. Please let me know if you like it...Please comment if time permits. Need to know what your guys are thinking. Love you all for the affection you've shown



Part 6



Dialogues are in purple and the thoughts are red and in brackets





Distance makes heart grow fonder'..two lives blended by destiny started enjoying the feeling of togetherness'.what seemed a forced alliance gradually formed into a comforting association. Arranged marriage was not something that appealed Shaan but now looking back he realized that Sunil had taken the right decision. Gunjan would be a perfect wife. She definitely had a spark in her that drew everyone into her magnetic web!!! She was a companion any man would give his right hand for''



Since the day she got engaged,Gunjan knew that Shaan was the best thing that could ever happen to her. From the day she understood that life would be malignant for her always, she has taught herself not to dream'.ever'.

However suddenly it seemed that the floodgates couldn't contain themselves any longer and there she was thinking the unthinkable,dreaming what she never in her wildest thoughts felt was possible''.drowning herself in the reverie of belonging to someone''understanding how it felt to be a woman. It was the most beautiful phase of her life and she secretly wished that it never got over'..



The ambulance tore through the deafening silence of the road as if it's life depended on being heard''.followed by the black Linea with Khanak at the helm accompanied by Mr.and Mrs.Kejriwal. Pinaki and Swagata accompanied Gunjan on their daughter's insistence because she felt that Mr.& Mrs.Kejriwal would not be able to hold themselves seeing their daughter in that state''



Dr.Ghoshal was informed well in advance and he had organized for Gunjan to be admitted immediately''.



What do you think would've happened Dr.Ghoshal?'.do you think it's serious'..she's never been like this before''.all that the timorous father could manage!!!!



I need to examine her first and only then would I be in a position to say something'let's not waste time''



Khanak's eyes almost tired before she found her''her frail frame wrapped in tubes from everywhere'.almost'..

The ER in all hospitals had the same look'..everyone trying to challenge mortality and behaving as if life always wins!!! Khanak's stomach churned from the pit and all she wanted was to throw up'.her whole existence was being threatened right now with Gunjan lying there!!!



Dr.Ghoshal with a junior doc were attending to Gunjan. The first step involved raising her insulin levels which was administered immediately. He knew that she would regain consciousness in sometime. He stepped out of the ER and informed everyone outside that Gunjan's condition was Hyperglycemia.


What's that Doctor Kaku?(Kaku means uncle in bengali)



Hyperglycemia happens when you your insulin receptors are not working like they should. Perhaps your food intake was higher than you thought, or you were under stress or had an illness. Hypergycemia can occur in insulin-dependent diabetics who miss a dose of insulin, or if they are sick or have an infection.


Did she miss her dosage in the past few days or any change in her diet?



She's been having sweets for the past few days'..leftovers from the engagement ceremony'.



Supriya's face was ashen and seemed to have gained a few years in these couple of hours'..




Supriya,I've told you repeatedly that you need to keep a close watch on her diet'any aberration and we have disaster on our hands'..



The memories all came rushing back to her'..her two year old diagnosed with a disease that took away her childhood'.



Mama why can't I have as many sweets as I want!!! it's my birthday today!!! I've brushed my teeth twice so that I don't get cavities. You promised that I can have as many candies as I want on my birthday. You are breaking your promise and promise breakers become shoe makers. Please mama let me have candies'.



The child wept insolently and all Supriya could do was turn into stone!!! This has been her reality. She has been deprived of a normal childhood. Her mother had to constantly coach her mind and condition her body so that the situation never went out of control. But her respite was Dadi who indulged her once in a while!!!!



Khanak decided to stay back the night with Supriya and Swagata promised to come back next morning alongwith Mr.Kejriwal. Her ability to remain calm and composed in circumstances like these poured immense strength in Supriya'. she knew come what may Khanak would never ever fail Gunjan'..



Beta..why don't you recline a little and try get a nap'you look tired'come lie down on my lap for sometime'.



Kakimoni(aunty) I'm absolutely fine'.I think you need some rest'try and sleep a little and I'll be here with you(she pressed supriya's palm tightly in an attempt to take off her stress)


And don't worry we'll take Gunju home very soon and make sure she takes good care of herself'..she kissed Supriya's forehead and closed her eyes to prevent the flashrains from washing away everything around it!!!


Around 2 in the morning,she suddenly woke up shuddering at the thought of what she just saw'. found Supriya napping and ran to the ER!!!

There she was,lying still, helpless,in pain but grittily determined that tomorrow would be a better day''



Khanak smiled to herself understanding absolutely her friend's state of mind but wondering at the same time''..





Edited by sangitasengupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, I was a silent reader of your FF, but today the update made me very emotional. I love your writing style. Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
payalmehra]Hey, I was a silent reader of your FF, but today the update made me very emotional. I love your writing style. Thanks😊


Thank you Payal!!! feel elated😃. for a writer nothing is more gratifying than making a silent reader comment!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sangita di superb update... 🤗
i dono di m very obssesed wid shanak n nt liking dat shaan is accepting gunjan as his better half...😭😭
omg wht happ to her 😲all of sudden ... hope nthing serious happ to her bt does shaan knws dat shez in hospital...😕
m luving ur story line...m exited abt future track...😊
update soon...😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hei Sangi,
an emotional update..so slowly both shaan n gunju started accepting their arranged marriage..
but all of a sudden gunju is too sick n taken to ER..oh no..she was eating sweets..
so is this going to be lethal for her n b4 breathing her last is she going to shaan n khanak to be there for each other for life n thus they end up together??
my imagination ran wild..
will wait for ur update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
RB81]Hei Sangi,
an emotional update..so slowly both shaan n gunju started accepting their arranged marriage..
but all of a sudden gunju is too sick n taken to ER..oh no..she was eating sweets..
so is this going to be lethal for her n b4 breathing her last is she going to shaan n khanak to be there for each other for life n thus they end up together??
my imagination ran wild..
will wait for ur update



imaginations are supposed to be wild Ramzz!!! expect a twist from

hereon!!! love you for the comments!!! you are one reader who never

forgets to comment :))))

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Posted: 13 years ago
snigdhanagar]hey sangita di superb update... 🤗
i dono di m very obssesed wid shanak n nt liking dat shaan is accepting gunjan as his better half...😭😭
omg wht happ to her 😲all of sudden ... hope nthing serious happ to her bt does shaan knws dat shez in hospital...😕
m luving ur story line...m exited abt future track...😊
update soon...😉


Thanks Snigdha!! me too am Shanak obsessed!! so don't worry we'll do something!!! Shaan doesn't know anything yet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sangita😊
OMG Gunjan in hospital ummm not gud...
now im really confused abut shanak luv story😕 Shaan loves Gunjan not fair😔
but im sure u have something exciting up ur sleeve😊
touchy update ...loved it🤗
wen r u updating next?????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it sangi😳

u bring out d emotions so beautifully...touching😊

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