-SS- O Saathi Re INTERVAL part-pg 36

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Saaz ...

Lovely yaar!

subah tak tho nahi tha ... ye kab start kiya, I am seeing it now.

Sahi characters hain tere ... too good!

~Cheers,
Dish

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

saaz lovd the athkheliya btw he n she

kissi walla part is awesome

bad news ki wajah say thora mood kharab hay

poora comnt bad may karungi

i hope u understand

love

mystory

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khwaish

@khwaish_245

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

😳 😳 hayee so so so lovly , awesome , cute , romantic, hot

their phone and bedroom convo is so sweet ,just like shanak

ahh., other masterpiece by u ⭐️ 👏

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

yaar...saazy..teri FF and SS se mujhe humesha se bohot lagav hai...lekin iss bar i m crying..aise maat bol yaar...good bye mat bol...i just cant bliv yaar that i would be so much attached 2 this forum and would make so many frnds here...i m going 2 miss u guys...luv u...

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adeelakhokhar

@adeelakhokhar

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

wowww another SS ...

superrrb yaaar... loved both d parts...

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

defintely Golden RBO! loved it Saaz!

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Saaaz !!

Your back !!

I read Katra Katra when it finished from 12-4:30 in the morning and believe me I cried when it ended. I was so sad. Please come back with Season 2 soon and PM me when you do if I'm not around.

I just love your writing, nice and simple. I love how you portray ShaNak. It always end up conjuring the butterflies in my stomach.

I have a request for you for another story if your interested ? I believe your the only one that can do it justice since you are the one that I know that is most in tune with the RBO that we fell in love with

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hei saaz,
actually seeing ur SS i got over excited n forgot to comment dear..but these updates r too short..lambha update dhiya mein bhi lambha comment karoongi..before i get to cherish the update ended yaar..so wat do i write..
it was so wonderful..the way u say things in a subtle manner is just awesome..
so the first part was abt her expressing her love for him n them being together..showed ur own way a spinning the tale..
y should she always be ib the kitchen doing things..she loves it so no one can help that..the one thing to be noted here is she sits next to him in the dining table which we almost dont get to u...tha way both converse without others knowledge..it was so cute...their play on the phone..n the same way they continued it on their bed saying 'tumhare pati aane se pehle'..so cute these 2 are..
PS:thoda lambha likho na..so that i wont forget to write comments..