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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Tia!

so shaan is mohan uncle's son...hmm...and he's got two sisters...

and this is the second FF here i guess where they go to Goa...first being Dostana ofcoz !

eagerly waiting for the next part !

and lil suggestion...try to add spaces , u know, break them up into smaller paragraphs if possible!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

first HSSH and then HAHK... OMG>. all of my favourite movies and the scenes... beautifully written.. Khanak oogling @ Shaan and getting caught.. hahaha..

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hey
loved part 5... Amazing characterizatn of shanak...
Waitng for next part...der kiss nd jealousy ..
Wow jus cant wait..

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Its awesome👏👏

Superb story line... super fast updates... em luvin it

Part 1

Luvin this ndew avatar of khanak... entirely diff she drinks and throws a drink on shaan ... i mean THE SHAAN and the mr.super cool ... turned out to be the poor soul.😉

PART 2

So she daddy's lil angel... a caring loving gurl who is also fun to be around... so its kinda like childhood frndz and then pyaar cyar😍

PART 3

So mr.super cool strikes again ... tit for tat ... reading the 3rd part was super fun

PART 4

So the wedding and the juta churai... HSSH like but i luved it. Both running and the the bedroom part... super cute it was full of masti.🥳

PART 5

It was hilarious i mean the aunty was hilarious seriously getting on her nerves and then shaan's entry ... i laughed my heart out... khanak is not less ... laddo part was damn funny😆

A trip to Goa is always stole the lime light... waiting eagerly for it

their meeting at shaan place was superb

eagerly waiting for next part.

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: abhaylover
aww thanks guys will update soon i have a abhiya version too and they din reply with good coments so i thought to post here too but i have to cntinue there also nah so will post chap there and then here and yah no serious shock this shock will bring them closer and yeah dad's hmm see in next update goa will be awsome get ready for their first kiss and jealousy

Hey Tia

U are an awesome writer.

Thanks for clearing that Shock will bring their closer. 😉

So Goa is full of surprises & Goa will witness their togetherness...hmmm,,,,,,,,,,Waiting for the next part...jaldi jaldi dena. 😃

Love

pranjal.

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Disha Shetty

@hotchpotchRBO

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: abhaylover
aww thanks guys will update soon i have a abhiya version too and they din reply with good coments so i thought to post here too but i have to cntinue there also nah so will post chap there and then here and yah no serious shock this shock will bring them closer and yeah dad's hmm see in next update goa will be awsome get ready for their first kiss and jealousy

Humari forum ki baat hi kuch aisa hai...
its filled with cute... friendly... n besharam ppl...
Its one of the best forums in IF...

U ll hv a great time here...
we ll make sure of thet... he he...

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n haa...
kitna intezaar karwaoge...
jaldi update karo...
waitin...😛