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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

superb saaz loved both parts( read the previous part once more) thanx for the pm..😊

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Saaaaaaaazzzzz......

I am sighing!! In between those cracks which so so typically suggest ShaNak, I am sighing hai...😍

what is it that keeps them like this? I ask myself the umpteenth time!! And sigh even more. The sweet tender moments that you brough out in Part V!! Yes she knows that he is here for asking forgiveness! She understands him as he does her. So finely tuned they are with each other. but what has to be brought out in the open needs being done!! That lesson needs to be taught however big or small the error is!! It hurt her and he knows it and that is the only thing that matters. Woh ehsaas zaroori tha and you so simply painted the picture!!

Shantanu's interaction with Akshay on the phone.. mwaa!! Loved your bringing him here. Sigh thandak paiyee dil vich when i heard the "Chote"😳 As also cracked when you mention that Akshay needs to handle and take over the rest for the factory as his wofe needs to take over him!!!😆😆😆😆😆

Hilarious at such times, I cracked up with the shaadi ka prastaav!! Reminded me so much of their shaadi ke baad, suhaag raat aur sej sajaane ka scene!! 🤣 Excellently done!!👏👏😆 Love it when they are both talking about something totally different!!!😆😆😆👏

Awww, pleats mein help!! Of course help nahin kar raha tha, he was spoiling it!! Gosh that was cute!!😳😳😳😳 Ahaa, Anand for Gopi!! Excellent!! Loved the wayb you encorporated Anand in a novel way!! Never liked the fact of his having that terminal disease! Short cameo ho to kya, something like this would have been perfect, Dhhyyyaaaaammmeeeettttt (A La Saaaz ishtyle!!😉😆) Why are you not the CV re!!??!!

Hmmmm... the touching tender scene where he realises that in his anger he reprimanded himself for the grave mistake that he did. Of course Khanak has forgiven him and knows as he does too, that never shall he repeat such misgivings... sigh but it needs to come out in the open and hence thrown out of their systems!! Much needed!! Beautiful again, sweet dialogues not saying much where eyes talk the language the heart knows!! And I am in ShaNak land!!😳

Best scene of the story the end!! toopeed budthal with his exasperating Khanak!! Budthal that he is, theek se jhoot bhi nahin bol sakta!! As if sleep is the only thing on his mind!!! budthal!! But a sweet ending to a lovely new beginning. I loved it soooooo much...

Loved loved these two parts !!!👏👏👏👏 Wish such good things never end!! 😛

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Oh saaz....

d last both updates were 2 gud.....
d dialogues were awesum....
ur jst mindblowing saaz......
do write d epilogue..... Waiting 4 it....😃

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

thanks everyone for your comments...🤗 (incluidng rooji...😛)

aur rooji mentalpanti band kar 😆😆... aur tere peeche baaki jan ...mental spam thread ban gaya mera SS thread....😆...

and @simple...lady, chup chaap read the whole damn SS and post your comments...nunsenselessness ki hadh....😡😆

thanks guys...

Epilogue shall take a while, its just an idea, have not formulated it all..maybe next weekend??? and NO its not an SR2...hey ram...besharmi ki hadh hoti hai...I am very very bad at writing such stuff.😳..

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Saaz

Fitting finale.

I loved it!

I am not too big on deep emotional, "mature" "grown up" kinda love as you know so the nok jhok completely thrills me.

Mujeh bahut mazaa aata hai to see 22-24 year old behave like they should

But deep stuff was required here, so you did the right thing.

It remind me of the wonderful things they could have done with Dhulwadi......... sigh!

Anan for Gopi is a great choice, albeit a lil mature.

I HATE TERMINAL ILLNESS stories. THEY DO NOTHING for me.

Thanks for the above. Will remember this instead of the thing shown on TV

But loved the verbal sparring in the beginning and in the end.

I will be unable to forget the word "burthal" in my life

For that matter I will be unable to forget this couple.

They brought me the best love story on TV in the last decade.

If I could pick and choose, I would take all the nok-jhok interactions from your FF and fund a new show!

Love

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Hi Saaaz
Loved it
Superb ending
Please write the epilogue
Thanks
Take care 😊

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: saaaz
thanks everyone for your comments...🤗 (incluidng rooji...😛)

aur rooji mentalpanti band kar 😆😆... aur tere peeche baaki jan ...mental spam thread ban gaya mera SS thread....😆... what don't tell me u hated that? i gave a pizazz to ur thread ok! Thanks bolna ka zamana hi gaya😆

and @simple...lady, chup chaap read the whole damn SS and post your comments...nunsenselessness ki hadh....😡😆

thanks guys...

Epilogue shall take a while, its just an idea, have not formulated it all..maybe next weekend??? and NO its not an SR2...hey ram...besharmi ki hadh hoti hai...I am very very bad at writing such stuff.😳.. no I want the SR2...mujhe piyaas bhujani hai apni😆

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: vatsalya
I'll post later....too overwhelmed...dobara padh ke aati hoon😳

hello pray overwhelmed by what?😕...your exams???😆

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

LOL I think I might wait for the epilogue😆

*runs away*

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Awww!!! Saaazyyy!!

Damn cute and sweet!!! sone pe suhaaga!! Aam ka achaar and gulaab jamun!!! yum, yum!! Want to hv them for B'fast, lunch and dinner!!!:) Love yr Shanak!!:)

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