FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
After my first reading of this update, I was very blank. All overwhelmed at the emotions, the small gestures and hand-holdings and everything surrounding them...Its like being in the kitchen hearing them talk. Its like being in the drawing room with Samir. Its like being in his bedroom...you wont believe but there is a certain way I have imagined his bedroom to be ever since you mentioned it in the update where she finds out about him loving her. I was back there today imagining the sheets changed, him lying, her on the side...your writing describes all that so well.

I love the extent to which they love each other. I love the fact that they express it. I love it when the lust for each other doesn't sound wrong. I love it when it makes my beliefs about love and lust come true.

There is something magical in loving each other for so many years and being in love without each other in sight and then being in love with each other without getting out of sight.

I absolutely loved her taking care of him...and the explanation you gave for them not staying together...the kitchen talk was super awesome~!
It stems from your own beliefs, right? And I really really liked it😳
You have a gift of writing 'those' scenes.
So sensuous and blush-inducing yet at no point vulgar ⭐️

And hey, find one SK for me 😆
I wish I could analyse the way Ramani does..but for now make do with this🤓

BTW. Its rude to keep 2-3 people waiting on the door.😳 So I hope you update soon 😆

*Edited*
I have no idea why I wrote so much. Sorry!😳
Edited by vatsalya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vatsalya

I wish I could analyse the way Ramani does..but for now make do with this🤓

BTW. Its rude to keep 2-3 people waiting on the door.😳 So I hope you update soon 😆


@vatty: do i really analyse that much..i never realised..i write what i feel reading each n every line..i liked ur analysis..it was good..felt happy n was smiling reading it..even i have an image of his house in my mind n was also virtually there..

@red: for mani: i second vatty..so update soon..😃😃😃

😃😃
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81


@vatty: do i really analyse that much..i never realised..i write what i feel reading each n every line..i liked ur analysis..it was good..felt happy n was smiling reading it..even i have an image of his house in my mind n was also virtually there..

@red: for mani: i second vatty..so update soon..😃😃😃

😃😃


Its not about analysing so much Ramani, its about the fact that you write down what you felt about each and every line...and I really appreciate it. Dont take it in the wrong sense dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani di
great and amzing👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manita .. WoW !!!!
Really Touching ... The Small Gestures...The Concern ... The Care ... Everything beautifullly captured ...
Loved the Mature Talk abt physical attraction ... Loved tat you included it in your story !!!!!
The Anxiety and the Worry after Khanak knows about his parents visiting him ... beautifullly portrayed by your words !!!!
Manitaa .. You create magic ... I am speechless everytime ...
The way the story flows ... .The way you make Shanak live everyday things and worries of Life ... .B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T !!!!!
BTW ... Why do I have a feeeling that its Madz Sunil at the dooor ... and that means trouble in paradise ???????
Whatever happpens ... Dont let Shanak fight or seperate ... Pleaseee !!!!! Pleaseee ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yet another amazing update ...
thank u so much!!!
keep writing 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww another amazing update mani .loved khanak taking care of shaan .poor thing does not want to leave him but there parents .hope shaan recovers soon will wait for the next update eagerly .loved this shade of shanak
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manita *hugs*
Seems like I have so much to catch up on. I'm sorry been extremely busy with uni and exams.
I will catch up next week and comment on each...I missed two chapters from the previous thread as well :(
Anyways you take care and I'm sure you're FF is still rocking as been hearing wonderful reviews from other members,while I been missing out on your're shaan and khanak *sigh*!
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Posted: 14 years ago
How can anybody be so much in love...


Sigh


I adore your Shanak...

They r jus so madly, deeply in love that even an outsider feels that inka sirf aur sirf bhala ho...

Amazin update that was 👏

Love

Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved d update bt i m still confused y r akshay & jai insisting shaan & khanak on nt telling any1 abt dem & i hpe its samir only on the door & nt sunil & madhvi & pls continue soon

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