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KrazEee

@KrazEee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

First of all Thankyou for the regular update PM's and Sorry once again for the late/no comments

you have penned down ShaNak's journey beautifully so far...Everything from their first meeting to the companies party to him been given her phone to the coincidental mandir meeting to the bus stop...She seems to appear everytime he is least expecting her...lekin why tears in her eyes in last meeting...aur he didn't even notice!!! liking the twist in the talee...so this suraj is not so 'seedha sada'.... hmm interesting...I have always liked how you involve K-family soo beautifully into the story be it Akshay or Daddi...they always have a special role to play...awesomeness!!

Shaan ki misunderstanding jaldi dur karoo...esp if Suraj is messing up the business...don't want Khanak feeling guilty for mehtaji's deeds!!

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

mujhse subah ke 4 baje likhwa rahe ho😡...shukr manao aap likhte accha ho nahi toh main shayad desk pe so rahi hoti..😳😆😆

Shaan progresses from Mithai Kumar to Ice cream...was it deliberate..the interwining of fingers n all?

plus loved the flirt that our dearie is...so typical!😆😆

then his intro to khanak also!! "hi sweetheart!" *shakes her head*

Shaan is on standby duty which he is dutifully undertaking by sitting at the breakfast table, eating toast and skimming through a bike magazine.🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Shehreela pyaar" was something I liked it a lot and I've no idea why..so dont ask.😃

thennnnnnnnnn..

use of the phone to make them meet is innovative!⭐️

Loved his relation with daadi 😃

Shaan in white kurta *dies*

*wakes up to finish the comments muttering abuses*🤣

loved loved loved the detailing of the mandir...wonderful! the lane wet due to the constant sprinkling..then the water splashing onto another's feet..beautifully picturised.😳

Again want to ask...at the mandir...was the buying of the flowers somehow related to the bangle scene in dhulwadi? or maybe am thinking too much🤣

this entire mandir sequence I imagined in my mind so clearly...it amazed me...but then its your writing, right?😳😳

your daadi is so cool! Loved her girly talk..hehe..dont kill me when I say that I imagined daadi the same as I imagine you to be🤣

*ducks*

part 4..

hayeeeeeeeee!! reminded me of the song "saavan barse tarse dil" its lovely, to say the least...baarish, cutting chai and busstop. aur kya chahiye?😍

"Ice Cream thi to pighal gayi" awesomeness.

loved the description of the streets..greeting card shop next to the flower shop next to dhobi...this was extremely striking ..loved it!😃

now some general appreciation moments..

Really really like the family bonding!! Perfect.⭐️

Love your subtle detailing..dupatta pe mirror work..he notices her payal...keeps the flowers...me likes!!

And he is so possessive!! awwiee!!

I really like your dadi too..she is so active re!!😆

And hey, Khanak isnt married to "mehtajee" itna toh theek hai...aage kab update kar rahe ho?😃

P.S..Rum and Raisin describes your SS perfectly...cuz its just as intoxicating & has that zing to it... I like both!!

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Anu80

@Anu80

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Beheta hai mann kahin,
kahaan jaante nahin
koyi rokle yahin....
Bhaage re mann kahin,
aage re mann chala,
jaane kidhar jaanu na....

Saaaz kya baath hai.. with every SS and every part your writing takes a higher and new level!!

Finally I got to read your SS- EK hi Khwab!! review coming shortly!!

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Saaz-if only u could make a scene,I would def use the entire scene for the song yeduta nilichindi choodu as vaish said.Such a beautiful scene.It goes without saying that I loved it.

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Ohh forgot to add,loved the confused tears of Khanak.Now this is killing me.I remember reading she is married and all?So waiting to see how this would go on!

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Saaazy re..aila yeh love story hain ya thriller!!Suraj kaun??m gut feeling is he her bro or a v close buddy..??chal update kar dekhti huin!

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May

@The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Excellent update Saaz👏....Can't wait to read what happens next....

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dtu

@sampar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

ok....firstly sorry for commenting soooo late....but life is taking a toll on me yaar kya karon.....but read all the parts at once .....i m soo loving this SS or FF whtever it is ....lol.....its really good yaar....

