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hi saaaz.............
awesome update loved it..........🤗
i loved the way u stared the beginning.
The morning rays hit Shaan through the blanket forcing him to peep over the blanket and just as he is about to turn his side, his eyes fall on his beautiful wife praying at the tulsi plant in the front yard of the house.
n loved the akki n shaan convo........n line ........u r becoming like dad........
n the part where khanak goes to school with bhavesh..........shaan's reaction.........was amazing...very well described..........
n loved the shanak.........n where khanak says rishta.........shaan is thinking that she is talking about herself.........😆 n when he hears gopi's name..........he ie is happy n hugs khanak...........😉👏...........n after that she continues.........loved it..........
n thanks 4 pm...............
update soon.....
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