-SS- O Saathi Re INTERVAL part-pg 36 - Page 9

gr8 saazy..i hv never been 2 mumbai..but i wish 2 go there...

Hey Saaz,

I am complete music lover. I have huge collection of songs in Hindi, Marathi, English, gujrati. Well plz listen "Jevha tujya batana" its wonderful song by suresh wadkar. I am an absolute ghazal & sufi lover. Khair lady u rocked again. Loved the update. but ye kya yaar phirse "he" & "she"….Yaar kuch to rahem karo hamare mukhya kirdaro par. Par frankly I am loving it. 😳

Hey I love Mumbai. Well I am Mumbaite too. But currently in Pune coz of studies. And yes Mumbai Rocks. Isliye to kaha jata hain ki jo ek baar Mumbai mein reh le na wo kabhi nakaam nahi hota.mumbai har kisi ko apne hisse ki roti kamana sikha hi deta hain. "Mumbai Rocks" 👍🏼

Well for the current part It was a beautiful piece of writing ………Aewsome…………loved it. Loved their convo. "She"is going to join college….Wow I love Dadi she encourage her….."he" is very supportive. I must say "He" supports "She" a lot. Loved the line Tumhari dulwaadi se bhi bada & "She" says nahi chota. Thank u so much Dharma Bha ko lane ke liye. Wow "he" took "she" to church. Loved ur detailing I must say ur are awesome in describing emotions & atmosphere. 👏 👏

The last line just killed me………….. ⭐️ " Main kaise kho sakta hoon..jab meri manzil mere itne paas hai.." ⭐️ this line is star line in the update.

Well sorry for the rushed reply as in office. Agar lamba choda klikhungi na to paka kahi aur naukari dundani padegi. 😭

Btw in my reply the "he" * "She" I just did it for fun. Apko chidane ke liye. Hope u don't mind. 😳

Waiting for the next part…….jaldi dena………….par ye SS jaldi Khatam mat karna. 😃

Love

Saaaz,
God knows how i missed this! Read all the parts. Nice going...👏

Saaz, loved your Bombay special update. I have been there many times as a visitor, stayed there as a baby, so no memories from baby times, but many memories as a visitor. It is my Mom's fav city, she says that she feels more at home and safe there than any place else. I love Bombay, next time I will go to both these places, they seem to be perfect. Loved your ode to your city. beautiful words. I really enjoyed this part...the innocence and simplicity of these characters is so adorable.
And you have written 2 other FF? 😲😲😲

Where? When? How? Lost tracks rediscovered...sigh 😍, I want to read them...send me the links...meri weekend reading set ho jayegi...

Thanks for writing again it is such a pleasure to read your story...I am enjoying every minute and moment and relishing it. Such a treat indeed. Please continue...next one soon. 😊

hai la!...you're back!...with a story. what?!

*goes to read it all*

but even without reading...update!! soon!:)

Thank u Saaaz for the awesome parts loved it all ❤️

you make me miss bombay and india. like no other. i very vaguely yet vividly remember the church and the visit. if it is the chruch i am thinking it to be:\. sadly i have never been to jj or at least i dont think. but hope to now.

how you do it i have no idea. but simple words. simple actions. mundane activities. yet it all creates such a different ambiance in the mind of a reader that it takes them to the world of your story and leaves them there. even if un relatable it (the story) still triggers some emotion or memory that was forgotten.

i love the fact that they're just she and he. sure we all know that its suppose to be the shaan and khanak. but the implication of the play on words is beautiful!..she and he. it would be anyone. because end of the day. that is what it is. they're just ordinary people that are more than ordinary because of the bond they share.

reading all of these reminds me of when the show use to be enjoyable. i like how khanak in all your stories is always a strong though not completely independent. but a woman of her own identity. she somehow always has her own niche.

oh i am so glad to have read this!...hope you keep writing and hope whatever medium you move to (assuming it wont be the forum?) i keep getting the pleasure of traveling through the words that are your story...

ab jaldi se update!..

😍 😍

Saazy di ,

there is something in ur way of writing that we lost ourselves to ur shanak land and than suddenly brought back to reality when last two lines of song comes 😒

amazing written ,

like others i do feel that if u would have been the writer of the show than it would be something else and TRP would have never come down and also May di , dont have to do "moun vrat " for comments 😆 , because that would never be needed only 😊


@ update - loved it , shaan and whole family is encouraging her to go ahead for her dreams to come true , shaan's feeling for her and ur description about mahim chuch and JJ school is too good and definatly i marked it in my list for visiting it someday

loves
suchi

P.S. dont end it soon like ur other SS in just 5 - 6 updates or bring katra season 2 whenever u get time