FF~Trespassers Prohibited~#2;Upd.49,50 - 120,121 - Page 24

Mani

Sorry for not commenting on the previous part !

I loved it to the core !

The most attracting thing was that she being and worried abt him and he being rude to her !

There was something immensely attractive abt that !

I was fainting and fainting with every line of the end of the last part !

Hotness meter can full range ho gaya !

But still not a bit of obscenity !

For a change Shaan is being a kid ! I love that exchange of their roles !

I had written the update just once on friday when u updated !

thought of reading it again before commenting but u updated the next part too.. so i had to now !

Will relish and savour and come back again !

OK now this one !

As if my fainting attacks were enough seeing the epi.. U tho started giving me full time ' thudding'

I was blushing out loud !

With each passing sentence my imagination went 😳

And yes I am not reading the last line first now !

And loved Khanak s idea of intimacy love marriage !

Very much ' U '

Infact reflects most of ur views towards those three words !

I loved those lines and wud love to quote it sometime somewhere !

And then again Shaan being a child ! he s still reasonable ! yes ! whats the point of staying away from her when he knows either of them just cant do it !


Akki and Jai s warnings are actually scary !

Is something bad coming up !

Well i know it wont last long !

Shaan and Khanak are a couple made for eachother to be in eachothers warm embrace sharing everything life throws at them be it happiness or sorrow !

Love this couple !

Love U mani

PS ... And u faint for what i write

have u read yours ... u ll never wake up !

y do i feel tht its not gonna be samir at the door?!

I am overwhelmed for some reason...mind if I comment comment later?

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ur shanak r just tooo adorable for words.i can c it happen infront of my eyes...its sooo cute...loved it mani a very good update:)

Uh-Oh !

Originally posted by: RB81

yay!!!!u updated...

*off to read*

*edited*

to get the soup fed by her he accepted that he is not well n faking very weak..just now he carried her na..naughty shaan..(dont say after carrying her u r weak now..)

arre khanak..u r too intelligent..u gave him another condition n made him drink the soup all by himself..(wat is with u haan?wat is there in feeding him soup..)

Ramani...she didn't make him drink by himself as after troubling him for a few minutes, she took the bowl from her hands and fed him...😛😉...check karo !!

wowww mani..ur description of her curl coming to her face n her unsuccessful attempt in pushing it back without using her hands..nice yaar..i started imaging that act..(sometimes we used to do that way na)

u r in killing spree today with ur descriptions..

*dies* his sly smile..him caressing her cheeks holding the curl..she sitting doing nothing..

guys often say this comment abt us.."Gosh ! How impossible you girls are?''you say something and want something else..".. so it cracked me up..used at the right place..

i'm blushing n smiling like an idiot..how silly of khanak to accuse him saying that "he doesnt love her that much now.."as shaan said a ridiculous conclusion..n when he pulled her n had his arms around her..*faints*(after live update again fainting here)

ahhh..again he called her cat..*faints again*with their passionate kiss..

(haaa..i was just thinking how could u stop with just a kiss that too holding her like this n being madly in love..)u too saying the same thing shaan..yup..u guys have gr8 self control..

ahhh..tada..he said that..*again smiling like an idiot* the convo they had over this was very nice..romantic indeed..loved it..human after all..(reminded me of simi's FF line where khanak realises her love for shaan)

where is this leading them..khanak has so much faith in his self control..she may not believe her in this as she was ready to give away while he came to see her to give her the letter in delhi..

shaan gathering for her expressions of security n faith..(it is doing something inside me mani..)i'm also impressed with ur views khanak..take a bow girl..

their convo was so lovely mani...(feeling like getting into tears with happiness..so loveable)

haa...he said abt talking to their parents abt their marriage..s..definitely they need to take their relationship to the next level..(looks like shanak marriage all around..1.aditee's CASA is hosting the 1st,jess's P & P in 15 days, simi's Human after all will have it shortly, imane's KMH too will have one soon i think n i was thinking when will TresPo's shanak married n they talked abt it today..feeling so happy for them..)

My story is not a realistic story darling😳...it is a FAIRYTALE❤️ !!!!
It will end the day Prince Charming weds his Queen of Hearts...so my story will end with Shanak Marriage !! I am clarifying this as you are the third person asking for Shanak marriage in my FF...😳...they are definitely talking about it as this shows how serious they are with the relationship and to take it ahead !!!

poor khanak..got up so early to check on his health condition..definitely she'll make a typical wife as shaan always says..lovely gesture..shaan having his head on her lap n she pressing his forehead soothingly for his head ache..

she called samir n they visited the doc..fine..atlast his fever has come down..

shaan never misses a chance to ask her to stay with him..atleast in the name of taking care of him she is here with him..i'm happy for him..

so its madz-sunil coming for surprise visit..akshay is a life saver..thank god he informed shaan abt this..its good that akshay knows abt them..else total gadbad ka possibility..but i'm feeling sad as khanak needs to leave now..n akshay also talking the same way as jai..*scratching my head again thinking of their reasons to keep their matter a secret..see if i scratch at this rate i may need medication from Dr.Manita,dermatologist*

Haillaaa...don't scratch rey...will update soon !!

khanak present mindset makes me feel real sad for her..*sighs*

the thought of missing him badly made her initiate the kiss..i expected this to happen..*sighs again*

both of them dont want to leave the other..

the door bell..it rang a bell in my heart..i feel like madz-sunil juggled with their schedule n r here to see shaan now..wat will be their reaction seeing khanak here?

overall fabulous update mani..mmwwaaa..👏 for the update..

ahhh..need to wait for another update..not liking this wait..

continue soon..y did u start MRM now..even if i like that TresPro is my prime importance..as this shanak are already on the roll..ok waiting impatiently from this moment for the next update..

*Bows*...Glad that you loved it !!!
makes me want to write more 😃😃

Mani!!🤗

yay! for update! thank you!:)