FF- Compltly Ur's FF COMPLETD on pg 83! MODNOTE PAGE 85 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Tia,
its an awesome update... Am loving dis bold nd arrogant khanak,,
waitng for shanak faceoff now...
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love this khanak .loved there interaction shaan giving his piece of mind to her in front of her cousin and challenging her that she has messed with a wrong person and she had to deal with it . this is turning out to be amazing looking forward for the next
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Originally posted by: -Manita-

<font color="#0000cc">~ Beautiful ~</font>


hii
Mani di..
Hwz u??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Can someone make a sig for this FF? i'll try though !
i hope u dont mind Tia!
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The wedding morning was mayhem with everyone rushing around getting ready. khanak was wearing a white lengha with mirror and crystal stone work all throughout. The kameez was short with a deep neck with little mirrors and thread work around the neck. Her hair was done in a low bun with a fushia flower adorning the bun. Her make-up was perfectly done and she wore beautiful crystal and pearl earrings. She looked like a princess and everyone that saw her stopped to look at the angel walking by. lavanya was ready and looking beautiful in a red and gold lengha. Everyone was waiting for the groom's side to get there. The band baja could be heard so they weren't far. khanak couldn't believe lavanya was getting married. It was weird to think that she's be someone's wife, she would live in another home, she's be a part of another family. Marriage just seemed like such a big responsibility. khanak couldn't even imagine taking a step like that at this point in her life. But she was happy for lavanya, she knew this was what her cousin wanted. Hearing her mom call her name khanak went downstairs. "khanak beta get all the girls ready, the boy's side is here" her mom said. khanak and her cousins had thals of rose petals ready. When their Jai jiju was to arrive, the girls would throw rose petals in his path. khanak thought that was a bit much but that's what lavanya wanted so that's what they would do. khanak and her cousin's waited to see the baraat coming through the front gates, excitedly they grabbed the thals and got into position. Jiju was walking with a crowd behind him. Around him were a lot of guys, guys khanak assumed were cousins and friends. Right next to him was a taller guy. Jiju was laughing at something he said. khanak and her cousin's start throwing the rose petals with khanak being the last in line. As she sees her soon to be jija coming closer to her she gets a big smile on her face. But the smile vanishes when she sees who's next to him, shaan Singhania. khanak is shocked, since when was shaan from the groom's side? shaan passes by giving her a big smile and her cousin nudges her telling her throw the rose petals. khanak is forced to throw rose petals at her enemy to welcome him to her home. What a great beginning to the wedding she thought!

Once inside and all the customs are done, everyone gets ready for the actual wedding. lavanya is brought down, and khanak gets a little teary eyed looking at her cousin starting a new phase in her life. Standing there lost in thought she doesn't notice someone come stand next to her until she sees a handkerchief in front of her face. khanak looks over and it's shaan. She looks at him and then the handkerchief. "You're crying, I thought you might need this" he says to her. She looks at him suspiciously and he laughs. Don't worry I'm not going to drug you with it he says" khanak takes the handkerchief and wipes her tears. "Thanks she says grudgingly". "But I still hate you" she adds quickly. shaan gives her a half smile and says "don't worry I still hate you too". After a minute or two khanak sees that shaan is still standing next to her. She's trying not to think about it, but he looks so good. He's wearing a grey/blue uchkin which fits him perfectly. His hair is styled perfectly. He's probably but a bottle of gel into she thinks angrily as she trys to remind herself that he is the enemy! If only the enemy wasn't so HOT. "So you switched sides quite quickly there didn't you" she says to him. I thought you knew lavanya but low and behold you walk in with Jay jiju said khanak. When lavanya told me Jai was her fianc I decided to give him a call. You see we used to play football together years ago, but lost touch when I went abroad for university. So I called Jai and he was so happy to hear from me, he insisted that I attend the wedding as his guest shaan explained. Again khanak looked at him suspiciously, why would he do that khanak wondered. But she didn't have much time to think about that because at that moment her cousin called her upstairs.