Loved shanak's first meeting ....shaan flirting..how typical of him 😆.....lakin yeh kya.....khanak shadi shuda hai 😕.....but i m loving their interaction and their journey which might lead to them getting together 😳😳😳....awwww dadi and shaan ..adorable...mandir wala scene was really good .....loved how u incorporate new and unique ideas for them to meet ...chai and rain perfect combo ...our oper se shanak saath saath tu kya he baath hai yaar .....loved the dupatta falling on his shirt...loved how u used words to described this scene ....superb...mindblowing.....but i m confused about her tears ...but woh to shadi shuda hai na ...oh well i guess next part main pata chale ga......and omg ...suraj wala twist is shocking n interesting .......lets seee.......

keep rocking girl.....its really good n interesting ....keep it up.....

cheers

shai 😉

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Ujjwala

@Ujjwala

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Beautifully written...👏

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saaaz

@saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

THANKS TO EVERYONE ESPECIALLY

@Shal: thank you so much re..am grateful for your comments are

@Adeela: Aapka compliment dil ko khush kar diya

@Cadbery: Haye'you liked those lines'I love them too..mere dimaag ki duniya mein mili..

@Angel: Hope you like the next update..Shaan has fought alright..his mind and heart..

@Neha: Sweetie update for you just because of the way you address me'ab mat kehna..ki link toot gaya'mere parts jyaada nahin hote..

@Dish: Yes..what is the future?? Probably that's what made Shaan do what he does in the next update

@Kubare: Can I ever say anything more on how happy your comments make me?

@Shiksha: Sorry re..but lot has happened between Shanak in the next update

@ Naveen: thanks to you too

@Ramani: here you go..hope you like this one too

@Simi: bechainee shayad khatam'

@Deepali: thanks re

@Shriya: thank you

@ Mani: your 'superb' brought a smile to my face..FF?? and why SS?? Yaar'it is impossible for me to have the kind of dedication you have..I run out of ideas after maximum 6 parts..

@Shama: thank you my dear..I really hope you find the next one as wonderful..

@Aditee: I knew you would appreciate those touches..yes'I love Bombay'it is closest to my heart..and I know every inch of it..I spent a lot of 90's taking buses and trains from one stop to the last stop exploring Bombay..the city is my everything

@Jess: Tere comments ke baare mein kya kahoo yaar? teri shayaree aur tera gaana'mann sulag gaya'Bombay magic'how it weaves 'while it plays cupid to all our love stories..

@Vaishu: Nuuvena'?? Usually tere comments two lines hote hain..is baar gana dedication bhi'beautiful beautiful song..have you heard it in Kanada'I love that song

@Vandooo meri bandhooo---OH GOD'CCD ke Raj kumar..yehi baaki tha..

@Priya cool: Don't worry sweetie..the confusion shall slowly disspatte..the important part is you are enjoying the ride..the destination always takes its own time

@ Imane: I am so glad to see your comments..they made me extremely happy'

@Ammu: YEH RES KYA HOTA HAI??? SS ka bada bhai??

@SYS: CARA'loving your comments'

@Zaara: no apologies needed whatsoever..read when you get time..no probs

@AG: Hmmm'don't know yet..

@Krazee: you came? Thank you re

@ VAttie: your comments really killed me..i think mostly becos I did not expect them..yes, the mandir scene was influenced by bangle scene..my stories always have golden rbo in them..in fact in this one every chapter has at least one reference if not more..thank you so much..thank you

@ Anu: Aaap aaye'bahar aayee'SS pe chaar chaand madam..I shall await with bated breath

@SMitha: I know dear..you would have done full justice to it too'I have a feeling you shall like the next part..well I hope you do

@Deepa: agla update horror hai..

@Varsha: thank you madam

@May: Thanks re

@Ujjwala: Haila'kahan thee tu? Thank you re

@SHai: FF JAHAPANAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!...Kahan ho aap?? You know how happy I am to see you here???...please come back and start another FF yaar'

ALL those who pressed like: main aage kya kahoon???

next update coming up...

Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago