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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#331

Do dil mil rahe hein.....

Magar chup chupke

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by priya_cool_123 - 14 years ago

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#332

gosh...I have no words!!!

👏👏

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Aditeeeee ...

This is my first comment ... But i had to do this ....

And you know why ... because i never find any words that would do justice to your FF .... I am in AWE !!!!

Aditeee ... WoW ! ! !

Trust me ... i have read each and every part .....

And it is _________

I cant find the perfect word to fill in the above gap !!!!!!

Thats why i refrain from commenting .... Coz i m rendered completely speechless each time ...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by rbo_d_best - 14 years ago

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Aditee....loved it...

Loved how he got her to say his name...

Loved how she said his real name instead of his pet Shaan

Loved the feeling by both on saying and hearing it...

Love the song and the dedication...Hope and pray that Saaz's friend fids love a second time around too...

Loved Shaan and Khanakas reaction to the song and association with Suraj to it..

Loved his holding of her hands...so Shanak that....😉😛😃😆

Loved how he gets her to buy him coffee and food the next time around...

Loved her so comfrtable with him that she fell a sleep

Loved the Elevator rideLoved the fall so Shanak that too...😉😃😛😆

Loved her staring at his back and elevator...

Till the next update then....😃13

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

Aditee I can't do justice now, I will have to come back later!! One word Superb!! I had flutterings inside me while reading this, this is my kind a romance!! 👏

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

Hey Aditee...............

wow awesome updates..............loved the both parts..................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

the scene was actually playing in my mind..............just like i am watching the show..................

wow

lovely description....................

now i want more.............

continue soon..........................

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Thanks so much to all the 600-800 on average that read every part

Its extremely gratifying and fulfilling to write this, a simple workplace romance set in today's Mumbai.

Two people with such huge socio-economic-class differences between them, which most believe would be impossible to bridge. I am narrating a story of not only the fictional Shaan and Khanak's coming together but continue to hold out on hope for many real life ones😳😳

What would life be without fanciful, inconceivable love stories?

Thank you for identifying all the aspects that I hope you would all identify with when I write. I try to recapture everyday situations and events and describe them as simply as possible. I dont want the sorroundings or the events to overpower the couple

I thank each and everyone of you from the bottom of my heart

Thank you Saaz for sharing such a personal story about your friend

Priya,

Dishban

Ad girl

Lana

Krish

Karish

Shal (great to see you here)

Vaish

Smi

Jess

Sys

Shriya

Angel

Rupa

Gaayu

Saaz

Doc D

Souma

Vandoooo

And all the others that I may have missed unintentionally

You are making it worth every minute of the time I spend on this

Thanks very much

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#338

Hey Aditee,

Swarg ke darwaje se andar ja hi rahi thi main ... tere update ke moh mein wapas aa gayi hoon ... 😳

And what updates ya .... just fantastic !!!!

His making her take his name, her saying it so passionately..... His holding her hands without any formality, as if he had rights over her, their speaking into each others ears, having the free talk about her husband and even work..... Shaan showing chivalry in taking her things and dropping her to the house..... Her tripping and him holding her .... Haaye!!!!!!!!!

Loved everything ... Keep updating such romantic stuff and we will humbly read and enjoy them.

~Cheers,
Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago