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Posted: 14 years ago
I have removed all older updates...anybody who wishes to read older parts can pm me to get the link !!😊...I will be putting gist for all the older parts here !!!

Thanks for the love !!!

haven't proof - read...wrote an posted...plzz ignore mistakes😳

Trespassers Prohibited
Part 35.



Removing the part 😊
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
RB81 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani darling..
u updated..
will read n leave comments for both the parts..
*runs to read*
mani wat is this?
'How come it is raining relatives for both of us? Gosh ! I hate you''
really if i could i would beat u now for giving this nuisance to khanak..how could that bua forcibly put her decision on others..😑😑😑😑😑😑
really mani i hate u..😑😑😑 how long are we supposed to wait for the next update..how could u end it like this..mujhe abhi iska agla part chahiye..dont kill us mani..wat is the bad news that he is showing..hmmphhh...
ok chalo take ur time..before the next update i should write comments for both the prev updates..but i really hate u for ending it like this..
but love u for giving the wonderful update..
madz is really intelligent..she gave shock to both of them..mmmwwwaaa..πŸ€— πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no again i forgot...

was busy gushing sbt the epi...
sorries...

ok abt the update...

i just loved the update...

as always wat i guessed was wrong...
sunavi was nt on d door... it was sonya...

i dnt knw y bt i thot it was shaan's banglore wali gf... and as usual i was again wrong...

loved it wen shaan told sonya abt khanak... thats so sweet of him to tell everything straight away widout complicating things...

bechaari khanak kitane mushkil se she thot of bahana bt shaan told d truth... hehehe...

khanak leaving d house and den being worried for him... aww cho chweet...

sameer ki toh... he is such a budthal... he dint tell khanak abt shaan being admitted in the hospital... par uski bhi kya galati he myt hav thot listening to this khanak myt freak out or sumthing...

later when shaan gains consciousness he is worried abt khanak... hahaha so cute...

sameer pulling his leg... awesome...

madzz now knws he has a gf... ok... i wonder wat will khanak say when she cums to knw abt it...

shaan flirting wid khanak when he is sick... dats so like shaan... kuch bhi ho jaye par flirt karne ka mauka nahi chodega... heheheh...

finally khanak is cuming to the hospital to c shaan...

lets c wats in store next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
vry nyc n romantic update n wow madhvi s vry happy wth shaan n khanak's relationship dts gr8 bt wt s d bad news dt shaan shows her in d laptop pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di, πŸ€—
awesome as usual
loved their hospital interaction and madhavi is definately too smart to guess just by a look and these two r so cute , started their romance in hospital also 😲

wow how come u can write such a lovly update
every part is just too gud
love u ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awww !!

Yay !! Now Madhavi knows too...And shez happy about it...I knew ki Shaan ki side se koi problem nahi hogi...M obly worried about Khanak's dad !!
SHANAK are sooo adorable...!
I hate Khanak's bua !! Ughhh !! Such a pest she is !!
Ab kya hua??? U are ending every part in suspence...WTH is there in that laptop??? Pics??? Hospital reports??? Mail from Jai indicating sum problem???
Shaan didnt seem worried about anything...suddenly kya bad news agayi??? Is that why he said "there is a reason I am waiting for you to come..." when she was going to go to the hospital at night?? Is that why he was worried about losing her???
No yaar...Ab ye kya new musibat hai??? Sab theek kab hoga?
CONTINUE SOON !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow manidi superb update...shaan k pyaar ka sangat ka asar khanakpr itna pd gya hai ki wo bhi naughty n shaan k saath flirt krne lgi...shaan ko romance k liye 1 mauka chaiye ..kada,ring,pendant ...bt pendant k time hua nahi romance romance is supercute...madhvi to smart nikli...apni honevali bhu ko jldi phchan liya...
Manidi u r great writter ❀️
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Posted: 14 years ago
WoW!!!!!!!!!!

Loved all the Shanak moments !!!!!

Madz is happy for them ... she's such a smart woman! how come she did that mistake earlier...


What is he showing on the laptop, Akshay's business problems? STC issue? Jai ki koi news?

Yaar ... when will ya update next? jyada din tanga kar mat rakhna yaarr ...

Pls pls update soon...

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago

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