-SS- Tum Pukar Lo Updated Epi Pg 26 - Page 15

saaazy i am very sorry dear... couldn comment earlier... i read the last three parts now... loved it...its the way it should have actually been on the show... u expanded the 3 mins of apology into a wonderful and meaningful ss.... loved eevry bit of it... from khanak thadpaofying shaan...to the final moment when the realisation strikes him... brilliantly done....

wow..............Saaaz🤗

Awesome Saazz 👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: saaaz

BTW I don't remember the last hindi parts...lol also ur love was shown to me in the form of another song. lol.................

ur last part deserves my Red comments🤣

Final Part

The next day, Shantanu tries to get back from the factory as soon as he can, his work here is almost done, now time for Akshay to take over from here, and his wife to take over him. He hurries towards the school to pick up his wife, and tell her, implore and plead that its time to go back. He looks at his watch, he is afraid he is late. obviously he will be late in ur SS gunah kiya hai late toh hona hi hai🤣

And late he was, as he enters the house, but in time, to watch his wife pleat her saree. He leans on the door with his arms crossed, and he catches her eye in the mirror across her. He smiles and lo and behold, she smiles back. That smile which has always ended in the ringing laughter that has kept him alive for the past month, that smile, through her eyes touches his heart and makes his life complete. awww so cute...man ur Khanak is like TV khanak now

Shaan: Tayar ho gayee? haan haan...pleat toh automatic lapat gayi na?🤣

Khanak: (shifting sideways from the mirror and lifting her pleats): Haan, bus yeh '

Shaan: Main madat karoon.. even ur Shaan is naughty...kya chakar kay hai boss? do u like KT all of a sudden?🤣🤣🤣

Khanak: Jee?

Shaan: (already on his heels, in front of her feet, holding her pleats and clearly not knowing what to do): Kya aise, Khanak? ahem...what did i say? waise Shaan besharam toh hai hi...ab aur kya kahon?🤣

Khanak: (with a smile): Aap chodiye, kya kar rahe hai aap, madat ya bigaad rahe hai fai bola, fai bola🤣

Shaan: (gets up and watches her side profile in the mirror): Waise tho tum badi hot lag rahee ho aur nahi toh kya bandar lage gi? Khanak hai woh! hot nahi lage gi toh kya lage gi?🤣🤣

Khanak: (a little out of her element, bashful): Woh aaj ladke walle aa rahe hai na'

Shaan: Haan bhai, yeh sajna dhajna tho baaki ladkon ke liye ho rahee hai'. i got a song for that..."Sajna hai mujhe, sajna ke liye"🤣

Khanak: (the proximity affecting her more than usual): Jee'?

Shaan: (looks into the mirror and collars up): Waise bolo, main kaisa lag rahaa hoon?? Ladke wallon ke liye??

Khanak: (regains some composure, turns and looks at him through the mirror, scrunches her nose): Aap bahut tooped lag rahe ho'.and sprints out of the room'.. the best dialogue of the century! I missed that...good touch saazy!

Shaan: (fists and leans onto the mirror, the one where it all began): Beta Shaan, woh 'teri' biwi hai'itna aasaan tho ho hi nahi sakta' haan ab aya na line pe...btw nice touch with the mirror part...i liked that i immediately remembered the old days

The athmosphere in Gopi's house is one of trepidation. Khanak was getting Gopi ready while Radha bua was offering chai and eats to the guests. Shaan was smiling at the whole scene, finding it cute and was also taking his time checking out the potential groom. So this is the boy who Gopi has given her heart to, not bad'not bad at all. what is with Shaan...never seen this before?

He makes small talk when Anand asks him regarding the upcoming factory, but the entry of their hearts into the room makes both the men get up from their seats and as Khanak seats Gopi down, Shaan pats Anand on his shoulder. Small talk ensues' wah kya entry li hai! superb!🤣

A's father: Haan, hamein tho pata bhi nahin tha ney, key Anand ko koyee ladki pasand hai, varna tho hum pehle hi aa jaate.

A's mother: Waise tho hum ko aana hai phirse kyunki ladki ke bai aur aada nahi hai ney,,lekin hum iss gaanv mei doosre kaam ke liye aaye the, tho socha ladki se milke jaaye.

ok don't whack me but this whole thing reminded me of that rishta scene in K3G when those ladke walley came to see Rukhsar and that mother said "yeh toh phir bhi Chandani Chowk hai" such attitude...

Khanak: Koyee baat nahin chachee

Radha bua: Haan, waise bhi Khanak aur Shantanu Gopi ke didi aur bha se kam nahin hai.

(Shantanu suddenly looks up and gives an overwhelming smile to Khanak who smiles back at him) awww so cute...u were an idiot Shaan a pure idiot!

Radha bua continues..

