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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

hai la...lekin..maine already sab padhe hai:\..what are poor souls as i suppose to do?

i spose its back to katra for me:(

hope you have a good weekend!

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jyothi1989

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

hayee lovely tribute to the beautiful city saaz .nice update saaz loved the way he took her to the church and all and the way they support eachother .thinks unspoken and unsaid speaks volumes .loved the hug sighs gonna miss my shanak badly

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Pranjal K.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Hey Saaz,
thank u for giving privious SS ka link as i really wanted to read them

Thanks a ton

Love

Pranjal.

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karishma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

maar hi daalo umein saaz

ur just tooo tooo tooo good re

loved it

har ek emotion daal deti hai update mein

loved it nothing can b as simple yet so so so different than this😳

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

hei saaz,
finally i got tme to pen down my comments..
thanks for giving lengthy update..
PART 3
poor her doesnt get a chance to take rest even on sundays..r may be she doesnt take rest she just loves to work..
waise wat was that she handed to daadi n when he asked daadi said its mine..
actually while reading i get confused wat r these 2 talking abt..talking in a way that only he n she understand..finally when she was abt to say sunil kabab mein haldi ban gaya..kya yaar..here he is very sincere in his work..
wat yaar everyone get a chance to go out r do wat they wish but these 2 dont have time to spend alone hai kya?when daadi suggested then to go for a movie they couldnt n she went with daadi leaving the poor soul all alone..
he missing her n harilal giving info n to hide his embarrassment he doing silly things..
she have an application hidden..she didnt even discuss abt that to him..
their chota phone convo was nice..both teasing daadi without her knowledge..
poor him..he was the only one to have dinner n he is waiting for her..
he cares for her a lot..he understands wat she wants..i loved that..

PART 4
the whole household discussing abt the courses..everyone accepting her idea to join the institute..that was wonderful..
the way u portrayed him feeling much to say but his words r empty..i loved that..
dharam's history classes while driving.how lovely of him to call her as soon as she reached school..their chota nok-jhok was cute..
i'm loving him more..he wants to celebrate as she is happy n he suggests Mahim church..
the description u gave abt the church was awesome..
"together yet singular" i loved that..
i love the way they communicate..very little said in wordds yet gr8 message communicated..their actions..haila...i love these 2..they r so cute..the way they said abt the other..aaye haaye..

waiting for ur next update..
PS: i have never been to mumbai..but with ur description i have made the list of to visit places..😊

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

saaz have u not come back till now??😔

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saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

THANKS TO EVERYONE ESPECIALLY

@Ramani: Thank you for yur comments..really a pleasure to read

@Aussiegal: thank you so much..nahin re..no time for an FF..I am travelling next week..so this is one before I come back with another..

@Shal: thanks for liking the ode to bombay..from a fellow bombayite to another..HUGS!

@Shalini: hehehe...greed ka anjaam kabhi achaa nahin..hehehe..enjoy the next update

@Jess: for some reason I knew you would enjoy this update..I am a bombay encyclopedia at least 90s bombay..since then lot has changed..but i think our hearts remain the same..

@Vandoo meri bandhoo: thank you..your comments mean a lot to me..

@Naveen: Bombay is a place everyone should go to..to live for some time..

@sweetshona: thnaks re

@Pranjal: Haila..we should Pm each other songs re..thanks for the comment on the update

@Gaayu: hey good to see you..am glad you are enjoying..

@San: thanks so much for your comments

@DJ: Yep..in many ways this SS is a lost track too..or shall we say lost show..hehehe..

@Krithika: thanks

@candy: WHAT LINES ..what a beautiful quote..me always smiling

@chris: "she and he. it would be anyone. because end of the day. that is what it is. they're just ordinary people that are more than ordinary because of the bond they share." No one could have put it better

@Suchi: dear..this is an SS and is ending in a few more parts..it has been written as a good bye SS to the show..I shall at the most leave an open ending to come back and convert into an FF..I travel next week..no time to write a story then..

@IF Rida: thanks so much re for your comments..how sweet is your comment on katra and other stories..thank you so much..

@mystory: thank you so much for catching the nuances..

@Aditee: umm..okay..

@Dish: JJ school is a government owned institution one of the few institutes that actually has 'hindi' application forms if you request and while the courses are in english medium..there are many professors who help out students in hindi if needed..there are no restrictions as long as you have finished school to especially get into certificate courses..the degree courses are stricter requirements..but there is no restriction if you have come from another 'medium'..thank god for institutes like this..this was the case in 90s..JJ is an INSTITUTION in all respects..

@Jyothi: thank you so much

ALL THOSE WHO PRESSED LIKE: me like 5

Update coming up..

Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Saazu ..

You updating ?????

Saaachi Mucchhhi ???

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saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

PART V

The new project is demanding..He is barely finding ground..Akshay realizes his brother is stumbling but is confident he will get through..Sunil observes it too and hopes he will get through..He knows he is struggling wonders if he will get through..She has entered into a routine..a very comfortable one..breakfast with the family..leave for JJ..back by late afternoon..only time she gets a little late is when she has submissions and projects and needs to participate in groups..she loves the course work..it gets a little heavy at times..and she responds by facing her struggles head on..

On a late evening..she is frustrated..sits in front of the computer in their room.. a desk with a computer has taken the place of the sofa..shaking the mouse..

She: (mutters angrily): yeh attak kyun raha hai?

He: Kya matlab attak raha hai?..(walks towards the computer)

She: Pata nahin..mujhe class project ke liye..iss photo ko yahah chipkana hai..lekin aapka yeh (moves the computer mouse up and down) atakta hai..

He: usse itna hilao mat..go slow..(his hand over hers on the mouse..)..now yahan se wahan..okay..?

SHe: (stares at the screen): Ab mujhe yeh bhi karna hai..

He: Kitne karne hai..?

She: bahut saare..(makes a face)..kal submission hai..kab khatam hoga?..aur aapka yeh computer bilkul faltu hai..(pointing to it and yelling)

He: computer mein koyee problem nahin hai..tum chillana band karo..!!

She: Main aap pe thodee chilla rahee hoon!!..main tho isspe (juts her finger towards the computer) chilla rahee hoon..bekaar kahi ka..mujhe kagaz pe karna bahut pasand hai..yeh patta nahin kahan se aake meri neendein udda dee..

He: (small smile): Oho..usspe itna mat chillao..darr jaayegaa..and as for your project..Ho jaayegaa..let me help you..

He sits down..she fetches a stool for herself..he shows her around..Harilal walks in..asking her about dinner..she looks at him..he smiles..tells her to go ahead..and while she is in the kitchen..he finishes her digital collage..he is impressed with her collection..he admits..it is aesthetically mindblowing..

He walks down for dinner..only to find her talking animatedly with Sunil and Akshay..on one hand he is irritated and another part of him is curious..they all sit down for dinner..

Sunil: Mujhe lagta hai project ka problem ka solution mil gaya..thanks to..

He: Dad..I said I would take care of it..

Sunil: (sarcastically):My son!..I am sure you will..but I needed a solution a week ago..not a week from now..

Mad: Sunil..I think he is trying his best..

She is serving food and looks at him..he is only concentrating on his food..she realizes something is off..comes to her seat next to him..

Daadi: Khanne ke table pe office ka kaam zaroori hai..?

Sunil: Agar hum kaam pe zyaada mann lagate tho yeh zarroree nahin hota..!!

Akshay: dad?!..

He: (flings the spoon on the plate): You know what?!?!?!?!..mujhe bhook nahin hai..

He walks up the stairs..she gets up from her seat..

Sunil: tum baith jao..khaana khaake jao..

She: Jee..main abhi aayee..

Madhavi: Sunil..you are really something!!..

She opens the door..notices he is in the bathroom..she comes to the computer..realises he has finished her digital submission..needless to say she is so happy..he comes out..she hugs him..

She: Thank you..aapne mera homework kar diyaa..

He: (removes her hands): You are welcome..

She: (realizes his mood): Itna jaldee kar diyaa..itne kam time mein??

He: (sarcastically): jitna time tumne liyaa..dad aur bhaiya ke saath gupshup ladaane mein..utne time mein ho gaya..

She: (confused): Jee..woh main..unhone mujhe kapde ke baare mein kuch pooch rahe the..

He: Haan haan..pata hai..tumhe sab log poochte hai..tum sab kuch jaantee ho..hai na?

She: Aap aise kyun keh rahe ho..?

He: For god's sake??!!?!..tum neeche khanna pakane chalee thee..tho Dad aur bhaiya ke saath project ke baarein mein kyun baat karne lagee..?

She: Who khanna pe sirf tadka lagaana baaki tha..aap ko ho kya gaya hai??..aap mujhe daant kyun rahe ho?

He: Kuch nahin..chalo sote hai..!!

She: Aap khana nahin khaayenge??

He: (lies down on the bed): Bhook nahin hai..

She is confused..hurt..angry..scared..to probe more..but it is so her..to push..she wants to ask him..but realizes maybe this is not the time..part of her realizes..there is something that is bothering him..she walks to her project papers..switches off the computer..she climbs into the bed..next to him..

She: suniye..(holds his back)..please naarazz mat ho hiye..

He turns and hugs her tight..so that she cannot see the tears filling his eyes..he stops them in time..pulls her back towards him..kisses her shoulder..her neck..runs his fingers down her spine..he pretends his tears are because of her..she will get over it..he thinks.. and continues kissing her down..

Kabhi kabhi yun karna.. main daantu aur tum darna..
Ugal pade aankhon se feenke paani ka jharna
O piyu re..

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