FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 66

Originally posted by: candy84

Wow...! mixed bag update, full of romance, nok- jhok, fight, arguments, and suspense..Loved it 😃

Looking forward for next update..

Originally posted by: Casa.Addict

Thanx for the update Mannu di!

It's very kind of u to give an update when so much of stuff is happenin in ur personal life!

I hope u r fine 😊

Take care

Love

Neha

Originally posted by: christmas

you updated!...thank you!...really!
hope things are getting better your end.
love love lovedd the udpate!...these two are adorable...and funny...

ofcourse he fasted...and knew it! abt telling parents/abt jai..i am assuming its the doctor lady? lol...
thanks again!

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Ooo Mmm Geee !!!!!

Aaapne Update kiyaa .. ThankU :D :D :D

Hugs !

BTW .. Hope everything is fine at home now !

Everything is fine Shals :)🤗

Loved Loved Loved the Update Mani ...

Hahaahhaa ... KhanaK is Smart .. Wittty ... And Doesnt Cease to Amaze Shantanu !!!!
Sigh ...

Now Next part make it Romantic ... PLEASEE !!!!

All I can say is -- I am sorry to disappoint you with a non-romantic update dear !!😉😛

Originally posted by: deepalisawant99

Ohh!! Di
gettng impatient now...
Jus can't wait to read next part...
Update soon... A romantic update where der is no rishab or soniya...
Only shanak nd der love

Originally posted by: Yasharanrocks

loved t.now waiting 2 c both feeding eachoder.plz cont soon

Originally posted by: purvi08

yipppyyy

you updated di
missed your shanak

Originally posted by: jyothi1989

mani thanks a zillion for the update . was so dieing to read one.
hayeee missed them so badly .loved their cute nokh jokhs .these two are kids man they keep on fighting loved it so much .the car convo and the almost patch up and then starting again and khanak apolgising him in the front of every one hayeee loved it u made my day dear .love u so much .hugs .now dont keep us waiting for long want u dose regularly .MRM AND TRESPO

Originally posted by: _sweetshona

Hey di..thank u so much 4 coming..and give us beautiful part...d part is superb..khanak is very smart...bechara shaan..khanakne pure shirtki vat lga di:D

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Welcome back Mani 😊 Hope ur life is back to normal..

what a way to ask Sorry by Khanak... Shanak is too good..

but I'm also disappointed tat Jai didnt tell the surprise to Shaan but to Akshay.. waiting for Khanak's reaction..

Originally posted by: Saranyacharu

Superb yaar.

Originally posted by: dishbhan

Hey Maani!
You are Back ! Yay! Hope all is well...
All is well Dish !!

Thanks a ton for the update ... Loved loved loved the part ... Shanak are awesome, their fights an convos are so realistic... kash
LIked Khanak's idea of saying Sorry in Public ... sab kuch bol diya and pata bhi nahi chala kisiko ki kuch piche hain uske!
Fantastic idea that yaar ... and shirt bhi ready tha ... what planning.. wah!

Glad that you liked it dear !!

Waiting for the part where Shaan will feed her after the fast .. rather they will feed each other as Shaan has also not eaten anything.
Haaye ! kash!
~Cheers,
Dish

Originally posted by: suchi_245

🤣 😆 what a girl and really who ever named her is apt "KHANAK"

Her comment to him about " Even monkey look smart when he wears shirt and jeans " it is so apt and 🤣

di " u r genious " ⭐️ for writing such antic dialogs

oh shaan wants to hold her tightly 😉 * so y didnt u do it dude before she can say anything or even after that also u can do it , 😡 and let her blabber whatever she wants to do*,
* mere sapne choor choor ho gaye * 😭

ok may be next update mein they both can get time for each other if they had done with their fighting 😡and can feed each other 😛 😛 * have u guys forget that u both r fasting , * , "have something before one of u faint due to less glucose in ur body * 😆
😛

and even now the suspense does not reveal about the brothers hiding the things or do i missed something 😕 , sorry if i do missed will get it after reading it again 😛

these two burthuls have to fight for every little thing, even though none of them wants to do it willingly, but that is so sweet and special about their relationship for which i fall love over them more and more 😳
😳
oh what sonya and rishabh's love chapter started , 😲 I already knew it 😆 that they will meet in teej puja and their interaction is so filmy 😉