RB: Gopi bahut honhaar hai, ghar ke saare kaam kar leti hai aur yahaan tak to woh padhai mein avval hai, jiske ghar jayegee, khushiyaan leke hi aayegee..

A' mother: Waise tho ladkiyon ki koyi kami nahin hamare Anand ko, bus pata nahin..

can i just say I hate her!😡 I had an encountered with such lady when she called my house one day inquiring bout me and then stating that girls shud stay at home and not work...

A's father: (interrupts): Anand ki naukri sheher mein lagne wali hai, waise tho woh gaanv mahine mein do baar aata jaata rahega, aapko is baare mein aapatti tho nahin

Everyone exchanges concerned looks, before anyone can say anything, Gopi pipes up..

Gopi: Main samjhi nahin, mujhe sheher jaane mei koyee aapatti nahin hai.

A'mother: Hai daiya, tu kyun sheher jaayegee? Ladkiyon ki jagah sasuraal hota hai

Gopi: Lekin main sheher jaake aage padhna chahtee hoon

A'mother: Kya? Yeh baat tho hamein kissi ne nahin batayee..

Gopi: Anand, tumne ..??

A'mother: Baap re, shaadi ki baat bhi nahin chal rahee, aur yeh ladki mere bete ko naam se pukar ti hai'main tho pehle se hi keh rahee thee'ki ladki mere bete ko istamal kar rahee hai..

A'father: (gets up): Humein yeh sab bilkul acha nahin lagaa

A' mother: main na kehtee thee ke ladi ke chal chalan'.

see what i mean...i hate them...ugh! sadly such people exist!

The athmosphere in the room has moved from trepidation to tension, Khanak is trying to calm Gopi;s tears and Radha Bua is flabbergasted, while the parents of the boy leave no stone unturned in expressing their doubts on Gopi's character, while one young man in the room is silent, the other young man fists, fumes finally bursts'

Shaan: (walks towards them and pointedly): Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe hai aap? Aap ko pata bhi hai aap kya bole jaa rahe ho? Ek ladki ki baare aap aise baatein kaise kar sakte ho?

He suddenly walks towards Anand'

Shaan: Aur tum'tum aise chup kaise reh sakte ho? Tum Gopi se pyaar karte ho, aur woh tum par kitna bharosa kartee hain'aur tum'uskii beizzati ho rahee hai'aur tum chup chap kadhe hoke tamasha dekh rahe ho'kaisa pyaar hai tumhara? Jab vaqt aaya tab tumne uska haath pakadne ke bajai, bharosa thod diya'arrey 'jo insaan apni biwi ki izzat nahin kar sakta, bharosa nahin kar sakta ya bharosa pe khara utar nahin sakta'tum tho uske pyaar ke layak nahin ho, tum Gopi ke layak nahin ho.

great speech Shaan but ummm buddy u did the same didn't u? different situation but the same behavior like Anand...

btw what do u have against Show's Anand that u had to make him look like a weak person?🤣

'turns pointing to Gopi 'and suddenly sees his wife'.his wife who has tears running down her eyes'his wife who has heard him say that a man who cannot respect or trust is unworthy of love'is unworthy'he ends with a whisper, KHANAK''

"Zor ka jhatka hai zoron se laga"🤣🤣🤣

SHANTANU, she says'renders him into a daze, a daze that reminds him of so much that he has buried; his actions, his inactions, his arrogance, his anger, his ignorance, his impulsiveness and the next thing he knows, he is seated on the charpoi in the front yard of Khanak's parents' house and Khanak is seated on her knees in front of him on the floor'not caring how he got there, he wants absolution'.

awww such a cute scene...it took me a while to realize their position and then i questioned myself why do it this way? why make him sit on the charpoi and her on the floor? till i read the next part...

Shaan: (softly): Khanak maine kya kar diya??... haan haan ab ayi na akal thekane pe...

Khanak: Shaantanu, aapne'

Shaan: Nahin Khanak, tumhe pata hai, jab main Bombay se nikla, tho mere mann mei sirf yehi baat thi, ki main Khanak ko mana loonga'lekin kabhi yeh nahin socha, ki maine tumhare saath itna bada ' Kya tum mujhe kabhi maaf kar paoogee Khanak?

Khanak: (holds his face and wipes his tears): Maine tho aapko ussi din maaf kar diya, jab wahan (pointing to the front yard) khade hoke, aapne meri taraf dekkhe poocha, kaisi ho tum?

Shaan: (holds her face, wipes her tears): Lekin kyun..tumne maaf kyun kiya'Khanak? Kyun?

Khanak: (touching her forehead to his): Kyunki aap mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain'aur aap mere bina reh nahee sakte'

r u serious? where is the whole making him pay for this? lol neways im glad u took this issue seriously i was fed up of the way show was going...but whatever...i can fulfill my dream here🤣

Meanwhile, outside at a distance from Gopi's house, under a peepal tree in front of the village temple,

Anand: Arrey baap re, main tho darr gaya tha, ki kahin tere Shantanu Bha mujhe kahin maar na daale'. was this a plan? lol

Gopi (giggles): Haan, tum tho bahut darre huye the'aisa lag raha tha ki tum kaanpte kaanpte wohi gir vir tho nahin jaaoge'

Anand: (sulks): Itna bhi bura haal nahin tha, woh tho tumhare Shaantanu Bha ke charche bahut sune hai na'

Gopi: Darr tho mujhe bhi lagaa tha jab woh achanak ekdum se chup ho gaye, Khanak ko dekhte hi reh gaye, unka jaisa pyaar maine zindagee mein kahin nahin dekhi'

Anand: Pyaar dekhni cheez thodi hotee hai'mehsoos kiya jaata hai.. (holds her hand)

Gopi: Chup! Waise tumhe manna padega, Sunil Aada ka tarkeeb kya rang laayee'haina?

i so knew it! this was a plan!

The charpoi has made its way back into the house. Shantanu is lying down on it with Khanak resting her head on his chest and fiddling with his shirt buttons..

awwww such a cute scene...lol how is Shaan controlling it?🤣

Shaan: Khanak, chodo na'sone do mujhe.. really Shaan? really? no comments....this is from the same betaab guy who was trying to have a SR first time around and actually went crazy when Khanak tried to help him🤣

Khanak: KYA?

Shaan: (waving his hands): Aur nahin tho kya, pichle do raaton se tumhari pratha aur machar mujhe sone kaha diya.. a serious bhurtal...Saazy I can't believe u didn't make this a besharami one🤣

Khanak (half seated): aur main jo ek mahine se theek se soyee nahin aapki intezaar main uska kya? exactly! See even Khanak wants more🤣

Shaan: (raises his head and points): Oh Hello, main tumhe bataa doon, pichle ek mahine se main raat ko kya, din mein bhi apna santulan kho chooka tha, uska kyaaa?

Khanak: Arrey, aapke yahan tho (counting her fingers), mummyjee, aada, Akshay bha, Bhabee sabhee the aapka khyaal rakhne ke liye, main yahaan akeli thi, uskaa kyaa?

Shaan: (now is half seated himself): Please haan'just to let you know, ghar ke saare log apni own duniya mein mast the, in fact jab main subah uthta, ghar ke log gayab ho jaate the'

Khanak: (pointing her finger at him and neighing): Aaaaiieaaa!!! Jab aap subah uthte the'matlab ki aap sote the'. good girl Khanakri...

Shaan: (pulls the blanket on top of himself and falls back on to the bed): Yaar, Khanak, tang mat karo yaar, main tumse baat nahin karna chahta' really? no betaabi shaan?🤣

Khanak: (smiles): Burdthal!

Shaan: Kya kahaan?

Khanak: Boo-dd-thaa-l'burdthal..

Shaan: (suddenly gets up, pulls her and pins her below him on the charpoy): Phir se kaho'(kisses her forehead)

Khanak: (smiles): Burdthal..

Shaan: Phir se kaho (kisses her nose)

Khanak: (softly): Burdthal

Shaan: Phir se kaho (kissing her cheeks)

Khanak: Burdthal..burdthal..

Shaan: Hoon na main tumhara burdthal, Khanak'sirf tumhara'

Khanak: Haan aap mere hi burdthal ho'hamesha ke liye! awww so cute...

BTW saazy...u shud've bhujao our piyaas of the whole SR2 why leave it like that?🤣

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I have an idea for a small epilogue, if interested, shall post. why shudn't it be written and posted? is this a dhamki?🤣

Review Mandatory. I'm not taking ur Dhamki! I demand a post warna meri yeh mehnat bhaad mein gayi! I took my studying time out to read ur SS ok! Warna tera tormenting idea waapis aajata🤣

So I got a song for ur SS and that Dhamki and our SR2 betaabi...

saazy...neki aur pooch pooch..offcourse we want that...luv u 4 this awesum OS...

Saaz,what can I say?Absolutely beautiful and just out of this world.OMG!!I have no words really.WOW!!!I can't help but think 'why couldn't have they shown it this beautifully and realistically?'Awesome!

thanks smithee...ur the only one who loved it so far🤣

How can I not lol.I agree with you,Saaz should have bhjao our pyaas with full fledged SR2 lol and SIlsila yeh Chahat ka....nice song lol.

Rooji..kya re..itni acchi post kaise karti hai...🤣...and silsila yeh chahat ka...OMG..hum bhi to yehi chahte hai k in dono ki chahat ka silsila yuhi jaari rahe....