shaan looked at khanak as she walked away. Damn she was beautiful. Today she looked so innocent, maybe it was the white lengha, or maybe it was seeing the tears in her eyes. He hadn't been able to help himself. He had to come over. shaan, control yourself, you don't like this girl. Yeah shaan keep telling yourself that said a little voice inside his head.

khanak was on a mission,they needed to find Jay jiju's shoes. khanak was happy everyone was busy watching the wedding, that made her job a lot easier. They had found out the shoes were in a mitaii box. A mitaii box huh...did these people really think they would get something past the Ahluwalias. The girls separated and started looking everywhere. Now where would a box of mitaii go unnoticed..hmmm..the kitchen khanak thought. She ran to the kitchen and started looking around. All the boxes were the same except one that was kind of hidden towards the back. She excitedly opened the box and couldn't believe her luck! It was Jiju's shoes. She had just put the lid on the box when she felt someone's hand around her wrist, looking up she see's shaan smirking at her. "Not so fast khanak" he says. "You're not as dumb as you look" I thought it would have taken you a lot longer to find those". But that's okay you found them but you won't be taking them he says. khanak tries to twist out of his grasp. "Let go of me you MONSTER" she says...how dare you hold my wrist. With shaan's other hand he tries to grab the shoes, seeing this khanak does the only thing she really can. She bites his hand forcing him to let go and pushes past him and runs.

DAMN! She was a wild cat shaan thought as he rubbed his hand. "Well he'd show her what a monster he really was". shaan took off after her. khanak looked behind her and she couldn't believe the idiot was running behind her. Why did he care if she had jiju's shoes. He was ruining all their fun. She would never let him have the shoes. She ran through the kitchen, zig zaging through the front hall, and up the stairs. A quick glance behind her showed he was right behind her. She didn't think, she just kept running, running right into the first room she came to, which just so happened to be her room. She tried to close the door behind her but shaan pushed his way through. khanak ran to the far side of the bed. "How dare you come into my room, get out, I'm going to call everyone, get out," khanak said. "Go ahead shaan said, call everyone, let them see what you've got there" as he kept circling the bed. khanak couldn't believe this. This is why he was so eager to be on the groom's side, all so he could ruin their fun. As she was running around the bed she started throwing her stuffed animals at him, everything but Mr.cutie She needed to get out of her room, if only she could distract him. shaan couldn't believe she was throwing things at him, she was getting desperate now, he could see it, he was so close. At that moment he lunged for her and she turned to throw something at him. Then everything happened in slow motion, they crashed onto khanak's bed with shaan on top of her. He was so close, and khanak couldn't think, all she can do is gaze into his eyes, his big brown eyes, eyes she could easily lose herself in. shaan can't breathe, looking down at her, those luscious lips that were so close, maybe one kiss wouldn't hurt. shaan is just about to test that theory when he hears "khanak di are you up here?. And then he feels pushing against his chest. "Get off of me you oaf" shaan rolls off her and khanak jumps up, looks at him, grabs the shoes and runs out of the room. shaan slowly gets up and walks out of the room. He stands at the top of the stairs and looks down to where khanak is holding the shoes and talking to her excited cousins. Suddenly she looks up, right at him and shaan feels that heart of his skipping a beat again. Kuch to hai says that little voice in his head..kuch to hai.

chapter 5


Edited by abhaylover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sure i won't well 'em new here so i dun know what is sig????plss help
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Buddy,

Great start ,,,,,,,,,,,,,awesome...just read the start...loved it.

back after reading all the parts.

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
dint Shaan say 'kuch to hai' in one of RBO's promos ?

i am assuming that it is very difficult to plot revenge if ur enemy is of the opposite sex and is damn HOT and attractive! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
tia can u update ur topic name also when u update d parts plz... den everyone will knw u updated
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhaylover

sure i won't well 'em new here so i dun know what is sig????plss help

siggy as in Poster u know...u can visit the rbo creations gallery and see all the wonderful creations by the various members ...

u can view the Creations Gallery at Important topics of RBO...

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