jai and shaan's convo is always awesome di , they both r just perfect duo 😊


love savita and shaan interaction and her doubt about her little monster daughter for troubling shaan , 😆 she didnt knew ki bichare ko ab aadat hogayi hai and he loved it


oh bichare shaan ki favorite shirt spoil kardi khanak ne, bichare ko sorry bulwana bahuat bhaari pada hoga khanak se and i m dead sure he will never ask her to say sorry publicly 😆 😆


did i tell before also * let it be i want to tell again * 😆 that this is first FF where i love khanak as much as i like shaan 😊


lovely , awesome and super cute and hilarious update " Loved it "

thanx di 🤗

update as per ur wish but do continue 😊

*edited*

no i read it again the suspense is still continue about what three of them r hiding

love u
suchi

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey mani Di

Thanks a ton for updating''.really waiting for it.🤗 🤗 I have read all the previous parts thrice in these last manth. Well today your long long update is like a treat to me. Thank u. well now to I am going to make a long camment as I am super duper excited after redaing the update ( So don't make face while reading it '''..aur shanty se jel lena warna katti ).😡

Well coming back to the update''loved the start. Isssh... I was so excieted when Shaan comes towards khanak. Love their exchange of words & I just love shaan & his line is super cute when he say "I hate it when you punish this poor lip for every silly act of yours ''..dare if you do it anymore." Yaar these two can fight on any thing & every thing but the best part is both immediately regrates their behaviour & their sweet innocent apologies always makes me happy & excited.😃

Hey even I was thinking abt what is their in the bag?????😕 I actually thought there is something which she is gonna used it for her Apology. Again they had fight in the car. But I seriously loved their convo it was like Ek Sawaal Do Do Jawaab.( He..he..he.) Awww''poor Shaan khanak says even monkey will look good if he will wear a White Shirt & Jeans. Shaan is actually regrating of being angry at her. Wanted to talk to her ''.wanted to hug her '''as they both haven't spand quality time with each other since last 39 days. (poor shanak u know I feel like screaming ke akdu log khatam karo ye nautanki) But Khanak purposefully takes Rishabh's name ''.ohhh I seriously jumped on my chair (my roommate actually scold me for behaving childish at midnight but I blackmail her saying that ab mein kuch hi din to hu yaha aur phir bhi tum log daatain ho mujhe''you know I got successful first she got sad & santy & than again showed me the fake anger & said '..Praj just stop reading these things you are getting Impossible day by day) well loved their fight. Khanak gave Shaan the dose of his own medicine by taking Rishabh's name. & there she is bang on in his irritation he confessed that he is actually fasting for khanak. Loved it when shaan says he is fasting for that chowkidaars wife who look afters khanaks chapplas.🤣 🤣 (fab answer) for me their car journey was full of fun. It's actually fun reading this update ( ooohhh'''.i missed this FF badly).khanak is non stop chatter box & shaan completely love this about her & so are we.😳 😊

U know when khanak was about to ask him fthe secret behind Jay & Akshay asking them to be silent abt their relationship. But again phone rang ( yaar ab ye secret khol bhi do ya muhurt nikalwaye pandit se) Shaan is a shaitan baccha. Always throws tantrams at his family members Loved Khanak's thought process of camparing Jay & Shaan & she defines their friendship in that ( so sweet) ekksss''khanak gets emotional while thinking abt this. & shaan says she is bitten by "crying while smiling bug" 😊 he is damn cute yaar. Khanak gets excited abt hearing lock up ( khatarnaak hain ye bandi) haila mani di you are to full filmi baba'''.Rishabh & Sonya meet coz of the car ki takkar ( hey that reminds me abt the John & priyanka's first meet in taxi no 9211) & here hammer do Samaaj sevak jud gaye unke Sukhi bhavishake sapne sanjone mein. Shaan actually says "that it is not difficult to make someone fall in love with you". I can so imagine khanak's reaction on this ''''loved their convo & shaan's explanation..& there they fight again''( Oops I just don't know why I am getting exited abt their fights'..Di ur story is making me insane) 😆 😆

Haila Shaan & jay is Discussing abt someone iska matlab Jay is in Love & I am sure its Rags''.(So nayi entry '. *Taliya*). But why jay don't want khanak to know????? Or he himself wanted to tell her???? So Now Shaan maharaj is in Dharam Sankat whather to told her or not but loved his dicition of telling khanak ( atleast usi bahane hume bhi pata chalega warna ap to delay pe delay kiye ja rahe ho) Loved Shaan & Savita maa's convo''she actually loves him a lot & he truly respects her. Loved it when jay says that "he is not that 'seedha' that you think he is''" I can so imagine Shaan's expression when Maa inquired abt Khanak & her behaviour with him (chalo ek cheese confirmed after party update in next part shaan is at khansk's palce to have his fav Rajma Chawal)

