omg manita your ff is too good for words i have read all parts even whilst i was awol but whilst i was a lil free a thought i would comment on all the parts but you have removed them so i will give you an overview of my thoughts in a jist from what i remember. i think i last commented when khanak found out he loved her when she found her Pic in his closet, wow how much these to have come since then the amazing first date to the whole turmoil when she found out madz hit jai and the poor things going through so much pain being apart, then them reconsiling as khanak understands where he was coming from and why he did what he did but still told her the truth knowing he may lose her forever i must say he was very brave and a true gentlemen. then to the whole scandal at work and him doing his best to clear her name and rejecting a wonderful job oppertunity to stay with her. loved samir and akkys contribution and aid. then the whole moving in idea poor shaan couldnt stay angry for even a day lol, and jai finding out was another omggg moment but loved his understanding nature. now we come to this point of the ff whereby the smart lady madz is she figures out khanak to be shaans love (granted the pendent and ring did give it away lmao)
And for all ur ahem ahem passionate moments wow you know how to increase the room and inner body temperature lol, ven when Shaan has a fever he wants to get close to khanak, an I loved their whole convo on what s** means even though khanak does not think of it as a big act as they both have known each other for a long time and love each and will Marry forsociety and cultural reasons will try to resist the urge. Her taking care of him whilst he was sick was nice it's nice seeing her doing things for him as he's always trying to do things for her.
</div>i loveee this ff and rang rang mein but this one more i can connect to the characters more
<div>so thanks manita for this wanderfull ff and now i will keep up to date with the updateslol
Edited by rafia 24 - 14 years ago