-SS- EK HI KHWAB -Uptd Epi Pg 32 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww....tears in her eyes.....the only thing I have to say...is Burthal...😡😆
Loved it dear....love the whole mystery surrounding her and her relationship to Suraj...and love his Kaashma kaash....brilliant that...
Can't wait for the next part fro you soon..
Oh just wanted to add..love K-Family..and loved his possessiveness that came to the fore twice...at the temple when ppl were pushing and at the best bus stop...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it ws a realy nyc part but suraj is leaking d info...........nt gud n nw i hpe nthn happens between shaan & khanak..............pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei saazy,
it was nice n got finished all of a sudden..n how many next to.s yaar?i was trying to cope up with that n gave up..shanak meeting in BEST bus stop..is there a bus stop by that name r as shanak met there it became BEST?watever it was it was cute..khanak asking him y didnt he call was awesome..humare budthal tho soch raha tha kya kahoon call karke..then cutting chai was nice..but chai wala asking abt mehtaji was like ..i forgot the saying..wat is that some haldi..n wat was that abt the tender. i got lil confused..wat does this mean?

Sunil: Woh keh rahe hain ke humara tender was approved with prior information
.. (if it is approved y would the investors withdraw now?r may be i understood it wrongly.pls..clarify)
hope u'll continue soon without making us wait for long..

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely, lovely,lovely part!!!😊👏⭐️
Haiiii!! Kya Bechainee hai!!!!!
" Ice Cream thee....to pighal gayeee.' best line.......lovely metaphor
Thanks darling!! You are just amazing!!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excilient update Sazzy..
All conv.. between shaan and khanak in bus sooo amazing and beautiful
ice cream part also very good
whole update awesome
eagrly waiting for next update😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
saaz thanx for teh pm loved shaan getting down at best and finding khanak there 😊 what is teh relatonship between khanak and suraj mehtha cant wait to know I think it cant be hubby /wife ebcause khanak is so freely talking with shantanu 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Saaaz.......................Amazing !!!!👏👏👏.........

First things first............I am amazed at the life your daadi has in this SS.....
wow..........she has friends, she giggles, painter, teaches art, gallery and what not................*claps, claps, claps*,...........

K- family bonding...........over ice cream and movie..........Bang on !!

And now Shanak --

Superb, I have no words for the scenario that you created,
BEST bus stop, chatter of crowds, rain and Cutting chai !!
tell me she is not married to this 'mehtajee'...........plzzzzz !!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part

PS - why is it an SS.....???........why not make it a long leisurely FF.........

plzzzzz think about it !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update saazy.......luvddd it...!!
Their sudden meeting..sooraj ka naam sunte hi irritate ho jaana...everything u've written beautifully..
It ws wonderful..........

Do cont. Soonn.....!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shaan is the nicest most charming guy on the planet!
I was transported to my days of living in Delhi, baarish, waiting for the bus, that yummy chai at the bus stop
SIGH!
Ekdum real life observations
The best description was a "tailor, next to the sweet shop next to the watch repair next to the"
Lovely!
Brilliant actually
You know Mumbai so well
I shud use ur expertise..... I just use the areas where Ive been to or where my family lives......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Saawan ke bin masuam ki barssat bhi....
Koi saaaz hain chedti....
Aur dhun apne aap hain baj padii...
yeh yaad tumhaari bekaraar humein hain karti...
zaalim meethi si ek chubhan hain ban ke reh jaati....
Sigh now I have become the least expected.. a shaayar!! Humph.. if you call the above lines shayari.. then chalega...
Saaaz hugs first for such a sweet novel way of Bombay darshan... the typical smells that Bombay is unique for... that hits you, that completely envelops you... sigh as I get nostalgic and miss my hometown...
But showing Shaan there.. trying to erase her from his memory.. from his heart... and again an indication from the Almighty...😳
These lines come to my mind again... lovely song that I can never forget when it rains as it reminds me of Bombay...
Rim Jhim geere saawan,
sulagh sulagh jaaye man
bheege aaj is mausam mein
lagi kaisi yeh agan....
Shaan ka yeh haal hain, aur aag dono taraf baraabar ki lagi hain...
It was such a beautiful tryst.. such a sweet chance meeting... till the chaiwalla's chilling comment doused the sizzle... sigh, am waitng too to find out when will this clear.. kab dukh ke baadal hatenge aur suraj ki krian se sab phir se jhagmagaane lagegaa....
Loved Khanak's drying up.. her little nuances like holding her chai with her odhani... 😍 I watch along with Shaan, as my heart begins to race too....
👏👏👏👏👏

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