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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

hei aditee,
read all the 3 parts of 17..simply superb..17C part was fabulous..how authoritatively shaan asked khanak to get rid of nirav n meet him by 8.30..loved it..hope they confess their love with ur next update..continue soon..

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

I m loving his possesiveness.. !!!!!

Awesome aditee

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Jessica

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Posted: 14 years ago

hmm.. aag baraabar dono taraf lagi hain.

It looks like the cat and mouse game is over. Stalking is more what it looks like. He is stalking her very mind... taking over her presence her every thought, deed or words.. Angry are we!? But then what do say to destiny who wants to throw the two of you together... as it has been decided that you are destined to meet...

Am falling in love with your bold blue lines... and this last one... had me... "wohoooo... what was that?! A command!! And I know these are not empty threats!! ooohh.. I am loving this...

Saree...... 😍 and that too cordinated colours... Good.. 😊

Another great update... continue soon....👏

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saaaz
muhawwhahahahahahahaha!!!!

ab aayega mazaaa.....

I agree Saaz! Aditee this update was amazing loving it!😃

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Aditee

read all the parts of 17...............

amazing & wonderful update......................

loved it..............

wow shan told her to get rid of nirav.................wonderfully described..........................

lovely...................

continue soon....................

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

She doesn remember the date when her father visited.. but he does... omg...

i had to read the second time.. to register that....

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-Ray-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saaaz
muhawwhahahahahahahaha!!!!

ab aayega mazaaa.....

yeah right!!! ab aayega mazaa....

par kab aayega pata nahi.............

aditteeeeeeeeeeeee dnt torture yaar......pls update😃

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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 14 years ago

You girls are the cutest!

Anyway

The next part shud be steamy😳😳 (ya right!)

I mean I am kidding

Will maintain the classiness of the story and no rolling in the hay!

But itni jaldi ILUs keh diya to show khatam

Jai Hind bolna padega yaar

I will definitely crank it up a notch

But no ILUs in the next one

Thats a lil much even in my opinion

It wont drag on for another 10 or 20 parts

Maybe 4 or 5 max, will end the FF (I know Ive been saying that for the last three weeks😆)

This time pakka

But the next one wont be ILU declarations

It will be a declaration of some sort

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karishma

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Posted: 14 years ago

aditeee waiting fr it pls pls pls update soon:)

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@Medusa..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aweome part aditee.........!!

Beautifully written...!luvvdd each n every bit of it...!!

do cont. soon...............

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