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vaish_123

@vaish_123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Saaz,

Bombay in baarish . Baat hi kuch alag hai!

Did Mumbai darshan with your story! Thank you!

meeting in Best bus stop - Brilliant.

In Shaan's words when Khanak is drying her hair in the rain standing in the bus stop

'yeduta nilichindi choodu jalathaaru vennelemo…
yedanu thadipindi nedu chinukanti chinnademo…
mymarachipoyaa mayalo…'

Brilliant again 👏👏👏

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Hayeeee I loved the bus stand pe bheegna and the cutting chai..!

Amazing......CCD ke Rajkumar ko Thele ki cutting chai pilayi Gujarati Chori ne !! LOL !

Awww......him walking away left her in tears......Kuch toh hua hai...kuch ho gaya hai !

Will wait for their ice cream date ! LOL !

I wonder whats up with this Suraj issue at work !! Hmmm !

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

thanks guys...you are the best🤗

shall post detailed thanks soon

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Saaazyyy

What to do yaar ...

I am a confused soul

i m clueless to what will happen next ...

Cant even speculate anything

I will be at more ease when i come to know abt khanak and suraj s relationship

I m as confused as shaan....

My heart goes for shaan.. hope his dreams dont lead to a big heart break

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Imane

@accountband

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Okay so finally got caught up all your awesome updates...i was behind by like 2 parts...I have been wanting to sit down with a cup coffee and read it with my undivided attention without any distractions and when I finally did read I just kept scrolling down hoping there was next was next part...LOL...

Your story is superb...I loved how you have made the connection with dreams...as Khanak truly is a dream for Shaan due to her marital status...I am loving the depth this story has...The modern touch with Sooraj and office and Khanak learning interior designing....just so well depicted, completely refreshing and relatable while reading.
My heart feels for Shaantanu but as always something about Khanak pulls me to her every now and then...the whole chai waala scene is so adorable...you have great descriptive abilities and then the transition in to reality with office issues...Again with awesome diction and I can hardly wait for this story to progress....

Also i loved the characterization of Daadi in your story... her painting gallery and the "K" reference was done with a style...Looking forward to more of this soon! Continue and keep me posted like you always do.Muaaaah!

Good Luck!
Imane

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: RB81
hei saazy,
it was nice n got finished all of a sudden..n how many next to.s yaar?i was trying to cope up with that n gave up..shanak meeting in BEST bus stop..is there a bus stop by that name r as shanak met there it became BEST?watever it was it was cute..khanak asking him y didnt he call was awesome..humare budthal tho soch raha tha kya kahoon call karke..then cutting chai was nice..but chai wala asking abt mehtaji was like ..i forgot the saying..wat is that some haldi..n wat was that abt the tender. i got lil confused..wat does this mean?
Sunil: Woh keh rahe hain ke humara tender was approved with prior information.. (if it is approved y would the investors withdraw now?r may be i understood it wrongly.pls..clarify)
hope u'll continue soon without making us wait for long..

here you go sweetie...

BEST...is the Bombay Bus company--- Bombay (now called Brihanmumbai) Electric Supply and Transport ..it is the state owned company that operates local buses in bombay...they are red and have BEST written on them...loved your 'best; becos has shanak take ...

tender approval with prior imformation: suggests that somebody leaked some information regarding the proposal for investment (tender) and it is unlawful to do so...they have come to know of this after the approval...which could put them in trouble anyway since it is illegal...now in the story...there is a possibility that maybe Suraj was responsible for this leak...

I shall continue soon...😃

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

hei saaz,
thanks for clarifying my doubts..waiting for ur update..

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Absolutely completely irrevocably LOVED the imagery you created with her colourful odhani, his white shirt and the rainbow emerging thanks to the mirrors.Loved the implication of it all.That one second beautiful moment amongst chaos and rain.Sigh.

Adore the chai scene.Being a chai lover woh bhi in barsat-just took me back to monsoon season! Also loved how you contrasted her ease with it and how it is new to him.

Leak confusion.Very nice!

You have so nicely spun the web with Suraj, Natasha, Natasha's worry and now the tender and leak.

Can't wait to read Shaan trying to separate personal feelings from business...or will he??

Cara, loving this SS!

P.S: You are solely to blame for all the fat that is accumulating on my thighs since I am reminded to go raid my freezer each time I read Rum and Raisin😡

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

hey saaz first of all i want to apologize for not reading ur ss regularly
u always read my ff regularly .....so i m really sorry

i have raed part 2 3 and 4 just now and belive me i just loved it .....
ur ss is so interesting and unique that really attract ppl to read it ...
but me always not able to read ....😳

awesome story plz continue soon thx for all ur regular pm's ...

luv zara