-SS- O Saathi Re INTERVAL part-pg 36

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Dear Forum friends..a final tryst of sorts..a goodbye and good luck to new beginnings..my gift to all my dear friends here..I have not planned a continuation..but a little something before we close doors..to a show that gave us Golden RBO..and each other..and as always the title inspired by Gulzar's O saathi re from Omkara..

O Saathi Re

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2-Page 5

Part 3-Page 7

Part 4-Page 10

Part 5- Page 15

Part 6-Page 17

Part 7- Page 19

INTERVAL part- Page 36

Part I

She says the three words finally..the ones he has been wanting her to say..three words that by themselves meant a little less than when attached to their moments spent..their little trials..their tribulations..their wants of each other..their journey together..their need for each other..He would forever remember his heart stopping only to start reverberating..his eyes a liitle filled.. when he heard her say the three words..She will forever remember her heart speeding while saying them only to stop..her eyes smarting..when she saw his face light up across the room..

Night falls into their room..He stands by the window..holding it with one hand and the other in his pocket..she walks in..he turns..she turns away..he knows she is shy..he turns back to the window and smiles..she walks to him..

She: Aapne kapde nahin badle?

He: Hmm..

He turns..she smiles..she helps him remove his blazer..to reveal his blue collar and white shirt that match her blue and white outfit..she wraps the jacket around a hanger..he watches her..she smiles and walks towards the bathroom..

He: Tum apne kapde badal rahee ho..

She: Jee..

He: (walks towards her..holds her dupatta): Kya hum inn kapdon mein so jaaye? Please..

She: (unable to comprehend..unable to refuse): Jee..?!

He: Kya aisa ho sakta hai..ke yeh shaam kabhi na khatam ho..

She: Lekin sochiye aisa bhi tho ho sakta hai ki dooba hua shaam nayee subah le aaye..

He: (leans towards her): Main iss shaam mein bahut khush hoon..

She: (looks at him..shy): Mujhe subah ki kiran se lagaav hai..

He: Kaun Kiran yaar??!!..main hum dono ki baat kar raha hoon..

She: Oh Ho!! Main raat bhar ki baat kar rahee hoon..

He: Wait a minute!!..you mean?? (points towards them his finger moves back and forth)

She: Jee haan..(smiles a little smile)..hum dono!

He: (stretches): Bed pe soke kitne din ho gaye yaar..

She: (walks towards the sofa): Main soch rahee thee..sofa ka luft mujhe bhi uthana chahiye..

He: KYA???

She: Aur Nahin tho Kya..

..and so they continue on where shall they finally sleep..

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aa chal.. din ko roke
dhup ke peeche daude
chaanv chhue na..

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Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago

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minnu345

@minnu345

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow saazzz ur another FF

we need u yaar especially in this time

great start

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

thanks dear saaz

ur a saviour

love yaa

dhup dhal jayegi

andhera honay ko hay

magar dur ek roshni ki kiran jagmaga rahi hay

aap kay os ka tej ( sparkle of ur os )

hay jo humay khich laya

always shine

take care

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Good bye gift!!Haddh Hain...😔😔😔

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 14 years ago

🤗 Hey saazy di

sooo happy to see u with this SS 😊

as usual awesome starting ,,, loved it ,,,

starting with the hot scene 😍

but really missing katra katra badly every morning 😭 😭

if ever u decide to write it somewhere , Please do tell me

i loved ur writing very much 👏

in this forum i started reading FF from Tresspro by manita di and then katra both r masterpiece which r near to my heart till date

Thanx for giving other SS 😊

will surly miss as u said its a parting SS 😭 😭 but till then will get something to read and enjoy ur other masterpiece as i can say without a doubt

love
suchi

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

saazzyyy🤗🤗

missed u very very very very much

u gave us sum awesome treats in d form of yr F n SS...thnk u so so so so so so so so so so so much

it shall always b remembered n cherished by me😳

yr one fantastic writer n i hope u continue it for life

god bless u saaaz...aapki har aadao mein jaadu hai😊🤗

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

hei saaz,
very happy to see a SS from u..
so we get to read ur work for few days as this is a SS..
but we have some more time for RBO to wrap up..
so till then n after too we'll enjoy all the fantabulous work of the writers here in this forum..
n if u guys write something anywhere please let us know..
i may not follow any other shows r forums but if u guys r there to write i want to be there to read..
so please inform us atleast via PM..

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81
hei saaz,
very happy to see a SS from u..
so we get to read ur work for few days as this is a SS..
but we have some more time for RBO to wrap up..
so till then n after too we'll enjoy all the fantabulous work of the writers here in this forum..
n if u guys write something anywhere please let us know..
i may not follow any other shows r forums but if u guys r there to write i want to be there to read..
so please inform us atleast via PM..

ditto me too follow u 😊