Shaan is already on duty. I mean he already started praising Rishabh infrount of Soniya. (Matalab thaan li is bande ne dono ko milwaaneki) & yes Finally khanak comes. U described whole sence beautifully'''.u are awesome. Khanak plays a trick & saari haldi aur kumkum shaan ki shirt par gira deti hain. Than she ask for the forgiveness in frount of everyone ( she is a champ yaar ) loved the way she demands for apology giving no space to escape shaan from her excellent trap. Shaan alos loves her technique & forgives her. ( hush '..finally) only Jay understands whole drama behinfd this Sorry. ab ayega party update padhane mein jyada mazaa, this means now shaan have to feed her dinner by his hands ( yiiipeee'..i am excited) 😉 😉

Oh,.,.ho ab khula Paper bag ka Raaz'''..Khanak is a master planner. She reminds him that he has new shirt in his car by giving her excellent peace of presence of mind. Loved the last line. (it was super fandu yaar) ⭐️ Well sorry for the super long & Colourful comments ...actually i am damn exicted while posting it...thank u very much for the update.😳 😳

Thank u for the ling update'''love u ''u are awesome.👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼

Waiting for the next one. 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

Love U

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: khush1432

Hey Mani Di... How r u ????

Gosh I m missing SHANAK terribly'. Thanks to ur FF I can still relate to them'

Thanks a million for update''.really waiting for it. Well ur update is always relief for me'. THANK YOU DI !!!!!!

Well coming back talking about ur update''.

It is simply awesome like ALWAYS'.. 👏👍🏼

Loved their Love- fights, cute nok-jhok'. ISHMART KHANAK and BURTHAL SHAAN' Deadly combination''.. (yeh dono toh ek din meri jaan nikal kar hi maanege)

And above all ur mind-blasting dialogues :

"I hate it when you punish this poor lip for every silly act of yours ''..dare if you do it anymore."

"Do you want me to prove ownership?"

(naughty shaan' so lovey dovey'.ooyye hoooyye)

she said, "I hope Rishabh comes'''"

"What????" he came out of his dreamland''...

(Awww''poor Shaan'. I just imagine his face expressions'. Lol)

"No''''..for that security man's wife who takes care of your chappals."

(well' well' well' he is SHAAN afterall'.)

"that it is not difficult to make someone fall in love with you".

I can so imagine khanak's face on this ''''loved shaan's explanation'.. man I think he is going to be dead' afterall Khanak se panage lekar kahan jaayega bechara''.

And lastly Khanak says sorry to him according to their Challenge'. SUPERB TARIKA YAAR!!!!! I m impressed'..

Now shaan will have to feed her' can't wait for next update!!!!!!

Thank u for the update '.

U are awesome...

Lots of lots of LOVE

Gunjan

Originally posted by: jparker

Aaahhhaaa... I am going to get a drop of magic wonder... *Mani has updated another magically beautiful piece*

😍

Stupendous... this ShaNak will kill me by their tortuous fighting, bickering... sigh but she is quippy and he is super witty and together they are a bomb.. which explode right into your heart...

Haaayyy...

They are united.. their soul is one... atuned finely with each other. His thoughts more than speaking his mind and heart and her eyes echoing the same to his... Such a beautiful language and words uttered even a hundred times over mean even more each time...

Each time they speak "I love you" to the other it means even more... even if words are not necessary their admissions give a new dimension, a renewed feeling of joy and happiness.. immense satisfaction of feeling cherished and wanted...

Beautiful Mani...

Now I am sighing and waiting ke kab vrat todegi Khanak apne Shaan ke haatho...

lmao she is brilliant!! And he is utterly cute and kisshable... mwaaa...😳

Originally posted by: -Manita-

OMGGG Pranjal, You are as diligent as Suchi, when it comes to TresPro !!!

Even I cannot match the details you girls go into !!!

Your comments are awesome and make me think that I am reading another FF written by someone !!!

And making a face at your comments ??...Nahh...are you crazy ???
it breathes air into the system like Oxygen !!!

How do i end TresPro when you guys read it so religiously ???!!!!

love you 🤗🤗🤗