Hey Tia,
Fantastic story…………loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Well your name reminded me of old star one series Remix & the princess of the Show "Tia" 😊 loved your writing you are like super fast ek ke baad ek 5 updates Wow……..or actually I am super slow 😳…..Sorry for the late comments…….love your writing. Its actually a treat to read 5 parts back to back. I don't know I should say it or not but last night I was actually thinking ki kaash ek aur update padhane mil jaati. Well posting my comments for all the parts.😊
Loved your beginning, Khanak is totally a different character here, ohhh they had a huge fight in their first meeting. & she throws Drink on his face. …….Baba re that is scaring. Poor Shaan. I was actually thinking after reading the part is Khanak is that bad & spoilt??? But got my answer in the next part. 😊
Loved your second update. As I saw completely diffent side of khanak. Coz in your first update she was different & here I can see loving , caring, girl who is not arrogant at all.so khanak is Daddy's girl. Well she is thinking about him. & yes shaan is also thinking abt her but in different way. He so wanted to take revenge. So khanak loves chandigarh. Aur ye kya full filmi dono ke dad jigri dost……wohhh kya hoga ab??? I can see something is cooking in their heads.😉
Loved the thired update shaan immediately recognize her, & decided to give her back & he actually did that. His words & the description abt khanak & ………khanak's reaction ………& upar se sone pe suhaga lavanyas comment on the girl shaan met that night.👍🏼 Wow………u are awesome I was latterly jumping with excitement. It could have gave me heart attack but u saved me as u were having next update ready for me……..Well BIG BIG thank u for that. Loved Shaan & khanak's convo when they both were alone……..So now the war has began.
Loved the forth update…..ekkksss your foth update remind me of the film "Hum Ap ke hain Kaun" I actually love the film watched it n No of times. Their chase. Masti reminds of Salman & Madhuri. So Shaan knows the Dulhe raja too…..& decided to came from his side so can he teach a lesion to khanak. Basically he is here to spoil her every plan.😉 😳
The fifth part was awesome yaar ………..the first half was hilarious where an anuty comes to khanak & asks her she knows cooking & other household works. & Shaan campletey busy in doing his duty as a match maker. The site of Mr. Vikrant ( prospective Groom for khanak) was damn funny.🤣 🤣 I love Shaan here. & than Khanak is back with the bang. She took the revenge by fidding him Chilly Laddo (Lol new desert) 🤣 🤣
So khank & cousins planning to go to Goa. & Shaan is retuning to Mumbai…….Oops ab kya hoga????? Kaise milenge hamare Shanak???? Well loved your description abt Shaans house. Its awesome. So whats cooking in Daddy's heads???? So as their parents are friends matlab Shaan & khabak must be also bachpan ke friends. It will be fun to read where they will be recognizing their childhood memories. Loved the whole part specially when khanak takes right instead of left & reaches for shaans room. Loved their convo & little fight. Both are extrmly attracted towards each other but refuse to accept that & keep telling them selves that they hate each other. Hey Special Wow for describing their Costumes & ornaments. Loved ur detailing on each & every drapery. ⭐️ 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👍🏼
It will be real fun to read abt how they fall for each other. Ur disclaimer scared me……what Shock????? Hey please don't make us wait much. Want next parts jaldi jaldi. & knowing that something gonna happen in next update……I cant wait …….So plz post the next part Asap. ( I know I have made a long comment………..Sorry ……….Plz jel lena.) 😃
Thank u for the Awesome story 🤗 🤗
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