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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

hey saaz

sorry for not commenting after each update..

but believe me, i read all the parts and i loved them..

loved the way u handled the whole thing......

i wish CVs ko atleast 10% akkal hoti..neways, the last part was cho chweet....i imagined the last shanak scene.....sry kya karu , mere dimag mein 24*7 besharmi hi chalti hai, sp abt Shanak n ----u guess dat....

btw..i m Shilpa...i think i mentioned dat before to u...but u keep on forgetting

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Saaz darling ,

Loved it....read both parts 5 and 6 in one go..... You trult are a fantastic writer dear...and the best is the dialogues used....

Lovved loved loved Akki and Shaan's talk..the use brilliant use of weather to describe all....😆😆😆too good.....😆😆😆

The morning scene..so Shaan...pretending to sleep..and waitng fro Wifey dear....😆😆

The talk she has with him regarding a boy coming with marriage proposal...superb really the play with words..the misunderstanding by Shaan...an then the emotions you showed...when she sees him eating and he realises that she is talking about Gopi and not herself...

And girl what an ending...the way you got him to realise his mistake...about what wrong he commited with Khanak....brilliant indeed..and loved that you showed that it was Sunil's idea...Gopi with Ananad I loved too...😆😆

And the end...sigh..sigh...sigh....😉😛😳😳😆😆😆😆DO I NEED TO SAY MORE...😆😆😆😆

So am waiting for that Epilogue.....girl instead of asking us....just get writing and post it!!!!!!

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KrazEee

@KrazEee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

First of all Thanks for the translations, I learnt some new words 😆

Now the updates...Part 16 - Well written once again, loved the annoyed Shaan with little kid...you seem to understand these characters better thn our CVs...rishta aya hai part is soo cutely funny, can imagine Shaantanu in that scene 😆...glad to see there is another part : )

Part 18 - I just love the way you pen down everything, loved it! esp after such a disappointing epi today...I think I should stop watching RBO and instead read FF/SS on this forum, they are wayy better!...totally loved the way he realized his mistake and the final dialogues. The ShaNak way - Super Cute!...Keep writting more, there is a brilliant writter inside you...dont stop!

Epilogue - Please do write it 😊

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

oh dear that was awesome so romantic ............

all is well when ends well .........

plz come up with some thong new becoz u r a supreb writer .......

luv zara

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: simple21
LOL I think I might wait for the epilogue😆

*runs away*

tera kuch nahee ho sakta😆

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

👏⭐️👏....Why do you always write ' Review Mandatory '?.....You know it's awesome and we love to read it😃......

Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose
👏⭐️👏Why do you always write 'Review is mandatory'.....You know it's awesome and we love t read it😃......

😆 nahin re...

review means what did you think of it??? how did you like the way shanak was potrayed? what did you think of the plot of the writing??? not enough if you love...tell me what you loved about it...sometimes what you love or what you noticed, I may not have written it from that perspective at all and hence even the comments make interesting reading and teach me so much about people's thinking...