-SS- O Saathi Re INTERVAL part-pg 36 - Page 10

Superb update 👏

The family approval and encouragement... for me his smile is the most encouraging thing for her😊

love the fone conv ... both

She: (looks at the large building): bahut aalishaan..ghar se bhi bahut bada..

He: (smiles): Tumhaari Dhulwaadi se bhi bada😉... super cute

the church part was excellent... luv that u've written and described it so well

so many people..externally different..yet similar within..each one akin within the diversity..all melting here..in front of a force..hopes and beliefs interchange... beautiful👍🏼

the bedroom scene was maha cute

She: Kahaan kho gaye?

He: (hugs her tight..her head on his chest..his fingers pushing her hair back): Main kaise kho sakta hoon..jab meri manzil mere itne paas hai... shoo shweet😍

i dun live in aamchi mumbai... but still luv it !!

em luvin it... continue soon.

hay saazi

beautiful words described ur beautiful bombay

lovd its aura

i could feel the horn of the buses

local train moving

pedastrians on road

daily commuters

wow jst so simply presented

one day i will definately visit ur dearest shanak land

he she again so thora dur thora pass

waiting fr them to b one body one soul

love

mystory

Woww 2, 2 upates in a single day...impressd.. Actualy u always impress me wid ur ff and ss...btw mind blowing update...loved it.. And i would say saaz k ss/ff meri jaan... love shanak so much ..

I am going to read it all starting today!

Originally posted by: aditee

I am going to read it all starting today!

Bus yahi mera weekend plan hai

Aur kuch nahi

Padho aur likho

Likho aur Padho😃

Originally posted by: saaaz

Super apologies in advance..but there shall be no updates this weekend..the reason is I am going to be out of town..sorry..sorry..

but until then like DJ is going to...enjoy my initial days of FFs/SS..😉

Please remember these were my first writings EVER..the first three are on lost tracks ..the last two are new stories..

Tere Khusboo mei basey Khat: track on Sunil Mad divorce

Banwra Mann: track on Sunny return

Tum Pukar Lo: track on dhulwaadi

Ek hi Khwab: my task as MOTW..a short love story..lots of Bombay references..

AND finally KATRA: my one and onnly FF

Tere Khusboo Mei Basey Khat: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1583733/ss-tere-khusboo-mein-base-khat-epilogue-pg-13

Banwra Mann: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1596058/shanak-ss-banwra-mann-final-pg-16

Tum Pukaar Lo: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1625823/ss-tum-pukar-lo-updated-epi-pg-26

Ek hi Khwab: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1644478/ss-ek-hi-khwab-uptd-epi-pg-32

Katra Katra:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rang-badalti-odhani/1717552/katra-katra-3-grand-finale-pgs-19-and-23

Please note guys..O saathi re is an SS..it shall not have more than 6-7 parts..I shall not have any time next week..I shall come back with writing..don't know where or how...but I shall..

THanks one and all ..you guys are the best..

love

Saaz

Originally posted by: SachDJ

Oye...CASA ko lambe lambe updates chaiyye 😃

Chalo Khanak is shown as doing something for herself...good!

Loved the support she got from all the family members. Was a bit surprised that Khanak went alone to fill the form and all. She knows english well is it? to fill form and all ? I guess she was educated already to get into JJ school.

Mahim Church ... peaceful area ... and yes there is still a crowd there on wednesday's. I have been there once or twice. Like the calmness you feel there even with a crowd being around u. JJ college kabhi gayi nahi ... but all fort side buildings have a different aura altogether ... the university of Mumbai for that matter is classic, the Xaviers college, the officed around, everything of Stone, ancient and classic!

Waiting for the next update eagerly...

~Cheers,
Dish

The day u ended katra katra i start readimg again all ur previous ff again coz i've read dem be4 and done wid it and till u come back hopefully i would've finished reading kata katra again for the 3rd time... em so much in luv wid ur writing.

u r amazing🤗